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More Than a Feeling
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Bette walked closer to Tina, very bewildered. She quickly glanced at Dana, who had a big goofy smile on her face. Whats going onoh my God Tee! Bette shouted louder than she meant to, finally seeing the welt on Tinas cheek and the cut on her lip. What happened? Unable to stop herself, Bette put a hand to Tinas injured cheek, slightly grazing the mark with her fingertips.
Tinas eyes fluttered at Bettes touch, feeling heat rush to her face. It-its nothing. She pulled her head back, unable to look Bette in the eye.
Who did that to you? Bette said as the anger rose inside her. She immediately looked at Eric, who seemed to be sleeping. He had his headphones on and his eyes were closed, so it looked like he was sleeping. Ill kill him. Bette gritted her teeth, feeling hot tears rush to her eyes. I should have gone with her.
Whoa, Bette no. It wasnt Eric. Dana answered for Tina, completely confused by and interested in what was happening between them. Itit was Shane.
What? Bette turned sharply to Shane, who only slouched further in her seat, crumpling up more paper balls. Then she turned back to Dana. Hey wait awhatareare you and Tina–
Dana nodded, laughing. Yeah. We talked.
Im so sorry Dana, I know how it feels–
Bette was stopped when Dana put a hand up and shook her head. Its okay. Water under the bridge and all that other stuff.
Bette smiled at Dana for a second, relief washing over her body. Then, she crouched down, setting her books on Tinas desk for a moment. Tina still hadnt looked at her, and her hair had fallen over her eyes. Are you sure youre okay?
Recovered, Tina finally looked at Bette and smiled. Yeah. Im fine. I promise.
Okay. Bette smiled back, standing up again. She turned back to Shane, her eyes shooting daggers at the girl. She sighed, beginning to stalk over to Shane, ready to box her ears.
Bette. Tina called out and Bette turned.
Dont go crazy. Shanes pretty cool.
Tee, she punched you in the face.
Hey, Im fucking sitting right here. Shane butted in, sitting up straighter in her chair, earning another icy glare from Bette.
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thanks for this. post more soon please, come friday night quick :D
Honestly, I’d be like Tina and be pretty clueless. No lie, a girl would have to practically hit me over the head with a hammer for me to realize she’s into me. Anyway this group thing might work. Bette and Tina could go off a bit and do their own thing if they want.
interesting indeed cant wait
Nice story! Very curious what friday night will bring. :D
This story is so good. Can’t wait to see what’s next!
Awww… They are so cute and young! lol.. Bring it on! Love it
Holy cow Tomorrow is Friday. I sure hope that the girls get together and enjoy the night. Maybe Tina will realize that it is Bette that she really wants to be with.
Bring on friday night!! love it, plz continue, i need another dose of a great story.
I am so addicted to this story. Here’s an example of how hurting I am -Yesterday I found myself just staring at the screen on my laptop because I had anticipated you posting. It was as though I thought that if I stared at the screen on my laptop long enough I could will a chapter of More Than a Feeling into existance…as you know, it didn’t happen. However, this chapter shows me that the wait wasn’t in vain. Fan-fucking-tastic! Please post soon. Memo to Tina: As Martha Stewart says, “It’s a good thing!” Memo to Bette: Turn on the charm so that Tina comes aboard the S.S. Bette.
Indeed, bring on friday night! Can’t wait to see what’s going to happen, just some B&T loving would be great ;), Post soon please!
OMG this is Exciting!..the chapterz jus keep gettin bedda&bedda..swt Bring on Friday night! It is SO a date..Lookin4wrd2ur nxt update!! Love the strie! Thnk u4anutha Excellent chap Manda..Please Post soon I hope//Keep up the grt wrk
Please let friday night come fast LOL… Great update.. i love this story!
this is my first time comment but have been reading every chapter. I have to say that I am really enjoying this story.
Hey glad u found time to post a new chapter, can’t wait for friday’s date post soon.
“this is just the product of learning Dana, Bette and Alice are gay. You feel left out.”This made me laugh.
I’ve enjoyed many stories but only few of them got me so addicted and yours is one of them!!! You used to post more often at the beginning!!!! I spent the whole week looking for a new post, it’s ridiculous! i should be paying more attention in my job! lol, keep it up, you’re writing a wonderful story.
oh, i can’t wait for friday night..post sooner though, like tomorrow…can’t wait for B&T to connect more….it’s so exciting
I hope Tina don`t freak out about her feelings cause she is in love with Bette i know that! great post i`ll be waiting for the next post. Do you think that in friday night B&T can have a kiss? please!
Glad everything turn out good and can’t wait to see Friday. Ok post soon please, thanks!
And this is one interesting story – like the girls Friday night is going to be very interesting….I can’t wait :o)) And you gotta love Dana for just saying “Do you know that Bette has a crush on you?†LOL that was so great. Please post soon – I love this.