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More Than a Feeling
Bring it on jock strap. Shane shot back, standing up.
Bette clicked her tongue on the roof of her mouth, grabbed Shane by the shirt and pulled her back into her seat. Sit down.
That mother–
Im not finished with you yet. Bette shook her head. How old are you?
Sixteen.
And youre a
Freshman, look, what the hell do you care huh? Shane ripped her shirt from Bettes grasp.
I want to help you out here Shane. You dont do well in school, and you can kiss the rest of your life goodbye. Is that what you want?
I dont give a shit.
Yeah well, thats your problem. Bette slid the textbook back on to Shanes desk. Now I know that Math is the last thing you want to do, but you have an hour here after school every day for the next eight weeks. Why waste it?
Id rather shove a pencil in my eye.
Bette didnt miss a beat. That would be a waste of a perfectly good pencil.
Shane smirked. Shes pretty cool.
Just, think about it.
Shane rolled her eyes behind her sunglasses. Whatever.
Bette turned to look at Tina, who whispered something in Danas ear, making her laugh. She was glad that Tina and Dana had made up; Tina was so unhappy all that time, it broke Bettes heart. With that problem out of the way, maybe now Bette could start to really get close to Tina without any distractions.
The teacher mustve been on some sort of biological clock, because the moment the hour ended, he folded his newspaper and shut his radio off. All right. Detention is over. You may all leave now.
Bette, Shane, Tina and Dana stood quickly while Eric struggled to pull himself upright. Observing his cautious, slow movements, Bette whispered, Jesus, you really kicked him huh? She couldnt help the smile that spread across her face.
I went David Beckham on his ass.
Bette only laughed as the four girls filed out into the hallway. Shane turned to Tina. HeyIIm sorry for hitting you. Sometimes I just swing without looking, you know? Shane scratched the back of her lowered head, looking up at Tina with sincere eyes.
Its okay. Tina said, patting Shane on the shoulder.
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(48 votes, average: 3.71 out of 5)
thanks for this. post more soon please, come friday night quick :D
Honestly, I’d be like Tina and be pretty clueless. No lie, a girl would have to practically hit me over the head with a hammer for me to realize she’s into me. Anyway this group thing might work. Bette and Tina could go off a bit and do their own thing if they want.
interesting indeed cant wait
Nice story! Very curious what friday night will bring. :D
This story is so good. Can’t wait to see what’s next!
Awww… They are so cute and young! lol.. Bring it on! Love it
Holy cow Tomorrow is Friday. I sure hope that the girls get together and enjoy the night. Maybe Tina will realize that it is Bette that she really wants to be with.
Bring on friday night!! love it, plz continue, i need another dose of a great story.
I am so addicted to this story. Here’s an example of how hurting I am -Yesterday I found myself just staring at the screen on my laptop because I had anticipated you posting. It was as though I thought that if I stared at the screen on my laptop long enough I could will a chapter of More Than a Feeling into existance…as you know, it didn’t happen. However, this chapter shows me that the wait wasn’t in vain. Fan-fucking-tastic! Please post soon. Memo to Tina: As Martha Stewart says, “It’s a good thing!” Memo to Bette: Turn on the charm so that Tina comes aboard the S.S. Bette.
Indeed, bring on friday night! Can’t wait to see what’s going to happen, just some B&T loving would be great ;), Post soon please!
OMG this is Exciting!..the chapterz jus keep gettin bedda&bedda..swt Bring on Friday night! It is SO a date..Lookin4wrd2ur nxt update!! Love the strie! Thnk u4anutha Excellent chap Manda..Please Post soon I hope//Keep up the grt wrk
Please let friday night come fast LOL… Great update.. i love this story!
this is my first time comment but have been reading every chapter. I have to say that I am really enjoying this story.
Hey glad u found time to post a new chapter, can’t wait for friday’s date post soon.
“this is just the product of learning Dana, Bette and Alice are gay. You feel left out.”This made me laugh.
I’ve enjoyed many stories but only few of them got me so addicted and yours is one of them!!! You used to post more often at the beginning!!!! I spent the whole week looking for a new post, it’s ridiculous! i should be paying more attention in my job! lol, keep it up, you’re writing a wonderful story.
oh, i can’t wait for friday night..post sooner though, like tomorrow…can’t wait for B&T to connect more….it’s so exciting
I hope Tina don`t freak out about her feelings cause she is in love with Bette i know that! great post i`ll be waiting for the next post. Do you think that in friday night B&T can have a kiss? please!
Glad everything turn out good and can’t wait to see Friday. Ok post soon please, thanks!
And this is one interesting story – like the girls Friday night is going to be very interesting….I can’t wait :o)) And you gotta love Dana for just saying “Do you know that Bette has a crush on you?†LOL that was so great. Please post soon – I love this.