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I thought we could spend the evening together… PT21
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I thought we would spend the evening together PT 21
Previously As Bette walked toward the bedroom talking to Tina about their evening she turned the corner to see the most glorious sight, she stopped suddenly, to just look, her eyes adjusting to the dim light, the moonlight shining through the French doors, casting a celestial aura over the naked sleeping blonde figure, it took Bettes breath away, the pale sheet loosely covering Tinas lower body, her moonlit breasts rising and falling as her breathing relaxed into gentle languor, she would store this unique vision in the memory bank of her mind forevermore, she slowly walked toward the bed, seemingly floating in the lake of their bedroom, she tenderly stroked the blonde hair, whispering her love.
She quietly undressed, leaving the sexy black leather trousers and the erotic sheer top draped over the chair, eager to join her love in the serenity of their joint slumber, her arm encircled Tinas shoulder, Tinas head rested upon Bettes chest, an instinctive action of when they met in the middle of their bed, their sanctuary, the priory of the life they shared, the perfect ending to a perfect day, wrapped in the arms of the woman they loved a little bit more than they did when they awoke that morning.
Tinas blonde hair feathered the pale cotton material, her cheek resting against the cozy soft pillow, her eyes still closed with the cocoon feeling of sleep surrounding her, a warmth traveled through her body, her lids giving signs of rapid eye movement behind, her senses being awakened, her slumber disturbed, her body registering that restful sense that shed had a long deep rejuvenating sleep.
She slowly opened her eyes, blinking, adjusting her sleepy eyes to the morning light, she smiled to herself as the expectation of looking into the eyes of her love invaded her thoughts, but she was met with the vision of an empty pillow
Her senses became slightly muddled, she blinked her eyes once again, to clear the fuzziness that was invading her mind, her breathing was shallow, but why, she had just awoke and she felt like she was floating, her body felt hot, her heart was beating fast, she arched her back as an unexpected orgasm ripped through her body.
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great chapter gald tina got her dislikes out about melvin but why did bette walk away
Bette’s dislike is that she doesn’t like Tina shutting her out when things aren’t perfect and then SHE walks away when Tina states her dislike? Be careful what you ask for, Bette…this was your idea. Her behavior’s gutless, both when Mel’s around and now that Tina’s called her on it.
Wow – that was a GREAT chapter and the test is a great idea for any couple (who can handle it). Keep it up!
Okay, I’d say their time at the beach is over. Pack up the Saab and head home ’cause it looks like the dinner conversation will be minimal and there won’t be a romp in the hotel room they’ve booked. My Lord, I love this story Jobadge. I like how you’re balancing the good with the bad. You hear that, Ilene? Balance! I pray time allows you to post very soon.
how could u leave me hanging like thattttttttttt
Bette and Tina actually talking–what a novel idea. To bad a certain writer of the show didn’t think to have them do that. I loved this chapter. You continue to astound me with you writing. Hope you can post another chapter by this weekend, because something tells me we won’t be getting another chapter from you and your writing partner this weekend.
Outstanding chapter, Jo. It’s funny B´t†pushes to have this convo and doesn’t like it when Tina is truthful. And it’s true. For the most part, Bette let Melvin treat Tina like crap and only at the end defended T.
They should have done it with the “like” statement being the last statement, or add a “love” statement at the end. That way it wouldn’t leave the “negative” statement at the top of their thoughts for 24 hours. Funny how the first thing Bette does is “shut out” Tina – the thing she dislikes when Tina does it to her. Jo, I so love this story. Please don’t let this ruin their time together this weekend.
Wow…that was an amazing chapter. Bette needs to remember that this is something she really wanted to do. She must also remember that the she must listen to what she’s being told…if you stand too close to the flame you aren’t always aware of the heat and danger. She needs to go back and let Tina finish. Thanks for the great chapter…please continue.
Oh shit Bette walk away, hope she will come back and work thing out with Tina. OK post soon please, thanks!
great chapter…i wish bette wouldn’t walk away though…because it will make tina think that bette doesn’t really want her to share things…she should come back and talk
Oh man, that last statement of Tina’s hit Bette between the eyes. Here Bette is trying to hold onto the only family that she had growing up and now to find out that Tina struggles with how she is treated when they are around Melvin. Melvin was always mean to Tina. I got the feeling that nobody was good enough for his Bette and that Bette had to live with that all of her life. Now, the one person that matters more to her than even her own life is opening up about her father. Thanks for this post and I hope that both of women will be able to come to understand each other better by the end of test.
Powerful chapter! Perfect again.
Great chapter! I loved how you got these two talking some more. Also I just want to point out that I liked the fact that you Bette wanting to do these questions. Everyone seems to forget that all of season 1 and some of season 2 Bette went to ALL of the therapies Tina wanted her to do. She couldn’t have not gone. And despite how many people have viewed it, she participated in them. Good job. Sorry to see Bette needing to escape but that is understandable when she just heard Tina’s dislike. and while true…(even though you haven’t re-written the scene of Melvin, Bette, and Tina yet..) it is obvious how Bette treats Tina when Daddy is around. It actually is very familiar to how many guys treat their girlfriends when their mommy is around:) I just hope Bette can see beyond that and go back to the weekend until they can talk about later, 24 hours right?
Hey mate – I’m so glad to see a post from you again (doing my happy dance :o)) This was truly a beautiful chapter but not quiet what I expected, especially the way it ended….very very emotional and powerful is the best way to describe it, but I loved it as usual. I’m always looking forward to you posting (you know that), but the next one, I’m sure you will knock me down the chair and I can’t wait LOL….please don’t let us wait to long, I’m dying here!!!!! Take care
go Tina go, Bette will be back and she’ll apologize, and not only promise to work on it, BUT WILL WORK ON IT. It’ll be also good for her to tell Melvin where he can shove it, if he doesn’t respect there relationship.
Wow! this is a great chapter! tina’s dislike … wow! didn’t see that one coming! I was wondering what each was going to say, but nice!!! plz post soon!
They just keep on coming…dont they….one amazeing chapter after another….Ok i loved the early morning wake up call!!! a little crual of you though to let us think that Tina wasnt happy with Bettes efforts…lol…BUT Your forgiven..because the rest of this chapter was so…great…they have so much more to work on..and the idea of doing the test was a brave one!..I have to admit i had a lump in my throat by the end…i didnt just like this, i loved it.
Wow! I think Tina was right that the lesbian test was going to be harder than Bette thought. I know it would have me nervous!! Thanks!!
Oh Dear – Bette walking off – thats constructive – i hope T can work it out with her.
I don’t like how Bette treats Tina either when Melvin is around…and the plot thickens.
totally brilliant from you yet again Jo. Your dialouge was so emotional an full of love — every chapter you post leaves me in deeper awe of your talent.