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Like A Fairytale, chpt 4
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Once upon a time on Like A Fairytale:
Forgetting their former conversation Tina ran off to go hide as Bette started to count:
10!
The brunette couldnt get past their conversation they had been having so easily
9!
Her heart was a little heavy by the thought of a king
8!
She just didnt want to lose her best friend
7!
Would that be it?
6!
She covered her face in her hands,
5!
to hide a tear that was rolling from her cheek
4!
She knew why she was crying
3!
It was her only secret in the whole wide world
2!
She hadnt told Tina or everybody else
1!
The strange feeling she had for the princess
0!
Here I come!
And the ladys maids daughter went and looked for the blond she she loved more than anyone else in the world….
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Chapter 4:
Mary-Anne had sent a messenger to the nearby country, inviting the King, Queen and Prince for a visit, and was now anxiously waiting for an anwser, turning to the only person she could turn to…
Oh Maxime… I dont know what to do… I should have done it earlier I guess… Then they would have been able to get to know eachoher even better.
Mary-Anne… The ladys maids voice sounded soothing as she tried to reassure the royal lady.
Im sure there is plenty of time… It will be good to have more kids around for Christinas 9th birthday.
Nine, Maxime! Shell turn nine in just 2 weeks!
Listen, you can always have one of those, royal ball things? Like… when she turns 15 or right before she turns 16 or something? Well find her true love Mary-Anne… Im in this with you!
As Maxime took her best friends hands in hers she thought back of their encounter in the forest almost 10 years ago… She had never told Mary-Anne that she was kissed by the ravishing female, even when Mary-anne had told her everything that had happened to her. She had no idea what it could all mean, but she was sure Bette was needed in Tinas seach for true love. If Bette had been a boy, shed might even be that true love. The ladys maid chuckled at that idea and again… as she had done since the encounter in the forest, she was puzzled and tried to figure out what September had wanted from her.
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who are watching? and why? i hope Bette continue be there for Tina and that the other people won’t put away Bette from Tina.
I reckon there’s no reply to the Author’s note. “ Please help me out about whether or not I should add some other L-word characters here and there…†Girls, suggestion please :)
Thanks for reconsider for putting other girls in the story. No matter what you have in mind I’m sure I’ll love it. Hrm… what can other girls be. Helena could be an evil princess from the other country; Dana, Alice and Shane could be orphans, used to be pickpockets (like Oliver Twist), but after Maxine save them from the street, and then becomes- trainee maids. Lol.. Geez, I’m suck of writing, sorry can’t help much.
This story is so lovely and just amazing. You are doing a great job with it and I enjoy it very much. Thanks for the post.
Good chapter. Well I think if Bette kiss Tina and Tina will find out why Bette is acting weird and will feeling for Bette more than friend. Ok the leave-green eyes followed them is scary and hope they not do anything bad to the girls. Ok post soon please, thanks!
AWWW, Bette is already feeling those heartaches of Love for one Christina. At least Tina is not running the other direction and may in her own heart know that she can not live without Bette. Is that the magic lady watching out for them? I hope that the prince from the other country is a jerk or something else so that Christina’s mother does not try and put them together. That will only break Bette’s already bleeding heart. Please cotinue with this fairy tale story.
You passed Everyone has a little bit of kid in them,love fairytales. Who is the green eyed monster? Who will the little prince be? Will Tina like him{hope not] Waiting for a cha[ter from your other story thanks
Really do love this fairytale. Poor Tina crying was sad..don’t like to see her cry. And Bette realizing she was doing wrong and welcomed Tina back in her arms was so sweet. Poor Bette to have love so close yet so far. The green-eye monster…hmmm such an interesting presence. Oh my, is the Prince named Eric? LOL. Thanks for this lovely tale, please do continue.
I’m such a sap. I can’t stand it when Tina cries. lol But, if Bette kisses Tina, couldn’t Tina FIND and RECOGNIZE the love in Bette’s eyes? Hmm? *puppy dog look* Okay I’ll stop. My blue eyes don’t allow me to achieve the puppy dog look very well. =p
Zo lief, ik hou van allebei je verhalen. Weet jij trouwens dat een andere schrijfster: Bonaire Girl ook een nederlandse is die op Bonaire woont.
Thank you for your comment. You are writing this story beautifully. It is one I look forward to reading, as it warms my heart, and leaves a smile on my face. Thank you.
Wonderful…Post soon
Oh my goodness, I felt my heart skipped a beat when I read Tina cried. oooohhh… :( Hmm… seems like we’re gonna have some adventure with the green eye thingy heh? And is it when B&T will find true love in each other? LOL, u wouldn’t wanna know what my detention was all about, I shouldn’t be detained over that silly thing at all :P haha
leave – green eyes..??uhhh, eerie…
even in this fairy tale there is a ogre ….who is this green eyed monster that’s watching them, and will he hurt them……damn !!!!!
hmmm… so whi is watching them… love this story… so glad bette is there for her… i wonder when the first kiss will take place and if bette and tina will know its love… please continue… with both stories… i love them both…