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To Live Without You (Chapter 9)
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“So you and that little reporter hit it off huh?” Victoria ran a little harder, frustrated Dana had found someone other than her. She enjoyed their random trysts and had a feeling that a new woman in the athlete’s life meant less time for them. Dana jogged with her head down staring at her feet, she wanted to tell Victoria about the flyer and Alice but she was sure her doubles partner wouldn’t understand. Dana itched to tell her and she seldom didn’t satisfy an urge this strong,
“She works with Alice…at Options,” Victoria stopped running from shock, walking with her hands on her hips,
“Evelyn works at the fucking Magazine? Come on Dane what the shit are you doing?” Dana rolled her eyes keeping them on the sky,
“Vic, she’s been dating some guy for like five months. She’s throwing a super bowl party for their anniversary.” Dana stopped and laid on the ground Victoria holding her legs for sit-ups, Victoria scoffed.
“So what you’re step on her juice box because she didn’t invite you to her birthday party…poor baby,” Victoria mocked the brunette as she finished her last sit-up.
“Fuck you Vic, this isn’t funny. How could she not say anything about that phone call, I practically say ‘let’s get married’ and she doesn’t even call me back.” Victoria looked dumbfounded,
“What phone call?” The athlete forgot she hadn’t told her partner about the phone call turned love confession close to six months ago, Victoria stood there as Dana jogged in place trying to get her to move.
“Ok Dane we’re not going anywhere until I get the full story from you. Everytime you retell this story there’s something new so either tell me the truth or shut the fuck up about it ok?” Dana stopped jogging and scratched her head a little embarassed about not telling Victoria the truth, she didn’t know why she lied, it just seemed easier at the time.
“Alright…I’m sorry, what do you want to know?” They stared at each other for a moment and Victoria swore Dana saw how she felt about her,
“Well first I’d like to know why you broke up, you still haven’t told me what happened,” Dana looked at the ground again her eyes threathening to tear,
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That was definitely a chapter worth reading. Dana is never short on women in her life, is she? With Alice, Lara and Vic in the mix… but of course Alice is her first choice:)The naked picnic gave me a rush… nice creative move and loved that it was NC-17 rating! Good use of the wine too, btw..lol You have me drawn in for the duration, sweetie. Can wait to see what you do with the next chapter… especially Dana’s rehab and Dr. Jones, lol. Great chapter! Post soon.
great story – can’t wait for the next installment. i feel like dana and alice have a long rode ahead of them.
Nice to have some background on their break-up. I feel bad for Victoria, it must be really hard for her to be around Dana, knowing that her feelings will not be answered. And yes, keep the flash-backs in the story, just for the sake of the ‘hankey pankey’. :P
Great update! I also feel bad for Victoria. I wonder if Dana would consider her for a relationship if Alice and Cliff prove to be solid. I hope he doesn’t turn out to be a jerk because then it would be too easy for Alice to go back to Dana. I love the fact that your story has so many layers, and I hope it will be around for a long time.