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    Tina, Tiny Pieces Chapter 10

    Story written on April 23, 2006 by lastkid.
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    Knock on Wood

    At Bette’s house, later that Saturday

     

    Help yourself to something to drink, Shane.  I’ve got beer, wine, I made some iced tea which is in the fridge and there’s some health juice thing in there that Kit brought over.

     

    Bette is walking out of the living room, where Shane sits on the couch.  She calls to Shane as she walks into her bedroom.

     

    I warn you though, it’s vile.

     

    Shane laughs and calls back.

     

    Healthy stuff usually is.

     

    Bette calls back, struggling to pull something out of her closet. 

     

    Yeah.  Hey, is it cool enough in here for you?  My air doesn’t seem to be working very well today.

     

    They’re having brownouts, I heard.  Closer in, towards LAX.

     

    Great.  That’s all we need. 

     

    Hey, at least you’ve got the pool.

     

    Have you been in it recently Shane?  It feels like a fucking bathtub.

     

    Shane returns to the living room with two bottles of water as Bette is walking back in, her arms full with manila envelopes, a wide box and a stack of bond paper.  Shane quickly sets down the water.

     

    Let me help you Bette.

     

    Let’s just put it over on the table, we can spread it out.

     

    They sit. Bette restacks the envelopes on top of the box, she sets the paper off to the side.  Shane hands her the water.

     

    Thanks.  Oh, before we get into this, Alice wanted me to tell you two things.

     

    Shane smiles.

     

    First, she wants you to call her when you get home.

     

    She want to go out? She said before she was too tired.

     

    No, she said she wants you to tell her why she wasn’t invited over here.

     

    Shane chuckles.  Bette gets a quizzical look.

     

    And the second thing … she said she wants Evelyn back.  She said there will be no questions asked, but she insisted that she get her back before — and I quote — “the time when they put the gardening tools away.”

     

    Shane laughs aloud.  She slides her hand into her jeans pocket, grasping something, looking down, not pulling it out.  She nods at Bette, she takes a long pull on the water bottle.

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    2. I just hate cliffhangers…but i just love this story….so your forgiven….And Bette just described herself…..in Helena,..loved that…..Oh and you have a very talented dog!lol…

    3. now what is it with you people, between you and ally, you tryin to KILL us? I am gonna get downright testy here in a minute!!!! What if the dog didn’t wanna go down the slide????

    6. So did I, I tought who the hell is Evelyn again. Btw, nice people don’t stop where you stopped, you know that?.So, get the next chapter on your pjuter about now ;).

    10. Oh no, You did it AGAIN? I don`t have any nails left. “clapping hands” this is one of the most intriging, funny, cliffy histories on the site. You made this sunday less boring.

    11. Photographs of Dana – that Bette has had made up for Alice and the rest of the girls – a rememberance? I know you don’t like Tina – but PLEASE let her back in! They do all need each other.

    20. Are these photos of Dana and her life with Alice? Shane and Bette are like sisiters and they can pretty much talk about anything. I wish that Tina knew exactly what Bette was going through mainly the hitting of the walls, and singing to an empty bed that once held her daughter. I wonder would that push Tina into allowing Angelica to spend time with her other mother. Great story and post. Just wish that BandT could get their act together.

    21. first, i totally agree on bette’s view of helena…they can be good friends but that’s about it…second: the end was intruiging, can’t wait to read what’s next…and finally, since you have a plan, care to share? or at least give a hint? pm was invented for this exact purpose ;)

    22. BRILLIANT! and THANK YOU for this, Bette” “And for your information, the answer is no. It didn’t happen and it’s not going to happen.” I know I may be in the minority on the Bette/Helena paring but for some reason God! Bette and Helena NO! The mere thought of Helena getting all cozy with Bette romantically some how elicits this sick feeling as in really sick like I want to throw up sick kindda feeling! Sorry just my opinion! Rachel Shelly did a fantastic job of portraying the super B**C* poor lost rich little petulant child Helena, who gives Bette hell at every corner in season 2 so much so, I feel the suddenly super sweet Helena of season 3 is all too hmmm for a lack of a better word on my part I’d say too forced too plastic. I guess if they make the transition at least over time perhaps its more believable. Personally imho you handle the Bette & Helena “lets be friends” thingy way, way much better than the writers on the show!Thanks for sharing this story with us lastkid! Great job as always!

    23. Seems we saw Shane’s eyes water a few times there, only once trying to hold back the laughter over Bette’s objections regarding Helena. I guess Shane’s becoming more open with her feelings. And Evelyn digging her purse into Shane’s thigh illustrates a couple of things. One, she wants to get back with Maxine. Also, that we only hurt those we love. Like we needed another example.

    24. I just thought about a line you had Tina say in a previous chapter. Something about not promising Bette forever and then not keep it. Of course she’s right. A woman (claiming to be a grown-up) who has been in love with someone for about two weeks and talks about marrying that person wouldn’t ever promise her partner of 7 years something like that. Come on, not even in Bette’s darkest hour Tina would’ve said that, how dare we think she would be so naive? Honestly, if you were in love with someone for more than 7 years, you wouldn’t say something thoughtless like that, would you? I’m sure Tina did promise Bette forever. And broke it a lot more often than everyone thinks.

    25. Back from S.F. and caught up with your story…saw albeez in SF but don’t see her on your comments…I will say that I love your story and can’t wait for the next chapter

    26. Once again, a chapter of the highest caliber. The adroitness with which you slowly change the barometer of the story and the characters feeings is lovely…….I look forward to seeing how the weather plays a part in each chapter. The heat, the symbolic fires of hell have not taken over just yet. There is a brown out, not all hope is lost, there is faint glimmer of light, a bit of energy is still left…….Alice’s messages to Shane were not meant to be pestilent, they were jovial with just a touch of confusion at being excluded from Bette and Shane’s pow wow…….Did Shane bring Evelynn as a talisman? Or maybe she is hoping that some of Bette’s energy will somehow transfer and help to bring good fortune to it’s effigy……Bette has had time to cogitate about her behavior. Her apology is genuine. She understands that Alice may be puerile on occasion and a tad too exhuberent when on a mission – but she knows deep down in her heart that Alice is not malicious or factuous……The fact that Bette is going to therapy shows that she is resolute in moving forward. It can’t be fun to be there, but making the effort speaks volumes…….OK, once you had Bette say that the world is small, that damnable Disney song is now stuck in my head…….They think that Tina doesn’t have the balls to go into The Planet? Think again, she thought about it so we know that where there’s smoke, there’s fire……..Helena believes that some things are just coincidences, however, it looks as if they can also be subconscious orchestrations of serendipity too……..Bette might as well have been looking into a mirror when she was describing Helena, but the difference this time is that she did not actually revile her, she was also able to elucidate some of her better qualities – many of which Bette possesses too. I loved how Shane saw through it and struggled to maintain her composure……..It’s purely conjecture at this point as to what’s in the envelope and box. She said that Alice was right, so that could mean that she has evidence that Tina has always been gay. Are they pictures of them from when they first started dating? Oh, the intrigue grows!!!!!! I’m waiting patiently for your next chapter. OK, maybe not so patiently, but I am looking forward to it! Bravo, yet again.

    29. Darn, you! You, who lengthy chapters at a time, chooses now to leave off after a palsy (quantity, not quality) two pages, with this kind of cliffhanger. Brilliant story, Kid.

    32. Bette describing Helena – I loved how you wrote that part – so funny. I love this story and I am so glad I started reading it. I’m considering a dog – does yours climb up the ladder and go down the slide – or do you have to put him up on top of the slide?

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