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More Than a Feeling
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"Bette!" Tina shouted, chasing after the suddenly lightening fast brunette. "Be–" She was cut off as some guys ran in front of her. She pushed through them, almost losing sight of Bette, but caught her racing for the car.
Bette could hear Tina calling her, but her legs just wouldn’t stop moving forward. She knew that whatever it was she saw in the kitchen must’ve been a mistake, but her brain wouldn’t let her compute. All she could do was think, I have to get out of here. Pulling her keys from her pocket, Bette quickly opened her car door and got inside, starting the engine. The headlights came on, illuminating and nearly blinding Tina as she ran for the car. Bette put the car in reverse and looked behind her, only to realize that she was completely blocked in. "Fuck!" She shouted, throwing the car in park.
Suddenly, the passenger door opened and Tina flew inside, closing the door, panting heavily. "Wait…just…let…me…explain…." Tina wheezed, struggling to catch her breath.
"Explain what?" Bette looked at Tina sharply. "You went in for drinks, I waited ten minutes, I went inside and find you making out with someone else."
Tina expelled the last of her heavy breaths, looking at Bette, her brow furrowed. "Is that what you really think was going on?" She asked weakly, hurt that Bette would even think she did that on purpose.
Unable to look at Tina‘s hurt face any longer, Bette turned and looked straight ahead. "No." She whispered and then looked down.
Tina smiled sadly at her girlfriend, taking one of Bette’s hands in her own. "I went in, and she was at the keg, totally wasted. I tried to help her and she kissed me. That’s the truth." When Bette didn’t look at Tina, she said, "What? You don’t believe me?"
Bette finally looked up at Tina, frowning. "I do. I don‘t know what I was thinking just now…just surprised I guess."
"You were surprised? How do you think I felt?" Tina joked, trying to cheer Bette up. "Listen, baby," Tina threw that in for leverage, "believe me, if I wanted to kiss anyone voluntarily in the middle of a party, it would be you. You have to believe that."
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Now is the time to run, the police will be there soon and they all will land up in jail Poor Alice ia she in trouble. Melvin will be mad as hell. thanks
DAMN girl! Not even an hour ago I was wondering when we’d be able to get another chapter from you, and boy we got a doozie of a chapter! HAHA Bette touched Tina’s ass! They are so cute together I could squeeze them both. I wonder what the fight is about and who it is? I keep thinking ol’ “Romeo” is involved somehow.
Bette and Tina were engaged in serious business and of course they would be interrupted, savages. Why can’t people just have a good time minus the drama. Hope your feeling better.
Love this. Can’t wait for more.
this morning i was thinking in this story and how the girls will handled her first fight and they did well. Poor alice i think she is in really really serious problems! please continue!
Oh Bette has those wondering hands. How long before Tina begins with those wondering hands. I feel sorry for Alice. Sometimes those parties get out of hand. Especially when half the town is there. Great Post.
first, B&T are so cute together..do they have rules of touching or something? poor alice, i think there will be no parties after that…thanks for posting
yeah maybe tim and romeo again? LOL about the ass touching… Manda… you did it again! Thanks for writing this marvelous story! I love it so!
Again a good one.
Manda, That was simply exquisite. All of the despair and anger from the last chapter was quickly dissipated as Tina and Bette came together and opened their hearts to one another. Telling the truth can be one of the hardest things to do but these gals showed how easy it can be to trust when you have the depth of emotions between each other. As for Shane and Carmen, great play of these characters as it was pleasant to see Shane think she was the number one babe fest while Carmen proved to be an equal adversary and up for the challenge. And Alice and Dana, the typical laughter ensued as they followed their ears to witness the ramble below. I can’t wait to find out what is happening and how this event will play out. I am so addicted to this terrific tale so please provide my fix real soon. Withdrawal is not a happy place I wanna visit. Thank you so much for this ride. Your Loyal Fan.
Ha ha…a shout out to Corey Hart. Awesome. I love this story! Alice has a mess on her hands now. Happy b-day Clarity!
Today (April 26) is my birthday, so a million thank you’s! I haven’t read it yet…but I’m going to now…and then I’ll give you more props.
Glad Tina catch up with Bette and thing are ok, is funny Bette touch Tinas ass. Ok drama coming and let see whats next, thanks!
Anyone who gives Corey Hart, a fellow Canadian, an honourable mention is awesome in my books…Corey needs love too! You’ve managed to write another quality chapter, Manda. Please tell me that I won’t have to try to will the next chapter into existence because you’ll be posting it soon. Also, as of today, the campaign for your fanfic award begins. Some amazing writers were chosen for the Winter 2006 awards, as well as in the past, and I’d like to see your name amongst them. Peace out and happy birthday to me!
Ditto with Clarity, I haven’t read all the stories which were awarded, they’re all good but you deserve have won too. I hope you get the recognition you deserve for such a great story.
The shout out to Corey Hart made me enjoy this story all the more. Great job mixing up the angst, fun, drama etc. I’m all for Bette and Tina not doing the deed… but a little a$$ groping is a no no? Hmmm. Wonder how long Tina can resist those beautiful hands?
sorryyyy, if Alice was my kid she’d be out on her ass!!!!!!!!!!!