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More Than a Feeling
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"I do." Bette said, but it sounded half-hearted. Plus, she was still frowning.
Tina ran her fingers through some of Bette’s hair, a frown sweeping across her mouth as well. "Come on Bette, I hate seeing you so upset. Please, please, believe me." She put her bottom lip out in a pout. "What can I do to make you feel better?" She asked, not only to Bette but to herself as well.
"How about you make an honest girl out of me?"
Bette looked at Tina, puzzled. "Huh?"
Tina’s eyes twinkled with a seductive mischief that seized Bette’s heart and wouldn’t let go. "Remember our ‘study’ session last night?" She whispered softly into Bette’s ear, making the girl shudder with desire.
After dinner with Melvin, Bette and Tina went up to Bette’s room, to "study." The make-out session that followed exhausted and took the breath from both girls, but didn’t leave them unsatisfied. It definitely left them without wanting.
Bette finally smiled at Tina. "That, I might be able to do."
"There’s that smile I love so much." Tina whispered softly, gazing deeply into Bette’s chocolate brown eyes. "Come on."
Bette flashed her pearly whites once more. "Point the way Miss Kennard."
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Shane slinked in through the front door, looking around. "God damn this place is packed." She mumbled to herself. After grabbing a drink from the kitchen, Shane walked around the house, on the hunt. Behind dark sunglasses, she scanned the dance area (formerly known as Alice’s living room), scoping out the fresh meat. Lots and lots of honeys…so many to choose from. Biting her lip, she moved around the crowd, searching for anyone tossing an interested look her way.
She got more than her fair share of disgusted and confused looks, but those she had learned to ignore years ago. It was the occasional curious/enchanted gaze that she zeroed in on.
The music died down and the D.J’s voice came on, making Shane and everyone else in the room turn her way. "Check it, this is D.J. Carmen. I’m taking a ten-minute break, but I’m leaving you with some tunes for you to get ya freak on with. Peace." Carmen flipped down the mic and turned up the music, throwing her headphones down.
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Now is the time to run, the police will be there soon and they all will land up in jail Poor Alice ia she in trouble. Melvin will be mad as hell. thanks
DAMN girl! Not even an hour ago I was wondering when we’d be able to get another chapter from you, and boy we got a doozie of a chapter! HAHA Bette touched Tina’s ass! They are so cute together I could squeeze them both. I wonder what the fight is about and who it is? I keep thinking ol’ “Romeo” is involved somehow.
Bette and Tina were engaged in serious business and of course they would be interrupted, savages. Why can’t people just have a good time minus the drama. Hope your feeling better.
Love this. Can’t wait for more.
this morning i was thinking in this story and how the girls will handled her first fight and they did well. Poor alice i think she is in really really serious problems! please continue!
Oh Bette has those wondering hands. How long before Tina begins with those wondering hands. I feel sorry for Alice. Sometimes those parties get out of hand. Especially when half the town is there. Great Post.
first, B&T are so cute together..do they have rules of touching or something? poor alice, i think there will be no parties after that…thanks for posting
yeah maybe tim and romeo again? LOL about the ass touching… Manda… you did it again! Thanks for writing this marvelous story! I love it so!
Again a good one.
Manda, That was simply exquisite. All of the despair and anger from the last chapter was quickly dissipated as Tina and Bette came together and opened their hearts to one another. Telling the truth can be one of the hardest things to do but these gals showed how easy it can be to trust when you have the depth of emotions between each other. As for Shane and Carmen, great play of these characters as it was pleasant to see Shane think she was the number one babe fest while Carmen proved to be an equal adversary and up for the challenge. And Alice and Dana, the typical laughter ensued as they followed their ears to witness the ramble below. I can’t wait to find out what is happening and how this event will play out. I am so addicted to this terrific tale so please provide my fix real soon. Withdrawal is not a happy place I wanna visit. Thank you so much for this ride. Your Loyal Fan.
Ha ha…a shout out to Corey Hart. Awesome. I love this story! Alice has a mess on her hands now. Happy b-day Clarity!
Today (April 26) is my birthday, so a million thank you’s! I haven’t read it yet…but I’m going to now…and then I’ll give you more props.
Glad Tina catch up with Bette and thing are ok, is funny Bette touch Tinas ass. Ok drama coming and let see whats next, thanks!
Anyone who gives Corey Hart, a fellow Canadian, an honourable mention is awesome in my books…Corey needs love too! You’ve managed to write another quality chapter, Manda. Please tell me that I won’t have to try to will the next chapter into existence because you’ll be posting it soon. Also, as of today, the campaign for your fanfic award begins. Some amazing writers were chosen for the Winter 2006 awards, as well as in the past, and I’d like to see your name amongst them. Peace out and happy birthday to me!
Ditto with Clarity, I haven’t read all the stories which were awarded, they’re all good but you deserve have won too. I hope you get the recognition you deserve for such a great story.
The shout out to Corey Hart made me enjoy this story all the more. Great job mixing up the angst, fun, drama etc. I’m all for Bette and Tina not doing the deed… but a little a$$ groping is a no no? Hmmm. Wonder how long Tina can resist those beautiful hands?
sorryyyy, if Alice was my kid she’d be out on her ass!!!!!!!!!!!