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    The beginning of a friendship, chpt 35

    Story written on April 28, 2006 by justloveB+T.
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    Making out on the beach… A Bette and Tina beginning

    Previously on The beginning of a friendship

     

     

    Tina:

     

    Oh Tina… You are so naive…

     

    She glanced at me shortly before hiding her face in her hands and suddenly…

     

    I saw it…

     

    And everything fell into place as every scene of our time together passed my mind

     

    The look in her eyes when she had first seen me…

     

    The way she seemed to tremble when I was close to her…

     

    The way her lips had brushed mine at her birthdayparty

     

    The tender gratitude when I had given her her present

     

    The delight and shock in her eyes when I had shown up unexpectedly

     

    The wordgame of lover’s petnames…

     

    The… I love you T…

     

    And now the hurt when a man tried to hit on me…

     

    I ment to ask her if she was ok, but somewhere in the journey from my brain to my lips the words got lost and I heared myself say:

     

    Are you in love with me?

     

    The instant jerk of her head and the look in her eyes answered that question and I tried to catch her gaze but she wouldn’t let me and started to sob… Again covering her face with her hand

     

    I’m so… So sorry T… I ment to tell you… I really did

     

    I approached her slowly as she continued

     

    I know you are straight… I know you will never feel like this for me but… Oh… T… I love you so much… And I…

     

    A lump shot upto my throat… A lump of tears… Tears of happiness… This woman… This wonderfull, ravishing woman…

     

    She loved me…

     

    She looked at me in derpair as I crouched before her, covering her mouth with my hand in order to stop her from talking…

     

    Shhh… Bette…

     

    As I removed my hand and placed my forehead against hers she sobbed again

     

    I am so sorry T… I know you’re straight I do…

     

    I couldn’t help it… I chuckled… She withdrew a little…

     

    I don’t think it is funny T 

     

    I did the only thing i could think of doing… The thing my heart had urged me to do for so long… I cupped her face in my hands and forced her to look at me:

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    1. Perfect mix of passion, love, dialogue and humor. Was so excited to see the post as always; and, also as always, thanks for sharing your wonderful story with us!

    2. Hi…your are forgiven for torturing us like that…this made it up. I just have one word who can describe it…WOW… thanks and please post soon..eager to see what will happen next ;)

    3. oh good god almighty, i need a cigarette and its only the first kiss, and i don’t even smoke…………hot damn do i luv this story, your rock!!!!!

    5. Perfect! Perfect!!!!!!!! I love it!!!Amazing!!! Thank you so much…Have a nice weekend… see you on monday right?Bye girl! THANKS FOR THIS CHAPTER!!!

    8. One ciggy coming up, annieb69! Actually…*tosses a carton of cigs into the circle* Hope no one minds menthol. I don’t think I’ve ever seen a chapter that was basically one big long kiss, and if I have, then it must’ve been like two fish kissing because I sure don’t remember it. Actually wait I was wrong. We could count a chapter giasony wrote about a kiss between B&T not too far from where Tina’s boyfriend was standing, but so much was going on in that chapter that I can’t really say it was solely a big kiss. Anyway back to this chapter. ‘My hands covered her cheeks as I pulled her face closer to mine for yet another kiss…’ Now, at first glance I only read up to the word “cheeks” and was like “WHOA! Bette touched her ass, er no both hands were on her face so no hand was on her ass.” *I will make you want me Tina Kennard… Like you have never wanted anyone…* And at this moment I must start singing “I’m Gonna Make You Love Me,” but only a bar or two as I’m not warmed-up and ready for extensive singing. ‘All over my body as if I had just became a giant heart filled with love for her…’ Not me. At that moment I’d remember that I’m one big tickle and would beg for mercy before I died from lack of breath. So did anyone see them making out on the beach? I figured Bette’s laughter was because she got a glimpse of Muck standing nearby playing with his boner.

    9. waooooo!:D they said it! They love each other well that we already know it but now they know it too! i think you write so well the work out! this was amazing with a little humor and a lot of love and desire! this worth the wait! why all the weekend? i hope you are fine. i’ll be waiting your next post take care

    11. Well smoking, I quit 20 years ago and now you made me aching for it. This was one hell of a chapter, applause, you dit it again. Gerard Reve, Simon Carmiggelt, Hugo Claus wel ze komen allemaal adem te kort om jou bij te benen. Geweldig, ik word er nederig van als ik zo’n mooie teksten kan lezen. Volgens je bio ben je pas 22, wat gaat dat worden binnen 20 jaar, ongelooflijk. GEDANKT!.

    12. Finally they admitted their feelings to one another. Dit was een perfect hoofdstuk en ik hoop dat je niet al teveel drama erin stopt en gewoon doorgaat met gelukkige B&T.Great chapter and please post soon.

    14. Woo Hoo! The first of a million kisses methinks! Still loving this story,just wish you could win the lottery, stay home all day and write more chapters! Or alternatively that I could win the lottery and make Bette and/or Tina my love slave!!! Thanks and Keep up the good work!

    16. Soooo good! *Insert happy dance here* Love your writing & your story. Magic kisses…sweet! And thanks to Corona for convincing you to post before the weekend!

    18. Awwwwwwwwww…they are so sweet and cute, it’s PERFECT!!! *happy dance*, I have the goofy smile when I reading your story… can’t wait to see where they go from here. I hope the drama won’t come so soon, I don’t mind to have more sweet torture. 10 or 20 more chapters to NC17? Lol.. thanks for posting. Please continue :)

    22. Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! Great chapter and definitely worth the wait. I don’t know of any other story that I have read that made me so happy after 34 chapters to read about Bette and Tina finally kissing and admiting that they love each other. Your story is fantastic and you are a great storyteller. Like everyone else I can’t wait to see what happens next.

    23. Now that was a kiss, okay maybe many kisses. Wow you sure gave it to us, huh. You delivered with flying colors. I have enjoyed this story and hope that it will continue for a long, long, long time. Do I need to come over there and kidnap Rosy from her mom? Rosy needs to see her favorite people in the world. The kiss was so good I would probably die from the first time they get together (you know the hot stuff). Thank you for this awesome story.

    26. W-O-W…W-O-W…W-O-W…W-O-W…W-O-W…OMG… I’ve been looking for a complete make out scene from this site for a very long time.. and finally you’re the one that’s giving me the pleassure of enjoying this (sorry to the other authors who’ve written a make out scene for I’ve missed your post) Thank you… thank u… thank u… You’ve done it beyond marvelous!! :D And thanks again for giving me such a great treat on a sat morning for me, and thanks for brightening up my day as I don’t feel dreading to go to work today anymore :D (doing happy dance while heading to the bathroom to prepare to work) Btw, this is my third attempt to leave comment.. hope this time works *crossed fingers*

    29. that was very nice and so well worth it… and i love the pace… don’t want bette to scare tina… so take your time… even though your killing us… it will be so worth it in the end… thx and later baby…please continue

    33. Excellent and amazing first kiss! Very well done with the dialogue – loved it! Thank you so very much for sharing this story with us. Will we experiance lots more kissing in the sand in the next chapter??? ** I hope so ** ….. *smiling*

    34. Jesus. That was fucking amazing my dear. Splendid. I’m with NYGayLady. The passion, love, dislogue, and humor. I love your style of writing as well. I’m amazed at how you’ve blossomed like a flower. Congrats on the story Ms. lady. You’re a telented and gifted writer. I wish I could comment more, but, I’ll make a vow to do it more often. Excellant job by the way.:)

    36. Wow that was a beautiful primo, secondo and more bacio. Breathtaking! Now what’s going to happen? You’re not going to send them home to live happily ever after, are you? There must be some drama coming up, because now I know you love torturing us. Have a good weekend and bring an update next week, will you? Thanks.

    38. oh my freaking god!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! man you want me to live lol this was great!!!!!!!!! I will say it just cause u want me to longer are u happy now lol whooooooooooooo dont mind hang today

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