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    In The Army Now Part 15

    5/18/07:Alice and Dana’s House-West Hollywood-9:15 A.M.

     

    “Alice! Alice! Look at the stupid thing they have on the news!”

     

    Alice came out of the kitchen. “What?”

     

    Lenore pointed towards the television. “A dog! A dog! Ooh, wow, it can walk on two legs. So can I. Did I ever make it on the news? No.”

     

    Alice sat down next to her mom on the couch. “Sheesh. Calm down, mom.”

     

    “I hate it when they waste news segments with pointless stuff. That’s why there’re magazines.” Alice rolled her eyes at her mom. “No offense.”

     

    “None taken,” Alice said as she got up.

     

    5/18/07:Hospital-West Germany-1915 hours (7:15 P.M.)

     

    Gina and Dana sat in silence in the waiting area. Finally Gina broke the silence. “So… good for you.”

     

    “What?”

     

    “That girl, you said she looked like your Alice. If she does then good for you.”

     

    There was a moment of silence before Dana replied, “Way too much like Alice. When we were coming up her I caught myself about to hold her hand and I almost called her ‘Alice’ like five times. It was creepy.” Dana looked around. “Why are the walls in hospitals so white?”

     

    Gina shrugged. “Dunno.”

     

    The doctor came out of a room with a paper in her hands. “Dana, I want to ask you a question.”

     

    “Okay.”

     

    The doctor turned the paper over. “How do you feel?”

     

    “Um-”

     

    “You told me you felt nauseated,” she said while reading the paper.

     

    “Yeah, but I feel fine.”

     

    “Uh huh. Well, Dana, if you and your friend could follow me to my office, I have a few things to take to you about.” The doctor turned around and started walking off. Gina got up and rolled Dana. When they got to the office the doctor sat down and started talking.

     

    “Okay. Now, in you’re x-ray’s we saw no signs of any other bones broken. But in your ultrasound test we saw signs of gastritis. Now, what that is, is when the lining of your stomach gets inflamed. It’s not anything to worry about, most of the time it goes away with some antibiotics. We just need to take a biopsy of your stomach lining. To do that we need to get samples of the inside of your stomach through an endoscopy. What we do is, get a light flexible scope and pass it into your stomach and take pictures, take samples, and examine the inside of your stomach. You’ll be asleep when we do and won’t feel a thing. I’ve had it done and the entire day felt like a dream.”

     

    “So…when do I have that done to me?”

     

    “Well, I only do that procedure on Mondays, so on the 21st.”

     

    Dana was shocked and saddened at the same time. She was hoping to get home by the next day. May 21st was her and Alice’s two year anniversary. “Oh, okay,” Dana said, holding back tears.

    TBC

    Posted By: Stripes

    Comments

    1. good god it is not going well for dana at the min is it I hope she gets home soon and before alice finds someone else please post soon I love it

    2. Me and Solid will update our other stories soon. We’re just busy at the moment. Solid’s gonna try and finish her stories ASAP or let me finish them ‘cos she’s might move and not have internet access. Sux.From: Stripes

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