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The Mythical Season 3.5 – “Episode 25: Stop Crying Your Heart Out”
Oasis – Stop Crying Your Heart Out
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The room is silent, as Alice and Lara cuddle together in bed. From time to time however, Lara will open her eyes and try to figure out just what would inspire Carmen to try and kiss her. The only comfort for Lara is that it oddly enough, reassures her love for Alice. Lara debates in her mind whether or not Alice should ever know of Carmen’s folly.
The room is silent, save for the occassional sniffed sob shared between the two. Carmen sits on the bed against the headboard, holding Shane, who’s still shaking and looking down. Carmen, feeling her own sense of shame rests her head against Shane’s right shoulder, running her left hand through Shane’s hair.
Carmen: ….Wanna talk about it…?
Shane: …No…I don’t even wanna think about it…
Carmen closes her eyes.
Shane: …It….it was all so clear again….
Carmen whispers.
Carmen: …i’m sorry…
Shane: No….I was just taken back to something I’ve tried to shove outta my mind for years….and I can’t….
Shane takes a deep breath.
Shane: When I was younger…….I did a lot of things just to survive….. Turned tricks…dealt drugs…some of it’s still too much to think about, ’cause I learned….I learned first hand just how cruel people can be.
Carmen: What happened…?
Shane: …I’ve never told anyone about this….’cept for Al. …And Dana.
Shane looks up for a moment, closes her eyes then looks back down.
Shane: There was this guy….he’d come around from time to time and…..he always had this….attitude about him. He thought the World owed ‘im somethin’… I guess he thought of me as God’s payment… One night, I’m pickin’ up a shipment of some acid for him….but I had a bad addiction to it myself….wound up taking some for myself.
Shane swallows the air for a second as Carmen does her best to console her.
Shane: He shows up for his stuff….and he sees it ain’t all there…and he goes apeshit on me. I tried to fight him off, but I was too out of it and he was too strong.
Shane looks off towards the curtained off window.
Shane: He beat the shit out of me. Busted my lip….gave me a black eye….I was bleeding what felt like everywhere…. I thought I was gonna die. He started….ripping off my clothes and I was praying that he’d just kill me and get it over with…..but he didn’t. I never wanted to feel anything like that again……..
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i like the setup for some ponderage for Lara…hmm, how to link her thoughts with what Carmen is going through a bit more…somehow these two need to talk again…and then Lara should definitely share the process wtih Alice eventually (followed of course by some hot lovin–Lara and Alice can’t be cute and cuddly ALL the time, how ‘about some edginess in their bodily and mind communication?)Keep updating, you have a gift. Thank you for continuing and here’s to more;)
Wow Kace, you’re and painter & sculptor just as I am, only you use more intriguing materials, such as wonderful words. With this one, you’ve touched my soul. Thanks!
Hmmm…I don´t really know what i had expected but……this was a little bit lame. Don´t hit me, I´m just trieng to be honest.The conversation between them was okay but for me it seemed to be too easy for Shane to talk about what had happened to her. And I don´t know this whole “mood” was missing. I actually like conversations without a lot describing but there was almost no describing. I mean I still don´t know how Shane and Carmen really sat on the bed. Face to face? face to back? I know that are just small things but they are missing.But at all it was good to read.thank you for the update!