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Angel Fire – 5
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Angel Fire
Tina’s plan to help Angelica
chapter 5
Tina spent her first day back at work trying to keep busy. She thought about talking to Shane, but Angie had come to them, her parents, and she felt that they should help. But what to do?
Maybe she could find books at the Barnes and Noble, or find something on line. A web site would certainly be more private than buying a book in a real store with real clerks. Ordering on line would save her from getting a funny look from the check-out person at the book store. But her order would be forever in cyber space
She shuddered as she thought about a young kid ringing up her purchase and considering Tina some kind of middle-aged pervert. However, she could pay with cash and there would be no record. Then she frowned because what difference did it make? People knew she was a lesbian and so what if she were buying a book about lesbian sex?
Would a novel be a good choice, she wondered. Or maybe a factual book. Were there appropriate “How To” books for this? There couldn’t be a Lesbian Sex for Dummies. She had read some things years ago, but couldn’t remember much about them. Tina considered how she might find acceptable books and what it would be like to read them.
Of course, if either she or Bette, or both of them together, could talk to their daughter, they could tell her quite a bit. Tina thought that she and her wife were very skilled at lovemaking and she was correct. Their love life today was not quite as frequent as when they were younger, but they were still able to bring each other to shattering climaxes. But to tell this to your child, or anyone for that matter, would be very difficult, probably impossible.
Tina stopped momentarily to think about her first sexual experiences with Bette. They were magnificent, incredible. There was nothing like being taught by a very skilled and experienced lover who was in love with you and who you loved more than life. Tina’s eyes went a little dreamy. And she wished she and Bette were home. Then she snapped herself back to reality.
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LOL! How creative of Tina to write a “fanfic”!!!
Just caught up on the last couple of chapters. This relating sex to Tina’s daughter experience is precious. How original to use FF for this purpose. And who can that be reading over her shoulder? I bet it’s Bette and now they can do some of those things she just wrote…LOL.
Tina did a smart thing, write a FF! i can’t wait to Angel read it!
Tina’s embarrassment is palpable and very funny. Flipping between thoughts of her lover and thoughts of her daughter had to be disturbing, kind of a variation on that sister/daughter thing Faye Dunaway had going in Chinatown, but without the slapping. But I congratulate Tina on her efforts. Just as I could not conceive of going to my parents for this kind of advice, neither can I imagine them giving it.
Tina’s so cute when she’s trying to finish her first ‘porn’ fiction. lol. Let it be Bette, so we could get a real NC-17 for the next chapter. ;)
LOL!!!! That chapter really cracked me up! But i don’t think Tina will be able to give it to Angel… it’s really obvious that she’s talking from experience…
So cute. I loved the “beet with blonde hair” line.
‘She could hear Vanessa breathe more heavily and tonight she opened her legs as she anticipated what Bette wanted to do.’ I read that and had to re-read it several times and each time I mentally said, “What the hell?” I thought it was your own typo then realized it was Tina’s. I LOL’d xD At least Tina got creative with a way to help out her daughter. She gets infinite cool points from me for that. We all know this isn’t easy and really no one wants to think about their kids having sex. Like the others, I’m hoping that’s Bette who was looking at the story. ;)
Ahhhhhhhhhhh 2 funny….lets hope it is Bette and T will show her or maybe Bette will put Tina’s writing 2 action
Aww.. so sweet and funny. Not in a million years my parent would do that for me, it would be a cold day in hell! And I think they would rather kill me instead of telling me HOW TO DO IT. lol…Thanks for giving us this cute version of Tina. More please :)
Tina is smart to write it down.But will she give it to her daughter? It would be hard to do. Hope its Bette that is reading, maybe Bette can add a little to it. between the two of them they should know. You are so brillant to use Fanfic to tell them. If I had ad a daughter I would put her on the PC and tell her to Read Pancha 305 story. Let finish Tina story. thanks
this was cute… i could see a blond beet… i do hope that is bette behind her… maybe they could pen another fanfic… loving this… please continue
I loved this chapter, poor Tina and Bette having to decide how to tell their daughter about lovemaking. So happy I have not had to endure that particular task. It cannot be easy. Happy that she has found a way to accomplish such a difficult task. But who is standing behind her?
I empathize with Tina writing your first NC-17 is embarrassing. I was embarrassed when my stop mom asked me about the nether region waxing in Eyes Wide Shut.
that was hilarious!!! give us more…please
Busted. I enjoyed the imagery of Tina writing a scene and walking away to compose herself. She was clever in writing a story – kind of like an outline.
Caught! What happened to the part about ‘You have the most wonderful nipples. I love the color’, or something to that effect. …yes, people praise me for my photographic memory. It’s not hard to remember lines like that. I hope it’s Bette over Tina’s shoulder…
Very funny and a well written introduction to lesbian love I’d say.It’ hard to believe Angie would really need to ask instead of just experimenting her way along but this gives her a great chance to freak out her clearly prudish parents. VERY FUN the way you’ve written this.
That was an original way to do that. Great chapter, Tina is pretty funny. Thanks for taking the time.
lol
Glad to see someone else’s B&T struggling with this very sensitive topic! Thanks!
glad i only have a dog and don’t have to explain sex to him. course i do see him eyeing up the dog next door. might need to talk to him after all.
This is nice and fun to know that Tina write this, and who was standing behind her and hope its Bette!
BUSTED! LMAO
Woah, busted but by who? I hope that it is Bette and that it will lead to their own sexual playground of fun. This is good. Poor Tina trying to write down what works for her knowing that this is for her daughter. Post soon, please.
Typos are a bitch. I’m sure Tina is relieved that she caught her own. Can’t wait to find out who is standing behind Tina.
Tina is so adorable and nervous bless her, great idea for her to write fanfiction lol
Very clever idea you got there Pancha, writing a story in the story and it was funny, sweet, hot and so on….If it’s Bette standing behind Tina I think we will get a really hot and sexy NC-17 post next, because Tina is horny as hell :o))
Pancha,How clever of you to use a fanfic. In your writing you capture just the right tone and the nuances that Tina or any parent would experience trying to explain a delicate topic such as sex.
You know you’re an excellent writer when: you make Clarity forget about the antics of S3 Tina. Another excellent chapter Pancha. I like Tina’s FF idea. You know how I learned about sex (and I certainly don’t reccomed this)? I walked in on my parents…the horror! So then we had to have the, “Do you want to talk about what you saw?” discussion. I think I waould have preferred to squeeze lemon juice in my eyes…with a dash of salt than to have that discussion. Anyway, enough about me. I’m looking forward to the next chapter and all of those that will follow. Please post soon.
Oh, I really hope it’s Bette who’s standing behind her…