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Angel Fire – 5
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She thought, though, not for the first time, that she really didn’t know about Bette’s first sexual experiences.
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Why don’t you tell me about your first,” Tina had said once years ago.
“First what?” Bette was reading the Sunday paper.
“Sexual experience. How did you get to be such a great lover?”
“Oh, you know, experience. Different people,” Bette said vaguely.
“You didn’t get laid by some older woman with lots of experience? Like I did.” Tina teased.
“T! For heavens sake! What‘s gotten into you?” Bette said frowning. And the newspaper went back in front of her face.
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Tina brought her mind back to the present. She was pretty sure that Bette wasn’t going to want to have the sex talk with Angelica. That meant it was up to her. She got an idea and left work early.
Maybe she could write something. She was a good, clear writer. Had been a successful grant writer for years and had doctored badly written scripts. And she certainly had an enormous amount of experience with lesbian sex. How difficult could it be?
Fiction would be less personal than writing a “how to” description so Tina opened her laptop, sat down with it on the bed and considered how to start. She decided to “begin at the beginning,” but what was the beginning? Tina took a deep breath.
Adrian and Vanessa stood in the bedroom, ready to make love for the first time. Adrian reached for Vanessa’s blouse and pulled it over her head and kissed her gently on the face, down the neck and onto the chest above her bra. She then removed the undergarment and freed her girlfriend’s breasts.
Adrian pulled back and looked at Vanessa with reverence. She wanted to touch her so badly that she was beginning to ache and breathe a little harder. Vanessa was looking at her with love, desire and a little fear.
“Darling,” Adrian said. “I want to touch you and kiss you and I want you to tell me if I start to do something you don’t want.”
Adrian leaned forward and kissed her girlfriend gently on the lips and then pulled back again to meet her eyes.
“Also, please tell me if you need me to do something that I’m not doing.”
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LOL! How creative of Tina to write a “fanfic”!!!
Just caught up on the last couple of chapters. This relating sex to Tina’s daughter experience is precious. How original to use FF for this purpose. And who can that be reading over her shoulder? I bet it’s Bette and now they can do some of those things she just wrote…LOL.
Tina did a smart thing, write a FF! i can’t wait to Angel read it!
Tina’s embarrassment is palpable and very funny. Flipping between thoughts of her lover and thoughts of her daughter had to be disturbing, kind of a variation on that sister/daughter thing Faye Dunaway had going in Chinatown, but without the slapping. But I congratulate Tina on her efforts. Just as I could not conceive of going to my parents for this kind of advice, neither can I imagine them giving it.
Tina’s so cute when she’s trying to finish her first ‘porn’ fiction. lol. Let it be Bette, so we could get a real NC-17 for the next chapter. ;)
LOL!!!! That chapter really cracked me up! But i don’t think Tina will be able to give it to Angel… it’s really obvious that she’s talking from experience…
So cute. I loved the “beet with blonde hair” line.
‘She could hear Vanessa breathe more heavily and tonight she opened her legs as she anticipated what Bette wanted to do.’ I read that and had to re-read it several times and each time I mentally said, “What the hell?” I thought it was your own typo then realized it was Tina’s. I LOL’d xD At least Tina got creative with a way to help out her daughter. She gets infinite cool points from me for that. We all know this isn’t easy and really no one wants to think about their kids having sex. Like the others, I’m hoping that’s Bette who was looking at the story. ;)
Ahhhhhhhhhhh 2 funny….lets hope it is Bette and T will show her or maybe Bette will put Tina’s writing 2 action
Aww.. so sweet and funny. Not in a million years my parent would do that for me, it would be a cold day in hell! And I think they would rather kill me instead of telling me HOW TO DO IT. lol…Thanks for giving us this cute version of Tina. More please :)
Tina is smart to write it down.But will she give it to her daughter? It would be hard to do. Hope its Bette that is reading, maybe Bette can add a little to it. between the two of them they should know. You are so brillant to use Fanfic to tell them. If I had ad a daughter I would put her on the PC and tell her to Read Pancha 305 story. Let finish Tina story. thanks
this was cute… i could see a blond beet… i do hope that is bette behind her… maybe they could pen another fanfic… loving this… please continue
I loved this chapter, poor Tina and Bette having to decide how to tell their daughter about lovemaking. So happy I have not had to endure that particular task. It cannot be easy. Happy that she has found a way to accomplish such a difficult task. But who is standing behind her?
I empathize with Tina writing your first NC-17 is embarrassing. I was embarrassed when my stop mom asked me about the nether region waxing in Eyes Wide Shut.
that was hilarious!!! give us more…please
Busted. I enjoyed the imagery of Tina writing a scene and walking away to compose herself. She was clever in writing a story – kind of like an outline.
Caught! What happened to the part about ‘You have the most wonderful nipples. I love the color’, or something to that effect. …yes, people praise me for my photographic memory. It’s not hard to remember lines like that. I hope it’s Bette over Tina’s shoulder…
Very funny and a well written introduction to lesbian love I’d say.It’ hard to believe Angie would really need to ask instead of just experimenting her way along but this gives her a great chance to freak out her clearly prudish parents. VERY FUN the way you’ve written this.
That was an original way to do that. Great chapter, Tina is pretty funny. Thanks for taking the time.
lol
Glad to see someone else’s B&T struggling with this very sensitive topic! Thanks!
glad i only have a dog and don’t have to explain sex to him. course i do see him eyeing up the dog next door. might need to talk to him after all.
This is nice and fun to know that Tina write this, and who was standing behind her and hope its Bette!
BUSTED! LMAO
Woah, busted but by who? I hope that it is Bette and that it will lead to their own sexual playground of fun. This is good. Poor Tina trying to write down what works for her knowing that this is for her daughter. Post soon, please.
Typos are a bitch. I’m sure Tina is relieved that she caught her own. Can’t wait to find out who is standing behind Tina.
Tina is so adorable and nervous bless her, great idea for her to write fanfiction lol
Very clever idea you got there Pancha, writing a story in the story and it was funny, sweet, hot and so on….If it’s Bette standing behind Tina I think we will get a really hot and sexy NC-17 post next, because Tina is horny as hell :o))
Pancha,How clever of you to use a fanfic. In your writing you capture just the right tone and the nuances that Tina or any parent would experience trying to explain a delicate topic such as sex.
You know you’re an excellent writer when: you make Clarity forget about the antics of S3 Tina. Another excellent chapter Pancha. I like Tina’s FF idea. You know how I learned about sex (and I certainly don’t reccomed this)? I walked in on my parents…the horror! So then we had to have the, “Do you want to talk about what you saw?” discussion. I think I waould have preferred to squeeze lemon juice in my eyes…with a dash of salt than to have that discussion. Anyway, enough about me. I’m looking forward to the next chapter and all of those that will follow. Please post soon.
Oh, I really hope it’s Bette who’s standing behind her…