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    Angel Fire – 6

    Story written on May 29, 2006 by pancha305.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=61102
    Author Notes:

    Tina is outed as an NC-17 writer….

    Angel Fire
    Tina is caught
    chapter 6

    Previously

    But now Tina was heading down the home stretch of her scene. When she finished, she planned to swim laps in the pool. It was growing dark and the water was cool today.

    As Vanessa began a rhythmic movement of her hips, Adrian knew that this was a signal to her…a signal that she was ready to be entered. Adrian had not only been thinking about this tonight, she had been thinking about this intimacy since the first time she kissed Vanessa. So, a little fearfully, she inserted her fingers inside Vanessa. And Adrian stayed inside her lover and moved inside her lover until Vanessa was spent

    She saved the document, but left it open momentarily to reread the scene.

    “Who are Adrian and Vanessa?” Asked someone standing behind her.
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    chapter 6

    Bette and Tina’s bedroom

    Tina actually yelled in fright when she heard that question. She had thrown herself forward on the bed to cover the computer. The laptop fell to the floor and she fell to one side as the questioner’s body hurtled past her and onto the floor.

    Bette grabbed the laptop, opened it and was beginning to read aloud: “Vanessa extended her tongue slightly….” but stopped as she was tackled by her wife. Bette, Tina, and the laptop fell on the floor in a tangle of arms, legs and technology as both women struggled to get control of the computer.

    Bette had been quietly standing behind Tina for sometime and had read much of the sex scene, but still enjoyed the struggling and her wife’s horror at being caught. Tina had been so engrossed in what she was writing that she hadn’t sensed Bette behind her.

    “So Vanessa likes her lover’s tongue to come up her cheek and into her ear?” Bette was chuckling. “Who would have thought?”

    She was holding Tina on the bed as the blonde kept squirming to break free. But the chuckle stopped Tina. It was the Bette-sexy-low-chuckle and Tina began to feel goose bumps forming on her body. In a matter of just a few moments, both women had shed their clothes and turned down the bed.

    “When’s Angel getting home?” Bette had asked as she was undressing Tina.

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    2. I loved this chapter – both for the teasing and “teasing” between these two and because of the way you ended it – IMO and as a parent I have to ssay if Angel could ask for help in figuring this out then these two could get over themselves and be there for whatever questions she has.

    4. Ok, back to add my $0.02. Now this s a chapter I’ll just call sexy and smart. Sexy…well, its Bette; ‘nuff said. Smart because Angie is always thinking and so as not to embarrass her moms, she left the house. Smart girl!!

    5. see now i thought you were going to say she saw them… and then left… i think they need to just sit and talk… so let her read the story tina wrote… it could be an ice breaker… loving this story… please continue

    6. OMG she had sex, didn’t she? Man I hope it didn’t suck seeing as she was so quiet and somber when she came home the first time. DAMN this chapter was hot. B&T fighting over the laptop cracked me up!

    8. So, these women have never had to replace a cracked laptop screen…maybe they have accidental insurance…maybe they got it like that…I don’t know. Back to the story…

    9. This display of ‘affection’ is just exactly what Angel was asking for. Is she should happen to come home eary, Angel could learn a lot from their technique – if she doesn’t turn into a pillar of salt with her eyeballs exploded first (her eyes! her eyes!)…back to the story…

    10. this is lovely — so sweet and shows the love between the three of them. i wouldn’t have put either bette or tina down as the blushing types. thanks

    14. ““We’re right here,” Bette said dryly. ” The Bette sang-froid! I love your Bette. Love her! The teenaged-pregnancy bit – did you read my comments on Manda’s last chapter? Seems you two are running congruently – those Porter girls are hot to trot, aren’t they? Thank you!

    16. I thought that she was going to take a look at the story on the laptop before she left, LOL. B&T should go on and fess up now by letting Angel read the story, digest it and talk to her about it. The question is how far will the apple fall from the tree? Will Angie turn out to be more like Bette or Tina?

    21. Hey Pancha, this story just gets better and better. I loved the story within a story device. Having Tina narrate her and Bette’s sexual antics was a hilarious and hysterical scene then to have it played out was a mark of genius. This shows Bette and Tina at their best and most loving. The compassion and care they have for one another was there in spades. Now they just need to verbalise this to Angelica. Maybe Tina’s story can get them started and then they could let Angelica ask the questions which they would then answer as honestly and openly as possible. I am sure whatever way you decide will be a delight to read. Thank you for this magnificent melodrama. Your Loyal Fan.

    22. Yes, Angel may be on fire, but her brain is mis-firing ‘cuz she left her gym bag out where her moms would see it! This was too funny; especially when Bette is teasing Tina. If they do decide to let Angie read the story, Tina should go back and edit it to add in all the left out details that I’m sure Angie already knows! LOL Hope you have a great weekend P and thanks for the post!

    24. Wow this post was so great and funny, the best yet in this story. It was hilarious, sweet, hot, sexy a so on…I love this story – you write so brilliant. The way Angel came home very loud and Bettes comment is just priceless LOL and great banter between B&T. More please….

    25. Glad it was Bette that caught Tina writing and not Angie. Although Tina needs to revise her story just a bit and include some things that she left out. Bette’s teasing Tina was kinda cute and the lack of funning on Tina’s behalf, “Dammit, Bette” showed just how much her own story had her worked up and ready for Bette. Maybe Angie has already had her moment of truth and nwo needs some questions ansered. They should be able to tell her now w/o being embarrased to death. Love the story.

    30. I was actually rolling of my chair with laughter! This is so funny! “The worst thing about a lesbian relationship is that you can’t get pregnant,” Bette said reflectively. “And the best thing about a lesbian relationship is that you can’t get pregnant.” LMFAO Thats for sure! Oh and “Maybe if it’s really bad, they won’t want to have it again.” OMG so hilarious! Please post soon!

    32. You’re fun! This was a really great chapter. Angie is so cool the way she left the house after seeing her moms naked together. Thank you for creating this beautiful story!

    36. i think you are doing a great job with this story, and you are right, no one wants to look stupid trying to have sex with someone!!!!!great writing!!!

    39. i didn’t comment on the last chapter, was out of town, so here’s for both of them: this was funny (and hot of course) and i’m so agree on the nc-17…they are the hardest for me to write…maybe i should find Lesbian sex for dummies to help with that…i hope angie’s first experience would be good

    41. Tina and Bette, meet embarrassment. Embarrassment, this is Tina and Bette. Brace yourself Angelica, sadly, you may have the “do you want to talk about what you saw” conversation…and you’ll never be the same…never. Another sexcellent chapter Pancha! You know I’m looking forward to the next one. Please post soon.

    42. Can I be Angel and walk in and see her moms together. This was so cute and funny. B and T fighting over the computer and then putting into practice most of the story that Tina wrote. I was laughing when Bette kept reminding Tina that certain parts where not in the story. Then Tina telling her but she was asking. This was a very cute chapter. Have a fun R&R.

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