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Angel Fire – 6
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“She’ll be late. She phoned,” Tina gasped.
“Why don’t you extend your tongue slightly,” Bette said softly to her lover.
Tina relaxed and did exactly that. Bette took the tongue between her lips and drew it into her mouth where Tina’s tongue explored and Bette’s danced around hers.
“Are our tongues teasing each other?” Bette chuckled as she pulled back momentarily.
Tina was going to hurl back a retort, but then there was that low chuckle again and all she could think of what how much she wanted her wife.
Bette moved to Tina’s neck and slowly and lightly ran her tongue up Tina’s jaw and cheek and around her ear. Tina groaned with pleasure.
“Where’s the ‘rhythmic movement’ of your hips?” Bette asked sexily.
“Huh?” Tina gasped.
“Doesn’t that tongue-in-ear thing make you ready to be entered?”
“What? No. Please touch my breasts,” asked Tina, arching up into Bette.
Bette began touching Tina in the way that Adrian had touched Vanessa in the story.
“No, baby,” gasped Tina. “Touch me the way you do. The way I love.”
“That wasn’t what Adrian and Vanessa did.”
“Well, they should have.”
Bette’s face turned serious and she turned her attention to Tina’s nipples. While she continued caressing one nipple, her mouth softly covered the other and her tongue began to “dance” with the nipple. Tina responded by moving her chest so that the nipple joined in the dance. She smiled lustfully as she moved so that her nipple would “tease” Bette’s tongue, over and over and over.
Bette began to circle the nipple with her tongue and the other nipple with her finger. She expanded the circles until she just touched the bottom of the breasts. Then her tongue and hands began to move down her wife’s abdomen. Her tongue paused briefly at Tina’s navel and then moved into her curls.
By this time, the scene in the bedroom was somewhat like the scene on Tina’s computer in that Tina’s hips were moving rhythmically, waiting for Bette, signaling Bette. She moved through Tina’s slickness, carefully attended to her swollen, hyper-sensitive clit with her long fingers.
“Use your mouth, baby.”
“That wasn’t in the script either,” Bette whispered evilly.
Tina reached down with both her hands and grabbed Bette’s head.
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1st………..brb
I loved this chapter – both for the teasing and “teasing” between these two and because of the way you ended it – IMO and as a parent I have to ssay if Angel could ask for help in figuring this out then these two could get over themselves and be there for whatever questions she has.
LOL! this story is too cute! Have fun on your R&R!
Ok, back to add my $0.02. Now this s a chapter I’ll just call sexy and smart. Sexy…well, its Bette; ‘nuff said. Smart because Angie is always thinking and so as not to embarrass her moms, she left the house. Smart girl!!
see now i thought you were going to say she saw them… and then left… i think they need to just sit and talk… so let her read the story tina wrote… it could be an ice breaker… loving this story… please continue
OMG she had sex, didn’t she? Man I hope it didn’t suck seeing as she was so quiet and somber when she came home the first time. DAMN this chapter was hot. B&T fighting over the laptop cracked me up!
This was so cute,they had been caugh by a horny teen-ager. go finish typing and give it to Angel so she can live alittle. thanks
So, these women have never had to replace a cracked laptop screen…maybe they have accidental insurance…maybe they got it like that…I don’t know. Back to the story…
This display of ‘affection’ is just exactly what Angel was asking for. Is she should happen to come home eary, Angel could learn a lot from their technique – if she doesn’t turn into a pillar of salt with her eyeballs exploded first (her eyes! her eyes!)…back to the story…
this is lovely — so sweet and shows the love between the three of them. i wouldn’t have put either bette or tina down as the blushing types. thanks
This was very educational, um, I mean enjoyable. : ) Enjoy the R&R.
tht was one sizzler tht you served us right there..tht was so cool of betty and tina to even think abt sumthin like tht to provide sex ed to their angelhahaha still laughin at horny runs in family lol
Pancha..You story has the right combination of humor, seriousness and lovemaking. They seem like a real family. Well done!
““We’re right here,†Bette said dryly. ” The Bette sang-froid! I love your Bette. Love her! The teenaged-pregnancy bit – did you read my comments on Manda’s last chapter? Seems you two are running congruently – those Porter girls are hot to trot, aren’t they? Thank you!
Woah! That was funny and hot at the same time! I’ve a question: – What’s the brand of the laptop!? :D Great job pancha!
I thought that she was going to take a look at the story on the laptop before she left, LOL. B&T should go on and fess up now by letting Angel read the story, digest it and talk to her about it. The question is how far will the apple fall from the tree? Will Angie turn out to be more like Bette or Tina?
Yay! *doing my little happy dance*. This story is so funny and cute..I fell in love with these 3 horny Portard. lol
I love the dynamics of this family. Thanks for the funnies and hotness!! Enjoy the R&R!
loved it and loved the way the girls came together.
love t and b helping angel with sex–was a hot chapter too
Hey Pancha, this story just gets better and better. I loved the story within a story device. Having Tina narrate her and Bette’s sexual antics was a hilarious and hysterical scene then to have it played out was a mark of genius. This shows Bette and Tina at their best and most loving. The compassion and care they have for one another was there in spades. Now they just need to verbalise this to Angelica. Maybe Tina’s story can get them started and then they could let Angelica ask the questions which they would then answer as honestly and openly as possible. I am sure whatever way you decide will be a delight to read. Thank you for this magnificent melodrama. Your Loyal Fan.
Yes, Angel may be on fire, but her brain is mis-firing ‘cuz she left her gym bag out where her moms would see it! This was too funny; especially when Bette is teasing Tina. If they do decide to let Angie read the story, Tina should go back and edit it to add in all the left out details that I’m sure Angie already knows! LOL Hope you have a great weekend P and thanks for the post!
This is so funny and fun, what a fun family. Oklet see what’s next, thanks!
Wow this post was so great and funny, the best yet in this story. It was hilarious, sweet, hot, sexy a so on…I love this story – you write so brilliant. The way Angel came home very loud and Bettes comment is just priceless LOL and great banter between B&T. More please….
Glad it was Bette that caught Tina writing and not Angie. Although Tina needs to revise her story just a bit and include some things that she left out. Bette’s teasing Tina was kinda cute and the lack of funning on Tina’s behalf, “Dammit, Bette” showed just how much her own story had her worked up and ready for Bette. Maybe Angie has already had her moment of truth and nwo needs some questions ansered. They should be able to tell her now w/o being embarrased to death. Love the story.
HAHA! I knew! SO funny. I love Tina’s “Well, they should have.” And Angel’s entrance. Classic. Can’t wait for me.
LOVED IT
This such a refreshing story….Ahhh it is tough being a kid, even when u r trying 2 do the right thing……….
Very good, funny and everything, love it !
I was actually rolling of my chair with laughter! This is so funny! “The worst thing about a lesbian relationship is that you can’t get pregnant,†Bette said reflectively. “And the best thing about a lesbian relationship is that you can’t get pregnant.†LMFAO Thats for sure! Oh and “Maybe if it’s really bad, they won’t want to have it again.†OMG so hilarious! Please post soon!
love this story….I laughed out loud and I am at work!!!I love how Bette is teasing Tina about her story….fanfic within fanfic!!!
You’re fun! This was a really great chapter. Angie is so cool the way she left the house after seeing her moms naked together. Thank you for creating this beautiful story!
LOL! too cute! ha~ post soon!!
this was great, a breath of fresh air so to speak, from all of the monotony.
I just got caught up. This is great. Please post soon.
i think you are doing a great job with this story, and you are right, no one wants to look stupid trying to have sex with someone!!!!!great writing!!!
They’re so cute, all of them. I wish I would have such a family one day. =)
That was too funny. Enjoy the R&R.
i didn’t comment on the last chapter, was out of town, so here’s for both of them: this was funny (and hot of course) and i’m so agree on the nc-17…they are the hardest for me to write…maybe i should find Lesbian sex for dummies to help with that…i hope angie’s first experience would be good
i thin her mothers giving to angel a little think about sex! well i hope angel can read the writing and she will be succes.
Tina and Bette, meet embarrassment. Embarrassment, this is Tina and Bette. Brace yourself Angelica, sadly, you may have the “do you want to talk about what you saw” conversation…and you’ll never be the same…never. Another sexcellent chapter Pancha! You know I’m looking forward to the next one. Please post soon.
Can I be Angel and walk in and see her moms together. This was so cute and funny. B and T fighting over the computer and then putting into practice most of the story that Tina wrote. I was laughing when Bette kept reminding Tina that certain parts where not in the story. Then Tina telling her but she was asking. This was a very cute chapter. Have a fun R&R.