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    Pretty Women, Episode 2

    Story written on June 4, 2006 by justloveB+T.
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    The ride to the hotel… A Bette and Tina beginning, Pretty Woman style

     

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    * * * * * * * * *Music starts playing, Roy Orbison’s ‘Pretty woman’* * * * * * * * * *

     

    Words start rolling on the screen, letter by letter, and they form the following:

     

     

    * * * * * * * * * * * * * *   TINA KENNARD * * * * * * * * * * * * * *

     

     * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * *& * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * *

     

      * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * BETTE PORTER * * * * * * * * * * * * * *

     

     

     * * * * * * * * * * * * *Star in the JLBT production * * * * * * * * * * * *

     

     

    * * * * * * * * * * * *PRETTY WOMEN * * * * * * * * * * * * *

     

    **************Last time on the JLBT production PRETTY WOMEN: ****************

     

    We see a reshot of Bette, mumbling she can’t drive a stickshift due to the fact she’s a lesbian, and of Tina, hugging Shane before making her way over to the car. Then we see how Tina asks money for directions and how she puts away the 20 while getting in the car: ‘For a 20, I will show you’

    # the scene  fades away and we see the HOLLYWOOD sign, before

    the camera turns and we see Bette and Tina in the car #

     

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    Pretty Women, Episode 2

     

     

    What hotel are you staying in?

     

    Tina asked, while placing get hand on Bette’s in order to help her get the car in first gear.

     

    The Regent Beverly Hills

     

    The beautifull brunette curiously glances over at the confident redhaid that just jumped into her car and chuckled… Well… She could use a guide… The soft, cool hand that laid on top of her felt incredibly natural, and Bette felt the headache that had been coming up, fade away.

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    3. you know what’s good about this story? even if i know the ending i still want to read it…i like the confident tina and hesitent bette, they are so fit for each other

    4. well Tina know how to mmake deals! LOL! This is so good! The first Bette’s car was a limo? please it’s not funny! what about all the emotion to learn to drive like little crash, or stay like 3 hours trying to park the car? i hope read in this weak unless one chapter of whatever of your 3 excellent stories take care!

    5. I am PRETTY WOMAN fan, a Bette fan, a B&T fan and an ‘old fashion romantic happy ending’ fan ; so this story is very much loved! I really can’t wait for each post! Makes me want to watch the movie again. I have it in my collection. =)Thanks for writing this. I am enjoying it! Please… by all means… continue.

    8. Love this . Czn.t wait for a lot of thing In the Lobby,Dinner Polo Just waiting for the whole thing. Love J Roberts and Gere , but like your best thanks

    11. Nice… but again too short :P. I can’t wait for the jacuzzi scene ;) PS: Insecureness?? after 3 great stories writing AT THE SAME TIME??? You’re kidding right?

    13. Love the new story setting you have going on is this wonderfull new story – like the idea of turning an excellent movie into a story…way to go. Post soon

    14. Oh man, you are such a TEASE!!!!!!!!! Can’t get enough. Why don’t you be a full time writer, and fulfil our NEED! lol… please post SOON :)

    18. This is a dream come true….one of the best movie ever with lesbian characters….and not anyone characters but Bette Porter and Tina Kennard

    21. well even if after reading it i can’t get roy orbison out of my head, your story is great (but yep chapters are too short…tease)post soon!

    23. Well..am letting you know that…I love this story too…your are a master writer, no storyline is a challenge for you…keep up the good work and I will be waiting for any of your postes….

    27. Hey, Captain you are righting the ship. Those Eros are hitting the spot dead on. This is awesome. I can’t wait for them to get in the room. Still waiting for the bath tub scene. Those sparks are starting to fizzle.

    30. ladies she is not called Slowburn for any reason…..sumhow wheni see your post i know you are gonna tease us to to end like you did with ur other story..I love it absolutly love itwill ya be a sweety and post soon :) your loyal fan

    32. Oh wow… :D u sure know how to ‘control’ our emotions with your words :D I can’t wipe away the wide grin on my face now. The story is soooo cooollll and Tina is so hottttttt and cute ;) Please post soon…

    33. Love this twist on one of my most favorite of all, movies. Now, to echo the comments of some of the others….why the short chapters? It’s not like the storyline isn’t already there for you….the script is written….just do your magic and add a little more spice… Great idea to make the main characters lesbians. Other favorites of mine are….”Somewhere in Time” and “A Walk in the Clouds.” How great would it be to take all the classic love stories that have been made into movies, take out the male lead and replace them with a drop dead gorgous female. Looking forward to your next installment.

    35. Yeah, it only happens with your stories but you have 3 now!! not my fault “What do you want it to be” JLBT I love this Tina!! Thanks! awesome update!

    38. Ahh you killing us slowly here my friend but we all love you. This is good chapter and like the way they have feeling for each other. Ok post soon please and a little longer please, thanks!

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