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Pretty Women, episode 1 (don’t forget to read the pilot)
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* * * * * * * * *Music starts playing, Roy Orbison’s ‘Pretty woman’* * * * * * * * * *
Words start rolling on the screen, letter by letter, and they form the following:
* * * * * * * * * * * * * * TINA KENNARD * * * * * * * * * * * * * *
* * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * *& * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * *
* * * * * * * * * * * * * * * BETTE PORTER * * * * * * * * * * * * * *
* * * * * * * * * * * * *Star in the JLBT production * * * * * * * * * * * *
* * * * * * * * * * * *PRETTY WOMEN * * * * * * * * * * * * *
********Last time on the JLBT production PRETTY WOMEN: ********
We see a reshot of Tina, reading the postcard her son send her and of Bette, taking her lawyer Erics carkeys and getting away : ‘Beverly hills is DOWNHILL!’
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# the scene fades away and we see the HOLLYWOOD sight, before
the camera turns and we see Tina walk on Hollywood boulevard #
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PRETTY WOMEN, Episode 1
Hey Tina!
Shane McCutcheon was leaning against a pillar on Hollywood boulevard and smiled broadly as she discovered her best friend, who stood in her tracks and turned around. The boyish looking, shorthaired girl hugged Tina briefly and took a lock of her red hair between her fingers, looking over at her friend with a cocked eyebrow.
What? No good?
Tina asked Shane, suddenly insecure… Shane was the only friend she had in LA, and the best she had ever had in her life… Shane always saw right through people and she was a master at giving advice and keeping secrets. The brownhaired girl had been working the streets for quite some years now. Her boyish appearance made her attractive to gay and bi-sexual men, who paid generously for her small ‘favors’.
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(39 votes, average: 4.21 out of 5)
Cool poster you have there… LOL… it’s sooo cute. Longer story… can’t have enough of it ;) Yea, so u know a 7 kid wouldn’t really understand that movie right? hehe ;)
Ooh, Bette better watch out. ;) I love this story already. I can’t wait to see what comes next…seeing as I have no clue what’s supposed to happen…ya big line thief. Haha. Kidding, kidding. Excellent update though. Please, continue soon.
it’s just like watching the movie only it’s better because Tina and Bette in it…julia roberts who?
one more thing: congratulations on the fantasy challenge win, your story was awesome ;)
I love it every much. LOL… I can see you have put a lot of efforts in this story, I like the poster idea! LMAO when I saw it. Give me a shout if you need more help in that department. POST SOON, can’t wait for more! And don’t forget the other stories of yours.
More please
Hi…read the pilot…Can´t believe I missed the first post…hm…I lovvr it…it´s great, can´t wait to see were your are taking us…and the cover..really nice touch… :)
Love it..and where your are taking us… yez my spelling sucks…
too short…i love it! post soon pls
Ok, alright…I like it!! Now, will you stop teasing us with these short chapters??? LOL
JLBT you such a tease and this chater is to short but like it. They are cute and funny, cant wait to see what’s next. Post soon please, thanks!
well well well, Bette, I can do it for u free…hahaha….anyway…please continue and SOON…thank u…
Hé, this is really something different, and i like it mmmmmmmm.
Fucking hilarious….loved the picture :o))
Frist to comment I hope…Loved it B+T keep up the good work =)
Her head was throbbing with pain and she couldn’t get herself to efficiently use that stickshift thing… ‘At least I can throw that on the fact that I am a lesbian…’ LMAO!!!!! Man this is already smokin’ hot! Still loving Tina with red hair. *dies*
so glad you posted this i loved the idea from the pilot. more please ASAP.
I’m loving this story. keep it cumming
its darn hard to multitask between ffs thread bettilicous and readin your chapp i am gonna read this firstthen go and post there and then move my ass to workhehehe
now tht was a good readtina as a red headwow
hehehe im loving this take on b&t Fantastic – looking forward to the next installment – loved the pic made me giggle
I love it…but to short…
Dear B+T… you’re teasing right??? it’s too short… LOL! maybe the next time a couple of lines more… maybe during the weekend??? ;)
OMG where can I find a Tina. I am sure that Tina was really thrown after Bette took her hair down. Man, my imagination is running wild just picturing Bette and then Tina. You made my day. I can not wait for the next scene.
I loved Pretty Woman and this is going to be a lot of fun with Tina dn Bette as the principal characters. Keep the chapters coming our way.
I’m so loving this story! But please, longer posts! :) Post as soon as you can!
Read the title but didn’t pay attention to the author, what’s wrong with me??? for $20 I can show you, man, I almost faint! what a tease!
I love it! But it’s too short! You must post it at least on a daily base. Please~~~ *wink*
Love it, love it, love it. My only complaint is too short. This version is better than the original.
This is so cute!!!! Waiting for the next chapter.
Oh prety woman another wonderful story, look forward to more from you
mmmm M&M’s are ok i can buy something for you i like it too!. the beginnig of the chapter is so good and the picture excellente you get an A for it! don’t you thing $20 is a low price? Tina is priceless! the next please!