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Masked Feelings CH 46 Downhill Spiral
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Tina – Hello.
Alice – Tina… you have to help. I told Dana the truth and now she’s gone. You have to help me find her, before something really bad happens to her!
Tina – What?! Why didn’t you call me before you were going to tell her?
Alice – Spare the lecture, Tina. I feel bad enough.
Tina – So how bad was it?
Alice – The worst… Dana stormed out of here. I didn’t even get the chance to tell her everything. It’s gotten so much worse… you don’t know the trouble that I’ve managed to get myself into.
Tina – You can tell me about it later. I’m coming over.
Alice – I should go after her.
Tina – No, don’t do that. Stay put till I get there. I mean it, Alice.
Alice – Just hurry.
Dana’s heart was breaking but she was too pissed off to feel the real pain. She was experiencing what most would call "rage". She kept slamming her hands against the steering wheel… swerving around traffic. Dana was going to go straight to Roxy’s but saw a liquor store and pulled over. She only ever used alcohol to have a good time and when she did it was with friends. Not the case this time, she wanted to get fucked up…. and fuck Roxy up. Alice could go to hell as far as Dana was concerned… and Roxy could join her there. Going through the door, she walks over to the section with all the hard liquor and picked up a bottle of Jack Daniels. Walking over to the counter, she set it down and handed money to the clerk. She walked out with the clerk yelling at her because she forgot her change, but she didn’t hear over her own swearing. Climbing back into her car, she cracked the bottle open and took a long drink of the amber liquid. It burned as it went down and left a fire in her stomach. It wasn’t what she was use to drinking but she wanted something strong enough to dull her senses. The worst feelings were stuffed down… waiting to be released, where and how was yet to be determined. She took another drink… then another, each going down a little easier. Dana started up the car and drove down the street.
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Wonderful….I love it, aggressive Dana, beating the shit out of Roxy. I had hoped for this day but didn’t think it would come. Some great one liners in here, Prxy’s being my favorite “Yeah poor baby, here hands must hurt from bashing my face in.” That’s classic, also a good one from Shane’s comments to Carmen are spoken like a friend who’s trying to help in an almost helpless situation. I like that your drunk Dana’s kind of like the sexual predator of straight college girls. You blindsided me when Sara walked in, kind of leaving me with a cliffhanger. Is she going to sleep with her? I don’t know and it kills me inside! Maybe I’ll try and get the inside snippet. I do live for your torture, I am a glutton for your kind of punishment love. You can have all the chocolate you want babe, no way I’m leaving although I’m sure you could come up with creative ways to make me stay ;) You completely floored me with the NC-17 but that’s cool you know I love the floor…or the bed…or the passenger seat of a truck. I am taken with Roxy a regular smartass just like me, and I’m all tied up for you love always. I am anxiously awaiting next Sunday. PS. CD says Hi!
Dana was lucky that Lisa’s boyfriend didn’t do to her what she did to Roxy. I thought Bette’s reaction was very judgemental. She doesn’t completely understand what Alice has gone through. Sleeping with Roxy in Dana’s home may have been too much to forgive, but Bette didn’t have to lay into her like that. I was surprised that Roxy went down like such a punk with Dana. I’ve imagined her as big and tough. Little Dana kicked her butt! lol
lol, yeah alias did end w/ a lot angst. hoo man, it’s true that hell hath no fury like a woman scorned. totally cheered for dana when she beat the shit out of roxy. i liked that dana was aggressive and a sexual predator. really out of character, but it works for her. glad that u reintroduced sara into the story. can’t wait to read what happens b/n dana and sara. i hope dana remembers what lisa said, “i need to try to work this out with… i’ve invested too much time with him just to throw it all away.” *dana don’t give up on alice!*
hmmm, now that sara is back will we find out what the hell happened w/ lara? i hope this coming week is not as busy for u. laters sweetie! ^ – ^
This story becomes so much more interesting as it goes on. I love the fact that Dana beat the living hell outta Roxy. But Im worried about the whole Sara issue. That makes me nervous. I wish Roxy would take a f**king from Alice and just stay the hell away. Ill be so glad when Roxy just dies or disappears. I really enjoy this Kristen character. She is so understanding and warmheart. I hope Roxy dont hurt her though. I do hope that Alice and Dana can work everything out because that would suck if it didnt. Im loving this whole story. Please keep us updated.
What’s got you a little distracted…?
Wow at least now Dana knows everything, but the road to forgiveness is long and hard, Alice has to do a lot of work for gain that. Keep going.
Man Roxy sure is EVIL im so glad Dana kicked her ass! :) “i try to keep it interesting” you dont have to try! lol cuz its obvious it just flows from you and such an awesome way at that. Can’t wait for the next chap, consider me glued here waiting :)
I was thinking the exact same as Wittybanter! Will we get to know more about what happened to Lara (there’s still this unsolved mystery of her missing body :))? And I haven’t heard of the clock for a long time. That one isn’t solved either. :D I really enjoyed Dana beating Roxy up (she did knock Roxy off balance there!)! Roxy is definitely on a mission…and she seems to be more determined than ever. Good to see the gang and Kristen (!) could help Alice out by looking for Dana. Bette was tough on Alice, but Alice deserved it. She (is) totally messed up… I hope it’s a good thing that Dana ran into Sara. Maybe she can talk some sense into Dana…or just get her to bed (by that I mean in a non-sexual way…just to let her sober up! :P ). I would like it if Shane or Kristen would be the first to track Dana down. I think they’re the only ones who can get through to Dana right now and stop her from making some immense faults. Dana and Alice have a long road to go…eventually it all comes down to their love for each other (but will it be strong enough?). I have this inkling that something really big is gonna happen, that this is all the calm before the storm and all hell will breake loose (or am I just protecting myself by thinking the worst…well, there’s no talking of an upward spiral in the near future, that’s for sure!). I’m looking forward to next sunday, I hope you don’t get distracted too much. :D
Wow! I love it, i loved the angry dana! Please continue writing, i’ll love to come back from my holiday and have a story to read!
Oi, don’t have as much time as before, but I got in on two great fic’s yours and your mates CD…lovin’ it. It’s bloody awesome, ta…cheers mate..
Ohmygoodness! Go Dana! Give the girl a little liquid courage and she’s a real spitfire. I can’t tell you how much I loved her beating Roxy to a pulp. So wonderful. Once again you’ve put me on the edge of my seat… I’m already dying for more. I don’t trust Sara. I still believe there is something evil lurking in the corners of this story. Something wicked this way comes.
wow Dana’s such a sleaze… nice work.
I love it mad dana do not mess with her can’t wait to see what happens next please post soon and it is still getting better and better
And yet again you made mee feel: hurt, anger, desperation, love….and lots more. I hate that Roxy was the one who told Dana the whole story, it should have been Alice but she couldn’t have. I would have been pissed as hell if someone cheated on me but knowing the truth in the end is always better. Dana beating the crap out of Roxy was my personal high in this chapter, but you knew that! Sara ha…that’s interesting maybe Dana will get her sympathy sex after all. Looking forward to Dana and Alice talking even though that may be awhile. I keep having faith in a great outcome. I can’t comment for the next two updates because I’m going on holiday but I’ll catch up as soon as I can. Loved this chapter and love you for writing it. See ya!
Holy Sh*t Dana is PISSED! Great job at writing the extremely angry Dana. The build back of Alice and Dana should be interesting. I’m not really sure how you’re going to bring the one around but it’ll be interesting finding out. I’m excited for the next update!!!
Interesting twist at the end, I wonder if Dana will run into David too, that could be really awkward.