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More Than a Feeling
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When her disc jockeying shift ended, Carmen walked back over to Shane, who hadn’t moved from her spot. She did, however, have sunglasses on, again, most likely to check out women without them noticing. Carmen shook her head, chuckling, as she approached the lanky brunette, whose eyes were currently scoping out the back of some Barbie clone. She moved to the side, out of Shane‘s sight, and when she was close enough, whispered, “Enjoying the view?”
Shane nearly fell off the stool in surprise. She whipped around, coming face to face with a now laughing Carmen, turning red now that she had been caught. “What?” She bellowed, raising her eyebrows in innocence. “I like her jeans.”
“Sure you do.” Carmen smirked, watching Shane’s momentary embarrassment fade, and her confidence return. “You wanna get out of here or what?”
Shane sipped the last of her drink before nodding. “Let’s do it.” She hopped off the barstool, eager to go.
Carmen pointed her thumb behind herself. “My van’s out in the back.” Shane nodded, motioning with her hand for Carmen to lead the way. Carmen started ahead, glancing back at Shane, who was right behind her. Am I doing something stupid here? Well, it was too late to second guess herself.
They reached the van in no time, Carmen opening up the door to let Shane in before getting in herself. Once she was settled, she turned to say something, but Shane was two steps ahead, planting a rough kiss on her lips. She felt a jolt run through her body, warming her up, before roughly pushing Shane off. “What the fuck!” She shouted, wiping her mouth with the back of her hand.
Shane sat with her back against the door, momentarily stunned before quickly recovering. “What? Isn’t this what you want?”
“No! Jesus fuck!” Carmen couldn’t help the small giggle that escaped her lips. She really caught me off guard there. “I was hoping we could get to know a little bit more about each other.”
“Huh?”
“I want to know things. Tell me where you grew up. Tell me…tell me what school you go to or…or about your parents. Mom, dad? Sisters, brothers?”
Shane sits there, staring at Carmen. Is she serious? She doesn’t move or speak, so Carmen decides to continue.
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IM SOOO GLAD YOU FOUND THE TIME TODAY TO POST.I WAS MISSING THIS STORY.PLEASE FOLLOW IT UP REAL SOON. THXS
I’ve been missing this story like crazy! Can’t wait for B&T to talk about what happened at the beach. Oh and this cracked me up: “Okay.” Tina stood back and let Bette leave, suddenly feeling better about everything. She felt weightless, numb…And then the sting of her sunburn returned. LMAO!
You post! this is so good! i like so much this story! poor Tina with she must to feel bad! i am waiting for the talk too!
Ahh i love your story so much, post again and soon…maybe even tonight, hopefully with a lot more on bette and tina!
Right now I’m at work and the excitement of this new chapter hasn’t subsided yet. Once I return to a relaxed state of mind, I’ll add a follow-up comment. Viva More Than a Feeling!
Yay! It was about time Manda! lol, I know people get busy most of the time… so, what’s the deal between Lara and Dana? well, I know what’s the deal but I want my Danish!!
Yay! So glad you posted Manda! Nothing to forgive, just glad you haven’t forgotten about us! Can’t wait for more!
i missed this story, i’m glad you’re back…can’t wait for B&T to talk and also how dana is going to explain lara to everybody
Thank goodness, I was starting to wonder if you were ever coming back! ;) Poor Tina. But I can’t wait until they talk. As for Dana and Alice, I worry about them, as a couple, but I hope everything works out. Please don’t keep us waiting as long next time! :)
MANDA! finally hun! omggg, so glad you posted. You know i am in absolute love with your story, awesome post, and please please try hard and post sooner..i can’t wait to see shane with carmen and tina’s talk with bette…adios!
Ahh poor Tina and can’t wait for her and Bette talk. This is good that Dana give Alice a chance and let them work thing out. Ok post soon please, thanks!
gee whiz, i hope you find time and energy to post soon, i’m enjoying this story so much and time Bette and Tina had that ‘talk’.
yes!!!!! you are back *does happy dance*. poor sunburned tina. hope you post again soon with b&t’s talk. =)
Great to see a post from you – I love this story. I’m trying to picture Tina as a tomato LOL, I bet she is the cutest tomato in history :o)) I can understand why Dana gave in to Alice, but I still think it’s a mistake. She is visible smitten with Lara. I’m really looking forward to B&T going to talk after school, they need it and so do I…..post soon.
High school Bette, Tina, Alice, Dana and Shane are fun to read about. All those feelings and scared of what to do with them. I really hope that both Bette and Tina can have an open discussion about what to do next. This is hard to pick about Dana, Alice, and Lara. My first pick would be Alice. Shane really should let Carmen in. Excited about what the next post will include
Hey Manda. So happy to see you post. Was missing this… Love the way the story is progressing and looking forward to B&T’s talk … now what will Alice do when Lara joins them for lunch…
Manda, girl, I have been laid up from a martial arts injury facing potential back surgery since my promise to comment on 6/21/06. As for me, M to the E = no SURGE to the RY! I’m hoping to get out of it. Anyway, you know I’m still craving this story in a way that is completely unhealthy yet satisfying. All of the ladies in this story have a had a rough couple of days so hopefully they get some quality time with their significant others and work it all out. Hope you’ll hook us up with another chapter soon. Go easy with the school and seriously take some time out for yourself this summer.