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Angel Fire
Brunch – Bette, Tina and Yvonne-Marie
chapter 15
Their home -two days after Bette talked to Tina about her past
“Where are you guys going?” Angie asked as her moms prepared the leave the house.
“Out to breakfast, brunch actually,” Bette answered. “Are you seeing Stacy today?”
“She’s out of town for a few days, so you guys are stuck with me.”
Angie always hated it when she and Stacy couldn’t see each other, but maybe it was just as well at this point. She didn’t know how much longer she could wait before she threw Stacy on her back somewhere and started undressing her.
Bette knew how Angel felt because she was always uncomfortable when Tina was out of town. Angelica had told Tina that when she was gone that Bette was like a “grumpy panther with a sore paw.”
“Could I join you?” Angie asked hopefully.
“Oh, sweetest,” answered Bette, “it’s business.”
It disappointed her that she couldn’t have breakfast with her folks because she needed the company. Maybe Shane was home.
“When are you going to be back?”
“Probably around 1:00,” Bette answered shortly
“So you’re having a long brunch.”
“That’s right,” Bette answered again.
Angie noticed that her mom Tina hadn’t commented about this engagement.
“Where are you going?” Their lonesome daughter was stalling them.
“Roberto’s.” Bette said, naming one of the restaurants well-known for its elegant brunch menu.
“You both look very pretty.”
“Thank you,” grinned Bette.
“Have I seen that necklace before?” Angie asked Bette.
“Yes, you have,” Bette said, kissing Angel. “Sweetest, we have to go.”
Angie’s stalling tactics had reached an end as her moms began moving toward the door. Their daughter followed them, still not wanting to let go.
“Who are you meeting?”
“Our real estate agent,” Tina said sweetly, speaking for the first time.
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As they drove toward the restaurant, Bette thought back to those first defining sexual experiences. She had returned to the Ideal Realty several days after her liaison with Yvonne-Marie.
She made love to Denise, something she was not allowed to do with Yvonne. That had been part of the arrangement. Bette had dearly wanted to make love to Yvonne and was disappointed when she learned that it wasn’t to be, but she had accepted it.
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1st brb
Lamentamini – You’re faster than a speeding bullet!
Seems to be one fortunate family.
What a tale you are weaving… So far I’m with Tina on this, not quite ready to endsorse the Von Deflowering Treatment for Angelica, but I’m enjoying the story. : )
hehehe I just happened to refresh the page and saw 2 hits on this one. Oh and about the Google search. All I got was a crappy Wikipedia definition and porn links. :( You know, this story actually did make me stop and think about things. No one wants to fumble or have someone fumble with them As I’ve gotten older I’ve been able to look at sex more objectively. I’m not sure though if I could be with someone randomly to ensure I wouldn’t look like a loser when it really mattered. Don’t mind me I’m just having a stream-of-consciousness moment. lol I’m glad Tina was honest with Von instead of doing the passive-aggressive routine. And apparently Von was partly in mother-mode since she already had that handy dandy booklet with her. That alone could be enough to help Angelica AND Stacy. Back to me for a moment lol. I have a feeling that once I get the tiniest bit of experience I’ll be like young Bette and not rest until I’m in the game again. But then again, doesn’t that happen to most people once it’s actually worth writing home about?
let tina read the plain brown wrapper and maybe shell changed her mind.and then talk to angel and see what shes thinks about it i think angel will be harder to covenice than tina is i just that feeling.please post soon love this story its very good.
This story is so interesting and written with great care and taste. The courtesan aspect just makes Bette more appealing and intriguing. Hey, pancha, do you know any such person in the Phoenix area?? ;-)
Where might one find this ‘Plain Brown Wrapper’? :)
Wow, this story is enlightening in so many ways. Von unleased both the caged animal in Bette and then the very sensitive Bette who loves Tina with her entire being. If I was Angelica’s mother (Tina) I may have questions also, but one look at Bette and I would have to really consider allowing Angel to go. Looking forward to Tina’s answer.
I agreed with Tina, I don’t think its a good idea… and she/courtesan gonna be Angie’s FIRST! What if Stacy finds out. Man… think over it. Great chapter, more please :)
Associates huh, well that makes more sense pancha (thanks for pointing that out for me :)) I can understand Tina’s concern about setting her daughter up w/ a courtesan but I also undrerstand Bette’s want to help out her child w/ her first sexual encounter. It seems like Bette and Tina’s opinions about this are greatly based on their own personal experience. If i were Tina and Bette was my first female lover maybe i wouldn’t understand the whole courtesan thing either. Please post soon-love the story
damn….imagine Bette as your first…tina is so lucky. post soon…
Just catching up – what a unique story! And now that I’ve gotten this far I understand why you based it in L.A. vs. Las Vegas (where it might be legal). Does Tina feel left out of the loop now that she has found out?… realizing that this establishment has been around for over 20 years and nobody ever mentioned it to her? (Not even Alice… of course if Alice knew about it _all_ of L.A. would, wouldn’t they? ;)
Hate Cuban,spoiled brat. I feel the same for Jerry Jones. m Okay I’ll send you my J.Torre autographed hat.a ranger hat but he was very kind and did it anyway. This was worth staying up late for. I can understand Tina,yet if It makes Angie the lover her Mother is go for it. It should be something the both should agree on tho. There is a lot of Mothers on this site, so you really need to keep that address handy also the phone no. So happy that we have you as a writer on F/F. you make the sun a lot brighter. thanks
i think that Tina will read so well the book and reread and with this she will try to help Angi cause i don’t think that she will be agree with the courtesan thing.
so cute! more please! =)
They should give the book to Angelica and if she bombs out in the sack and Stacy dumps her then they can take her to Von (if she wants)
I really like this story, and I agree with Tina. I don’t think that this is a good idea for Angelica because she is in love with Stacy, where Bette was npot involved with anyone. Letting Angie (and maybe Stacy) read the book and Bette talking to her after should be enough. I think that Tina handles the brunch with Yvonne VERY WELL. Eventhough she and Bette are secure, that had to be an OUCH moment when Bette told her about Yvonne and then to meet her in this new light, Wow. Bette might oue her a special night of loving. How does Stacy’s parents feel about Angie?
Oh to reap the benefits of all Bette’s ‘training’. There’s something very French about all this, very ‘Les Liaisons Dangereuses’ without the malice. Of course, part of a young woman’s sentimental education should include training in all the arts, including love. Thank you.
haha, I love Tee’s last comment. She’s a lucky woman. ;) I don’t think Angie should really gain pratical experience that way, since it’ll be very valuable if she and stacy could do it together on both of their first time. She could learn it theoretically and practise with Stacy.
hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm, love T’s response at tbe end…I tend to agree with T here…
I have to admit, it would be hard for me to send my child to Von. Bette had a great experience, but as a parent, it’s probably a little unnervng. Nice chapter.
hehe…good chapter!
lovin it…now hurry it up and update already!!!!!
It is a huge problem that neither Angie nor Stacy have experience in the sex department, damn! They’re pretty much in love and in lust but that’s not enough to succeed on their first sexual encounter…. In my humble opinion, even if Angie wasn’t with Stacy, a courtesan wouldn’t be suitable for her, she’s a mommy’s girl for that matter but she’s still an alpha, I’m pretty sure she wouldn’t look like a freaking dork if she had the chance to be with an experienced girl she likes (not a courtesan).
maybe B&T should just give angie that book to read…i agree with tina that it was great for bette because she didnt have anyone, but it won’t be good for angie since she’s in love with stacy
What a treat, you post early :) Well Tina is reacting nicely to their extraordinair agent. Bette is taking the logical route while Tina is more emotional vested, they’re complimenting each others nicely in the parenthood arena. How can Angie goes wrong with parent like them! It would be much more meaningful for the young couple to learn & share that first experience with each others. Ideally, Ideal Realty should already have some type of seminar/session catered to such need with their longevity in the business? I’ll be 1st in line for the course..lol
I never thought I would say this….but…I agree with Tina on this topic. I think the story is interesting. I don’t think this Von, Yvonne-Marie is too bright..I mean really..you have Bette Porter wanting to make love to you and you don’t let her ? I know she’s the teacher and all, but I couldn’t imagine resisting Bette…she is too HOT!!
Good chapter. Well let see how Angie will react to this!!!!!!!!!!
This is a lovely story and I’m with Tina on this one. Maybe both girls together with Yvonne teaching them but not involving herself. cPost soon please.
Glad Tina was honest and kept her attitude in check. Too bad we all can’t learn the way Bette learned… I’m in California so I know there has to be something like that around here.
Bette is so uber smooth — she never says more than she has to. I think I’ll go back and re-read Bette and Tina’s first time. You know — for reference;)
Finally caught up on this one. This story is so fantastic. It keeps getting better and better. *chuckles* Hmm, and I have to say.. I can’t see Angel wanting her first time to be with anyone other than Stacy. But I’m probably wrong!Eagerly anticipating your next post!
Oh, it’s quite easy. You just ignore the phone and pretend no one’s around. :) I love the description of Bette’s first appearance… and REALLY wish I’d been there. The more I read, the more I like Bette’s plan… and the more it makes me wonder if they’re listed in the phone book… anyway, love the story still (and hoping Tina agrees to Bette’s plan)!
Yooooooooopppppppppyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy Great chap as always… Thanks!
This is a very wonderful story. I am enjoying each of your well crafted and heartfelt chapters. IMHO I believe that Angel and Stacy should perhaps discover each other in their own slow and loving ways. You have done a very fine job of writing about this sensitive subject of a women’s first sexual experience. Thank you for taking the time to share this story with us. Looking forward to the next excellent chapter.