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Angel Fire – 16
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Angel Fire
Angel alone
chapter 16
Their home – the next morning
“Maybe we shouldn’t leave her tonight,” said Tina. “She seems pretty lonesome.”
She and Bette were joining some of Bette’s colleagues at a Bed and Breakfast at the beach and wouldn’t be coming back until the next day.
“Babe, isn’t it mostly a social event, not business?” Tina asked.
“Yes, but that’s why it’s important. Bonding, you know,” Bette said as she put clothes into her suitcase.
“Stacy’s out of town so she won’t have anyone.”
Bette stopped packing, walking over to Tina and put her arms around her wife.
“She can get together with some of her high school friends.”
“She won’t,” correctly observed Tina. “She’ll just sit here and be sad.”
“Baby, she has Shane and Carmen who live about 30 seconds away.”
“Well.”
“She can call Alice any time. Al loves to be with her and Angel always gets a kick out of her aunt.”
Tina was silent this time.
“She can go to the Planet and hang out with Kit. There will be pretty young women there.”
“I don’t like that… pretty young women thing.”
“Baby, she’s going to have sex sometime…probably pretty soon.”
“I’ll tell her to stay home tonight,” said Tina and they both resumed packing.
Angelica was disappointed that her parents were going to be gone, but she thought they needed this time together and was going to try to be upbeat. They seemed to be a little at odds with each other recently; she wasn’t worried, but she thought they needed to get away.
Although she tried to hide it, Angel felt like a little kid as she waved goodbye to her moms.
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By the pool – a few days ago
“Parting is such sweet sorrow,” Stacy had said to Angel the last evening they were together before Stacy went on her retreat.
“That Shakespeare is such baloney on parting,” Angie grumbled. “There’s nothing sweet about it.”
“I’m glad to hear you say that,” observed Stacy. “I didn’t know if you cared if I was gone or not.”
“You can’t mean that.”
Angel sat up on the lounge that they shared and frowned at her girlfriend.
“I don’t know what I’m going to do without you,” Angie admitted worriedly and leaned back against the lounge.
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I originally planned to end the story here. However, I decided that that decision would not be popular so I will have a few epilogue chapters.
LOLThanks for the epilogue chapters, i am allready looking forward to them…Great! Now Bette gets to see that love is about love and not about ‘technique’ LOL
Wew that is so much better….should b an interesting breakfast…
I had skipped to the end to see if anyone had commented (yes sometimes I act like it’s a race…sue me =p) and saw your comment. I thought one of two things: Stacy came back and they got it on, or the ending was just really lame with Angie being lonely which could lead to a sequel. Honestly I would’ve been fine with this being the end but I won’t lie, I’m looking forward to an epilogue. ;)
so glad you aren’t ending it here…and glad her first was Stacy.
Beautiful. absolutely wonderful, and tastefully done. i so love this story. my god, it’s like a drug. thank you for not stopping. please post soon. PEACE.
Although you were too circumspect to let us peep in on the kids, evidently all went well between them, and that, no doubt, is the best way it could have happened. Let’s hope the parents confronted with the proof (not the same as talking about it in theory) can handle it at least well enough to shut the door before they start choking. I really would hate for them to wake the kids. It would be particularly icky for the young folk, to be caught like that.
Sometime thing just have a natural progression to them especially between 2 people in love. Or maybe Stacy has already taken the course from Yvone??? while we’re all worrying about Angie and her moms reaction :-) Fabulous as always. Thanks and Happy Independence Day to the USA.
pancha, so glad you are continuing, would hate to be w/o your writing again. I’m glad all went with the young ladies.
Hold on a sec, I thought Stacy was away for the weekend, I called myself dumb when I imagined that Tina and Bette could found Angie and Stacy together in bed for that reason… Anyway, I don’t want to sound morbid but are you going to narrate the girls’ first time? I’m happy you’re not ending the story here, the story is about Angelica’s insecurities about sex and her first time, so she had her first experience but it’s not fun to stopped reading there, my humble opinion :o)
You were thinking to end just like that? are you crazy??I want to know want happened in stacy’s room!!
this was a big surprise to her mommies! all the time that Bette spend thingking in courtesan or books and this two decide that they love eacht other to much, and take the opportunity! great chapter!
Glad you are not ending the story. It will be intersting to read the epilogue chapters.
haha, they did it! Glad to see Angie has Bette’s talent and didn’t scare Stacy away. For a minute I thought it’s YM at the door and Angie would talk/do it with her. lol
So glad that you will give us more of this story. I loved every episode. I thought that Tina’s advice to Angelica was interesting… to back off a little and let Stacy come to her…. and Angelica’s response… so inciteful and honest. But it seems that her advice worked for them. All’s well that ends well. Can’t wait for the continuation.
please don’t ever stop writing! even if u do end this story, i hope u continue to write more b/c i love to read your stories! =)
thank you for granting us the epilogue im really curios to see everyones reaction.
More More More !!!!!!!!!!!!! Epilogues and another story, please !
Pancha, I’m glad you’re not ending it right here. I’m curious to know what happened in Angie’s room (the voyeur in me!). If what I think occurred actually happened, then I’m glad Stacy was Angie’s first.
It ended beautiful, The two young ladies together.like it should be. I think that Bette and Tina has showed her over the years the love and tenderness. thanks
great ending…i’m glad that B&T made that decision to come back and make angie and stacy read the book together but again, tina is right, it’s more about love than technique, i’m glad stacy and angie were each other’s first…and waiting for the epilogue and a new story
Surprise for the two worrying Moms!! I guess Stacy really missed Angie while she’s been away and she’s finally decided to consummate the love they have for each other. Looking forward to the epilogue and perhaps a new story?! Thanks.
Um, excuse me while I pick my jaw up from the floor. High-5 to Angie…yet, never underestimate the importance of a blanket. Thank you for continuing this story for a few more chapters Pancha and sorry I haven’t commented for a few chapters. I was in hell aka very, very sick.
Yay! They did it. Blissful! :)
Great that you’ve decided to add a little more. Just love the open communication in this loving family. So, great that they have moved pass all the drama, and can concentrate on being loving and nurturing. Can’t wait for your mext posts.
se now thats the way it should be… thanks for not ending the story
Damn Angie and Stacy in bed and naked, didn’t see that on coming lol!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thanks for not ending it here. I wonder how Tina feels seeing her beautiful daughter in the arms of her girlfriend/lover in their birthday suits. Bette is probably smiling, but Tina maybe a little uneasy with her baby girl growing up. Can’t wait to read what happens next.
They didn’t need any help after all. That was the perfect way it should have happened.
OH YES by all means we NEED a few more chapters. My fir st question is do B&T turn around and leave the house. For all they know Angelica and Stacy could have planned to make love all day since they wheren’t expected back home. Don’t BLOCK, give them a day to themselves and the newly confirmed love :o). Beside some private time together wouldn’t hurt B*T either :D
Was looking for Lamentamini’s 1st…….brb (you’ve done well grasshoppa!) LOL……………….I don’t necessarily NEED more chapters or epilogues, if you will, because as it stands, Angie and Stacy lying there wrapped naked in each others arms is a beautiful ending. I never did expect Tina to jump on the courtesan bandwagon, and truth be told, when it comes to matters like that (meaning one has to allow their mind to wrap around the thought), I’ve always seen Tina as some sort of prude.
WELL DONE! HER PARENTS WERE WORRIED AND THEY DIDNT NEED TO BE HER PARENTS ARE TIBETTE NOTHING TO WORRIED ABOUT. SHOULD BE A INTERESTING BREAKFAST THOUGH YOU KNOW THE MOMS ARE WANT TO KNOW SOMETHING JUST ALICE WOULD? THANK YOU FOR NOT STOPPING HERE LOOKING FORWARD FOR MORE AND YOU CANT LEAVE US WE LOVE YA TO MUCH LOL!” HAPPY TRAILS TO ALL TILL WE MEET AGAIN “!!!!!!!!!!!!
I was aching FOR Angie. I’m glad Stacy was there, and you are here. Thanks!
i’ve been catching up tonight reading your wonderful chapters i’ve been spelled bound by them love the parents and how they treat each other and angel–what love was shown when bette finally confided to tina and how you had tina loving bette even more than before and that she went to brunch to discuss the topic– but i loved the way angel and stacy took matters into their own hands and moms were just moms–i’d never been that accepting with my girls we danced around the sex topic when they were teens—hate to see the end coming i’ve just loved this whole story–and maybe you can teach and old person something new–can help grandson some day if asked–please write more
Awwww so sweet.