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It’s Always Been You – Ch. 12
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Alice was taking her time in putting the flowers in a vase. She was stalling because she was trying to get her emotions in check. The last thing she wanted to do was over react or get in a fight with Dana. She was trying to keep the problems that they had gone through the first time around out of this second chance at their relationship, but she couldn’t help feeling a little hurt. She swallowed hard and turned to face her lover.
Dana watched as Alice put her flowers in some water. She still hadn’t said anything yet and Dana was starting to get worried. She could tell that Alice was stalling but thought that maybe she should let Alice speak first. Just then, Alice turned to face her and Dana’s heart fell at the sight. She could see that the writer was hurting but was putting on a very brave front. She may have fooled everyone else, but Dana knew better. She kicked herself for being so preoccupied. ‘Damn it Dana. What have you done.’ she scolded. She slowly approached her girlfriend and was thankful that Alice didn’t shy away. She didn’t make an effort to meet her, but she wasn’t stopping her either.
"Al…" Dana reached out and took the blondes hand in her own, giving it a light squeeze. "You know…Al…I’m sorry I …damn it! I am so bad at this…." she said frustrated with herself. Dana didn’t know what she was trying to say, but she was hoping that Alice would understand her regardless. She met the brown eyes that never ceased to make her heart beat faster and searched for some sort of understanding. She saw the love in them, but there was still hurt swirling around, clouding them up and Dana cursed herself again for it.
"Let’s just go to bed Dana." Alice said politely. She was still fighting her emotions and she knew that Dana was trying to say she was sorry, but she didn’t know if she could keep her emotions in check and she didn’t want Dana to know how hurt she was. She turned and headed to her bedroom, assuming Dana would follow.
Dana watched as her girlfriend walked away from her and toward her bedroom. ‘Fuck. Al…don’t do this.’ Dana thought as trailed after her. She knew that Alice was just trying to be strong but avoiding the issue would only make it worse. She reached her lovers door and knocked softly, not sure if she was entirely welcome at the moment.
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Whew! For a second, I thought that they wouldn’t make up, but as always you proved me wrong. Glad to see Dana was able to fix it:) Awsome update and I can’t wait to see what happens next!
Yay! Go Dana, for being able to work things out. That was a sweet chapter, thanks for the post!!
Awwwwww how cute!! The locket’s message, PERFECT. You just write the cutest things about them, its so alice and dana. I really love this story, it’s so real. Even though they’re so in love and been through so much, you make them seem like little awkward, teenagers in love. It’s great, really. I can’t wait to read what happens next, please dont wait too long! Your writing is fantastic, and addicting
lol so many Danish stories, so little time! another fantastic update :) so pleased they made up, and a some action to ease the tension ;) way to go suzieb, look forward to reading more! Al and Dane are so cute!
What a delight to have found your fic. I spent an entire afternoon, going through all the chapters. You had me grinning like a fool after reading this, well done.
YAY! Great update! I’m glad that they resolved their little issue! That locket was the cutest thing! My Danish loving heart is content! Now post again! Ha ha
Aaah, sigh! Danish love, it makes me feel all mushy and smiley lol. Great to read about the emotions that they were both feelin and just how intense that their love is. Glad they were able to sort it out, and Dana tellin Alice to talk more was spot on. Oh and did Alice get Dana a gift?, Well whatever she had planned she can still do,[or give] Dana the next day,Hmm! I will leave that upto your wonderful Danish imagination Suz!! Post soon. Thanks. Ps I love your comments back, they make me laugh.
I really should consider changing my name into ‘Died and gone to Danish heaven’. Because it really feels like I’m in it right now. I went away for just a few days and when I came back I had to catch up on so many wonderful Danish stories… (*pinch myself*) Ok, wandered off a little bit there… Loved your update! I could totally imagine how painful that tension must have been. But yay, Dana made the pain go away and made it all better. :D As long as you keep posting continiously I will keep commenting. :P
Once again a fantastic update – I am going on holiday for a couple of weeks and really look forward to reading a whole pile of updates when I return – keep them coming!!!