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A Different Time, The Same Place – Ch. 2
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Alice couldn’t breath. Dana was tracing her lips with her thumb and then…time seemed to stop. ‘She wants me. She WANTS me.’ Suddenly, everything clicked into place. All of the strange looks, Dana’s behavior, her outburst…she was jealous. She was frustrated. She was…’Is she in love with me?’ Alice wondered. Before she could get any farther, she felt Dana pull her close and then, those soft lips that she had tasted earlier that night were once again on her own. It was a chaste kiss but conveyed everything perfectly clear to Alice. Dana pulled away to wait for the writers next move. They were resting their foreheads together and would not take their eyes off of the other.
"Alice." Dana said in a hushed tone, afraid she would break the spell they seemed to be under at the moment. "Say something."
Alice’s mind was racing. This was Dana Fairbanks, her best friend and often times, partner in crime. Famous lesbian tennis superstar… ‘Well, actually, famous closeted lesbian tennis superstar.’ Alice thought. How could they do this? ‘It would never work. How could it work?’ she wondered. "Dana…how could this work?" Alice asked quietly.
Dana looked at her, sensing the rejection coming already and her heart sank. "Alice…I don’t know. I just know what I feel. I’m sorry to spring this on you…Lets just get you settled in for the night. We can talk in the morning.
Alice watched as Dana walked away defeated. She felt her heart clench at the sight. She knew what Dana was asking of her…and deep down, she knew that she loved her friend, but it seemed to risky. She didn’t want to lose her and Alice knew her track record wasn’t pretty. She could survive a break up with all the ass holes she dated, but Dana? How would she walk away from that should the relationship go south? Dana was always the one, stable and reliable thing in her life. Her one constant. Alice knew there was more there, but she was scared to death of what it all meant. ‘Why did I realize this tonight?’ she wondered. She walked slowly behind Dana, and followed her into her condo.
When she entered her house, Dana turned some lights on and started for the stairs. She knew Alice would make herself comfortable and that she knew where everything was. She didn’t even 6say good night to her friend. She couldn’t face her right now. She was devastated. She just wanted to go to bed and try to get her feelings back in check. She didn’t even know where they stood anymore. ‘God Dana. You are so stupid!’ she thought. ‘ I mean come on…hey Alice, by the way…I want you…actually, here let me just give you a quick kiss that reveals all of my deepest secrets to you and see what happens, huh? ‘ Dana was crying silently in her bed. "Fuck." She said out loud. She laid there hoping that the blond didn’t hear her. She was to emotionally drained to deal with Alice right now. It was bad enough that she was going to have to try and sleep, knowing that the writer was sleeping in the room right across the hall.
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listen here suzieb, if you loved me, you’d put these two together!! AHHHHH it’s so annoying..poor girls though, both struggling so much. It was a great update, my heart went out to Dana, really. I could totally relate to that situation. I just love your writing and this story so I can’t help but leave you great compliments. I mean them all :) I can’t wait for you to update again…please dont keep me wait too long! You’re fabulous
Argh!!!!! How can you do this to us?!? Love the story tho, please post on this one again soon (and save our little Danish hearts)
DAMN YOU! Ha ha. Not really. You know I love you. Another great chapter from a great writer. Like Dawson said, I could really feel for Dana. And Alice. Pretty shitty situation our girls have gotten themselves into. But seriously, great chapter even though it wasnt the happiest! You know I love your fics any way I can get them. Now please get these two together soon! And Lara? Really? Please God, no!
I Avoid Danish fics…usually I was drawn by Shane’s name next to Hero and read both chapters and all I have to say is BRAVO, you’ve got me liking a Danish fic and that’s a pretty big accomplishment!
Another frustrated reviewer here…Lara ALWAYS has to show up and come between these two. Now it will take ages before them to get together! Ah well, I’m the one who is torturing myself…I do have the choice to not read this…but then again, a powerful force is making meto read your wonderful stories…angsty or not. :D And I just know they will end up together…some day. Hint…just make Lara dissapear by having her to take a cooking course in Paris or something. :P
Awww man! Come on! Alice and Dana! Not Lara! Why does she always have to pop up and ruin everything? Damn her!
I know you probably like Danish as much as I do so this chapter is just a little warm up to happier times right? haha, I love these girls together and you write them so well. Even if you through Lara in the mix I still believe that Alice and Dana will get their act together and there will be more happy stories in the future. Keep it up!!
Aaarrggghh. But at least you warned us. So, here’s hoping that Lara’s a one chapter obstacle ‘cuz this is too frustrating. I have but one request…please, no Ton Ton. Ever. I hate her and don’t even get to love hating her. Looking forward to the next chapter.
oh hell no not Lara – damn soup chef!!! what a fab update, yet again! you have to take the rough with the smooth and yeah, this was kinda angsty lol, but that means that good things are on the way right? well i hope so because i love this story! Alice… go get your woman! way to go suzieb, can’t wait for more, you have me hooked! :)
Lara needs to go home and find a girl of her own, Dana is taken! Like Alice said ‘step off bitch’ hehe. Great Chap loving this drama. Oh and I was thinking LA is the perfect place to move to with our wives, they can always fly to Canada when they need to and we could go with them hehe :)
You just had to add Lara into the mix didn’t you…how cruel. lol. please update soon and take me back to happy Danish Land!
Lara’s not the obstacle. Dana and Alice are the obstacles to their own happiness. It was nice to see Dana be the one who threw caution to the wind, but now the wall is back up. Great update. I can’t wait to see how our girls handle things.
Damn! You are seriously killing me with the suspense, but I still stand by my other comment. I love this story!(I mean I might like it just a bit more if they could get together like, right now:D)Anyways, please, please, PLEASE update as fast as possible!
Hey there! just caught up with the last two chapters. Had an excellent weekend, then i get to read this awesome story… Ahhh what more could a girl want!! sigh. The intense Danish build up gets me everytime and you have sooo hit my spot with this one Suz!! Hmmm…lol. Loved drunk Alice.. “Do you want me Dana?”, Oh yes! very direct Alice!! Mmm, I like it. Ooh wonder whats goin to happen next? You are SUCH a tease!. Btw your dorkiness and personality that shines thru in your stories cracks me up so bad… and now you seem to be a poet!!LMAO! Post soon.Thanks.