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Angel Fire
chapter 17
the morning after
Previously
Angelica felt like a little kid as she waved goodbye to her moms. Angie swam for a while and then went inside where she gathered up some books, magazines and videos. She decided to read some of the publications and then watch videos when it got dark. The door bell rang as she was just finishing some reading and thinking about what to do next.
Angel and Stacy – Last night
Angel grinned as she moved toward the door. Maybe her moms had tipped off Alice and Dana or Shane and Carmen or Kit to come keep her company or sweep her away into some fun. But when she opened the door, it was none of them.
“Hi, Jely.”
Angelica stared in astonishment and delight at Stacy, standing on the porch with her suitcase next to her.
“Tace,” was all Angel could manage.
“Are you going to give me a ‘hello’ kiss?” Stacy asked.
Angie moved forward and swept Stacy into her arms and began some serious kissing.
“Let’s move inside,” Stacy said and picked up her suitcase.
Angie shut the door and embraced her girlfriend again.
“My parents are gone tonight,” Angel whispered, not believing her good luck.
“I know.”
“You know?”
“I heard them talking the other day about this business-social thing. So I managed to get home tonight instead of tomorrow night.”
Angel was so thrilled that she was speechless. She was almost afraid to speak.
“Tace,” she said quietly, “can you stay the night?”
“Of course, that’s why I’m here,” Stacy smiled.
Angelica was so amazed that she was still subdued.
“I want to take a shower, Jely, and then…let’s go to bed.” Stacy picked up her suitcase and walked to the bedroom. Angel watched her go.
Stacy stopped at the bedroom door, turned and looked at Angelica. She raised her eyebrows questioningly at her girlfriend.
“I’m going to shower,” Angel answered the raised eyebrows.
As Stacy showered in the guest room, Angie used her moms’ shower. As she was showering, she tried to think of everything she had learned.
Should she just go naked to her bedroom? No. A little too much, she thought.
Should she put on a night-time tank top and shorts? Maybe.
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Am I 1st??? That was so sweet, Angie getting the best of her two moms, the ear thing from Tina & the sexiness chuckle from Bette. Thanks for such a beautiful story.
“Bette, you closet softie,” smiled Tina as she pulled Bette to her.ROFLMAO!! This history is great, like your other histories. Thank you for shairng them with us “closet softies” and die Hard Tibetters.
Nice! Very Nice! I love Stangel!
If Angel had been with a boy/man would her mothers have let it just happen, hmmm? Sex in my parents house just seems wrong.
Love this first time together between Angel and Stacy. It was very tender, sweet and beautiful as a first time experience should hope to be. I enjoy how Angel gets the ear thing from Tina. Such a cute and wonderful story. Thank you so very much for sharing. *smiles*
Awww, Bette’s little girl got laid and Bette is all teary about it……just too cute!
Listening to Portishead’s “Glory Box” and Massive Attack’s “Teardrop” et al while reading your last chapter and this one. Appropriate music for your story. You handle the young girls’ love story with care and sensitivity. Also Bette’s realization that her baby is growing up. Excellent writing pancha. I am enjoying this story very much. I look forward to new posts.
I am glad Jely and Stacy took things into their own hands if u get my drift. wonderfully done, so sweat and innocent….
Wow, Angel has the sensitive ears and the sexy, low chuckle, what a killer combination. This was very sweet Angie and Stacey are cute and the moms aren’t too bad either. : )
Bette reminds me of my dad when I called home and told my mom I didn’t wait. Of course he might not have spazzed if my mom hadn’t yelled, “Well you used protection didn’t you?!” Fun times.
Go Angie and Stacy..young love.what a wonderful feeling! thanks for the post
i am also glad they learned together… this was beautiful… and nice touch having bette and tina leave for the night… please continue
Everyone so far has already commented on how beautifully you bought these 2 young women together. And I couldn’t agree more. My additional comment is to the fact that IMHO, it seems to me that Stacy didn’t start REALLY getting into it until she got into it; pun intended. The reference to Bette being a “closet softie” was quite cute. Jely having Tina’s ear thing going and Bette’s sexy voice was priceless.
I so happy that the first time was by their time. It might not had been perfect.but to them it was and always will be. Love how the Moms left to leave the two young lover alone. We always knew that Bette was a closet softie when it came to Angie. thanks so much for posting.
thanks so much for giving us these addtional chapters – i don’t want your story to end because it’s so wonderful to see T&B parenting and dealing with their daughter’s sexuality. So much fun and so beautiful. Thanks a million.
Now where’s the ‘thump’ came from the house? was there someone else in the house while Tina and Bette were in the motel? Btw, it’s so nice to read this realistically described first time :D
Good chapter and I agree with curioust and who is in the house, is Alice there lol. Ok post soon please, thanks!
That was so sweet and intoxicating. Isn’t it funny how much Angelica is like Bette. She has the same sexy chuckle but also has the same all consuming love that Tina has. Tina can bring out the best in Bette and it sounds like Stacy brings out the best in Angie. Thanks for the extra chapter and hope for more extra chapters.
so nice chapter! i think Angel did her best choice! and did it great! they will be learn and enjoying together! B&T was so cool to let Angie and Stacy alone in the home, they are the coolest moms!
Happy that Stacy showed up for Angel and also very glad that Angel read the book. Bette is just a big softie when it comes to Angel, a big mushy-mush. Great chapter. Post soon please. Thanks for a lovely story.
Your writing never ceased to amaze me, I thought than Angie would take care of the “situation” but it was Stacy who did better (never see that coming and I loved it) the reason might be that Angel was too nervous about disapointing her girl and she was focussed on doing great, you proved me wrong, I thought that the alpha-confident Jely would in charge but you know what, I liked it better the way you wrote it.
Glad that their first experience was with each other. Love that low sexy chuckle!! So, did B&T leave something in the house that fell on the floor and Angie will realize that her Moms have been home? That’s kind of reminiscent of when Angie came home to discover her Moms wrapped in each other’s arms in bed that one time. Loving this. Please post again soon! Thanks.
sweet!!
Glad B&T left for the night. I wonder did they figure that out for themselves or did they have to call Yvonne? Ha! Great post P!
That was sweet, nice and so special for Stace and Jely. I’m glad they relaxed and enjoyed each other, and extremely happy that Bette and Tina went to a motel. Thanks for providing the background and this epilogue chapter! Wonderful!
sweet very sweet
Awwww… that’s sweet!!! Man, those sexy-low-chuckle, loved it! :)
Yeah! Go Stacy – gotta love a giver;) Those two make a good combo(it must be love). Angel’s parents are very thoughtful. Bette getting all weepy was very sweet.
incredible!!! loved this chapter, so sweet and tender!
It seems both pairs handled the situation very well. But how many freakin’ names does that pool have now?
at least angie had a better experience at her 1st time as her mama did…are B&T gonna get something-something too?
Awwwwww! That was too sweet. Loved it.
Ha, maybe Stacy is the alpha one in bedroom. =D When I saw your summary, I thought our older couple would get somethin’ somethin’ as well. ;)
Pancha, That was truly beautiful. I adored the way that Stacey surprized Angelica will her willingness to move to the next level while still showing some reservations about fully letting go to enjoy and savor the whole moment. Brilliantly insightful and honest. It is often the fear of not knowing what to do that creates so many problems. The tender time that Angelica checked on Stacey’s commitment was wonderful. By demonstrating this restraint and resisting her own desires she showed Stacey her heart and soul. It was perfectly acceptable to have Bette and Tina’s silent interruption kept secret as these wise parents retreated to a motel. Bette’s hurt at losing her ‘child’ was candid but Tina was there to soften the blow. True genius and awesome writing. Thank you so much for this pleasure. Your Loyal Fan.
awesome..!