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    Who Knew? Chapter 5

    Story written on July 10, 2006 by 2geeky.
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    Words: 2009
    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=61640
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    Danish and Sharmen

      Shane and Carmen shared a comfortably silent ride to the overlook, besides the occasional comment about the weather or road conditions. When Shane parked the truck off to the side of the road on a patch of land that was cleared out and had a nice view of LA’s lights, she suggested that they sit on the hood of the truck since there was no air conditioning in her truck. She grabbed the six pack of beer and hopped up on the hood of the truck and sat next to Carmen. However when Shane tried to pop the top off of one of the beers, she realized that with her bruised hand, it might be a little more difficult than expected, and Carmen noticed as well.

    "Would you like some help with that?" Carmen asked while Shane was still trying to pry the top off.

    "Oh, no, I got it." Shane was still having no luck with getting it open, but she didn’t want to look like more of an idiot than she allready thought she had.

    After about a minute of Shane’s frustration rising and Carmen’s smirk getting wider, Shane conceited.

    "Um, could you…" Shane asked hesitantly as she handed Carmen the beer and bottle opener.

    "Sure."

    Carmen opened it with ease, and handed the beer back to Shane. 

    "I swear, I’m usually not this worthless, it’s just,"

    "I don’t think that you’re worthless." Carmen interrupted Shane. "I think that you’re very brave. If I were in your place, I don’t think that I would have the guts to defend my friend the way that you did."

    Shane nodded her head as she let Carmen’s words sink in.

    "Well, I guess that a friend in need, is a pain indeed."

    Carmen smiled and looked out at the lights, as Shane took a sip of her beer before she remembered. 

    "Oh, I’m sorry that I didn’t ask earlier, but would you like one?" Shane asked as she took a beer out of the case and offered it to Carmen.

    "Thanks." Carmen said as she took the beer and opened it.

    After a while of random talk about small stuff, Shane leaned back against the hood and put an arm behind her head, while Carmen continued to stare out at the lights.

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    2. cool geeky! I just got done posting another chap and was pleasantly surprised to see that u updated too! I am enjoying the story. It was waaay to short for my taste though! LOL. I am just teasing. I know how tough the writing thing can get. So anyways, hey, I just started the whole NC-17 thing and I gotta say, after the first one, it starts to get really fun! So just dive in and see what happens ;) keep it up!

    3. I’m starting to really get into this fic. Keep writing, you never know, you could get me hooked. (PS the easiest way of doing that are quick updates! ;) )

    4. I like this story very much so have faith and continue posting. To make more fluent the story you should either write longer chapter or write more often.a mix of the two things would be perfect but I know it’s hard to achieve that. whenever you will post again it will be a pleasure to read it.Bye !

    5. awwwwwwwww cute! i love it when dana gets aggressive! ;) great post, and i think you definatly made up for leaving us hanging last time! post more SOON!

    8. Yay for both couples! This is one of the only stories…no, probably the ONLY story of which I really enjoy Sharmen! :-) Loved the Danish too, naturally! Post again soon please! (And after this amazing chapter, my anger towards you has melted! Ha ha)

    10. hey :) that was great! thank-you for the lovely reply in your author’s note, it made me smile lots :D this was a fab update, great Sharmen and great Danish! i can’t wait till the next chapter… finally Al and Dane have wised up to the fact that they belong together :) yay, keep up the good work you have nothing to worry about – this is *so* good :)

    13. awww hell yeah for both couples!! Good stuff is what I want to read, after seeing all the bad. I can’t wait to see what happens next. Lovee this story, please dont keep us waiting too long for an update! I can’t take it!

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