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Danish: From Beginning to End (Real Time 2)
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Shane rushed into the bathroom to find Alice and Helena sitting on the floor, Alice sobbing into Helena’s embrace. Shane and Helena shared a look, tears in Helena’s eyes.
“Is she ok?” Shane mouthed to Helena
Helena shook her head no.
“Fuck.” Shane muttered and went to the women, sitting on the floor next to them and rubbing Alice’s back comfortingly
Alice turned from Helena and collapsed into Shane. “Shane.” The blonde sobbed
“I know baby.” Shane whispered and hugged Alice tightly
Helena wiped her eyes. “I’ll be right back.” She said and left the bathroom
“Why did she do it?” Alice asked. “Why?”
“I don’t know.” Shane whispered
Alice suddenly pulled away from Shane and stood up.
“Where are you going?” Shane asked
“I’m gonna be sick.” Alice rushed into one of the stalls and Shane winced at the sound of Alice vomiting
Sighing and getting up off the floor, Shane walked into the stall to hold Alice’s hair back, Alice hat laying on the floor from her encounter with Dana.
Helena walked into the waiting area and was met with curious stares from everyone except Dana who put her head down to look at the floor.
“Where are Alice and Shane?” Jenny asked
Helena said nothing as she walked to the vending machine and got a water and walked right back out of the room without a word.
“Dana, what’s wrong with Alice?” Lara asked the athlete
“She’s not feeling well.” Dana lied
“Is she gonna be ok?” Kit asked
“I don’t know.” Dana said sadly
“I got you a water.” Helena said as she walked back into the bathroom
“Thanks.” Alice said as she rinsed her mouth out at the sink
“What happened Alice?” Helena asked
“We fucked.” Alice said, her eyes welling with tears again
“I’m sorry?” Helena’s mouth fell open
“Dana and I. We fucked. And then she ran out.”
“I’m going to kill her.” Helena said and began to walk to the bathroom door
“I already dealt with her.” Shane said quickly, stopping Helena
“Shane!” Alice groaned. “What did you do?”
“I slapped her.” Shane said slowly
“Shane! I don’t want you to choose sides in this!” Alice said
“I love you both equally Al, but I’m here for you in this. Dana was a complete bitch, and it’s hard not to protect you.”
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So fucking good poopy. Another brilliant chapter :) FINALLY Dana is getting somewhere! LOL. Ok. I know that I am due for an update…but I am gonna be so fucking busy the net couple of days…I will see what I can do…but please…don’t stop talking to me! I don’t think I could stand it ;) I would be crushed. I will do my best to update and keep our relationship intact. hehe. I fucking love you poopy! Thanks for an amazing update. I think it’s high time we just run away together and write Danish fiction for the rest of our lives :) haha. Later babe. Did I already mention that I this was an outstanding update??? Oh, I did??? Ok. Good.
Alice and Dana are so confused around each other right now arent they? They want to be together in any form but its just impossible… and now you have got me totally feeling for them both in different ways!! Well thats not easy to do poopy so never doubt yourself my friend. Dont know about Dana goin away with Lara for 6 weeks cos its like running away.. Maybe she should be goin with Alice to talk openly to each other about why they have both acted this way with the relationship? Phew!! on a lighter note..Helena and Shane crack me up and its nice to see all the gang are there for Danish too in their own little ways. Alice and Helena have got a great connection and i hope we see more of this in season 4! Cool chapter and Top writing..post soon. Thanks.
“She’s not Alice.” Woo hoo! That’s awesome. I know I should be all heartbroken about Alice and Dana being so torn, but I’m completely happy that she said that. It received an arm pump and a “Yessss” from me. Great update Poopy. Hehe…sorry …typing that makes me laugh. You’re doing an amazing job. I love this fic, and can’t wait for more. Oh yeah, I’m supposed to remind you to tell me something.
ahhhhh! my favorite poopster! beautiful chappy. I’m soooooo happy that we finally get to see Dana and her true feelings and how she is coping with all this. Well done. It doesn’t make Dana seem like a total bitch, cause we all know she’s not. Oh and this especially broke my heart…”You know, she told me she couldn’t live without me when we broke up, but I think she was wrong; it’s me that can’t live without her.” SIGHHHHHHHHHHH. geez i just want this all to boil over and for them to be themselves again. Boy did dana open the worst can of worms in the world when she broke up with alice. But hey, i look at it as whatever you go through in life, was meant to happen, and in the end, make you stronger. So hopefully one day, alice and dane will be like the good ol’ days and laugh about this later, lol. I love where your going with this poopy. Yes i coined that. looool. Alrightyyyy post soon cause you know i’ll be waiting like alwayssss. Oh and Dana leaving is a very good idea. Cause i know for sure alice will get off her pills and truly miss dana, *make it happen poopy* lol.
oh and thanks for not throwing bricks at me! lol.
*sighs* Poor Danish. It was nice to see Dana sending Alice flowers and attempting to fix things before the whole poolside incident. This story can be so intense sometimes. But definately in a good intense way. Anyways, loved it when Carmen said “I feed her plenty, but the bitch doesn’t gain weight.” That one had me laughing so hard that my stomach still hurts:D Well, as always can’t wait for more, so please post soon!
ohmygoodness! your story just keeps getting better and better. and more and more heartbreaking. BUT i can always count on at least one good laugh out loud moment. this installment brought me a laugh when you revealed that the puppy was named Medusa! that’s just fanstastic and so very Alice. but damn these girls break my heart.
I wasn’t too subtle, was I? :D Ok from now on I’m going to relax, sit back and enjoy the ride. :D You want to know,how I ended up eventually after reading last chapter? I really didn’t know what to do, I just felt devastated. Poor poor Alice, ‘Death is better than hell I call life.’ And the last paragraph was heartbreaking, I do feel sorry for Dana. Btw, you do realize that you’re the one who made me rethink the whole panties-line. I never gave it a second thought untill I saw your post. Before that I just took it as a fact (even writing it down I can’t believe how stupid I was). In my defense, I was trying to divide my atention between all the things Leisha and Erin were saying and doing. Words like naked, short panties and no panties were flying around…it was just too much for me. :P
hey poopy. I know I already left a comment, but I am bored…and I reread this chapter. Yeah. It was awesome. I am having a crazy ass weekend (which I PMed you about) and got a few minutes to hop on a computer. SO yeah…I’m bored and shit. And for some reason, I find it rediculously entertaining to leave you comments! LMAO! So thank you for making me a little less bored. haha. Ok…yeah I got nothing interesting to say. Let’s see…Love the chap. Love the story. Love you poopy. Talk to you soon. Back to being bored. Later babe. ps…still no update from me. I know. I am a bad friend. Give me a few more days. Wedding shit to get thru.
I’m so glad I went back and read through the entire story the other day. This is just fantastic, although the cliffhangers and the suspense are killing me! Which is probably why I love both so much. Great update, and I’m officially addicted to this so you’d better update again soon!
Dana’s coming around! About freaking time. Somehow I get the feeling she’s still not ready to get out of her own way. Here’s hoping Alice doesn’t pull a Marilrn Monroe before she is. Looking forward to the next chapter. Screw having a life of your own…post soon!
Nope, Lara’s not Alice. I’m torn. You got me to feel slightly bad for Dana at the end, but I’ve been on Alice’s side the whole way, so I’d like to see Alice move on with her life without Dana. But on the other hand I always want Danish. I don’t like that Dana feels that she has so much power over Alice’s emotions. Are you going to explore any of the other aspects of Alice’s life that caused her to react that way to the break up with Dana? Great Update!
Loved it! You’re such an amazing writer, i’m so gripped on this story! And Dana is right, Lara will never be Alice! Keep up the great work!
So cute yet so heartbreaking. You’re killing me, but I think you already know that. It’s great though, I’m truly addicted to the story. Haha and yes, I am one of those spoilish people – I read the end of novels before the beginning… that’s how bad I am. Curious nature I guess, impatient as well. Anyway post soon!
Ah, shit! Now Dana’s breaking down! But you’re right, she’s too cute to hate for too long. I think that feeling lasted a whoel 5 minutes before I went to work on my story and was like “yay, alice and dana!”, lol. I’m loving this story, i keep checking for updates obsessivly. Not sure how I feel about Dana going away for 6 weeks, though. *sniffles* that means no Danish action, and you know I live for that! Anyways, keep up the fantasic writing and post soon!
great post. i wonder what dana is going to do now. poor alice i hope she starts to get better with dana gone.
See, I knew I could trust you, great job again, I laughed so hard when Helena asked Shane if she was robbing her. Actually typing that made me laugh again…Dammit Dana how dare you fuck up so bad then try to win our hearts again curse this soft spot for Danish CURSES! After all of that, Dana is right Lara is cute but she’s no Alice that’s for damn sure. Ok I think I’m done I’ve said every curse word I think…oh right ass.
ok, ok… that’s what i’m talkin about. dana finally coming to her senses. geez! great update! :)
wow…this is such a great story!! AHH I LOVE IT!!! man…poor alice, its gotta be so tough trying to be friends with Dana, knowing in her heart how much she loves her. Dana loves Alice too, we can all see that, I just wonder when she says Lara’s not Alice…she means everything. The love between Lara and Dana could never compare to Alice and Dana. I just wonder where this is going to go, what’s going to happen with Dana leaving and Alice staying behind. It is good for Alice, the distance…but I just feel like there’s so much more to this story and something is going to happen. I dont know, I hope my hunch is right, you know were my heart lies ;) Anyways, great update, I love this story so much as you know and it’s you my dear who is the awesome one, creating such magic in your writing. I really, really love it. I can’t wait to read more, I jumped for joy when I saw that you updated! and to think, I might’ve of missed it! This remains my favorite story, and I can’t wait to see what happens next. Oh and btw, I’d petition to have you write the show..any day. :)
That chapter was grrrreat! I loved it. I printed it out and took it to school to read, My teacher is so stupid she didnt even notice and she looks like the evil guy from the smirfs no joke! I think she was too suprised at the fact I was actually quiet for once. Oh Dana what can we do with her she really screws everything up doesnt she? Hopefully one day she will do something right. I am 16 but I will be 17 in like 4 months its pathetic I am counting. You are so totally my yoda now! hahaha I am calling you Yoda from this day forward! have a good one Yoda!
Great update my friend. I could just see them falling on top off each other and I wouldn’t mind getting a sloppy one from Alice myself!! I like how Shane and Helena are being true friends and I hope Dana doesn’t go to France with Lara. I mean I like Lara but have to agree with everyone else she just is not Alice! Let the rollercoaster begin I’m looking forward to it! Update soon please….
Just a completely wonderful update. I love what you’re doing with this story & can’t wait for the next update. All of you Danish writers are going to be the death of me … damn suspense!!!
ahhhh-choo :sniff sniff: i got a cold sry i missed this chap on my way to the next one so yay! :) im not sure how i feel … shane needs to slap dana once more i think BUT im thinking MAYBE she’ll use those weeks in paris to say uhhh Peace out Lara lol great chap poopy :)
i think dana may have just grown a brain in the last paragraph of this update…hmmm…hopefully it will grow again?