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Danish: From Beginning to End (Real Time 6)
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“Alice, sweetie, I’m going to tell you this because I’m a friend. You look like shit.” Helena said a few days later at The Planet. “Have you gotten any sleep lately?”
“Is Luke keeping you up late?” Tina smirked
Dana raised her eyebrows and looked at Alice
Alice yawned. “No, actually, my work is.” She ran a hand through her disheveled hair. “Luke and I haven’t taken that step yet.”
Shane stared at Alice, dumbfounded. “Are you shitting me?”
“Is that so hard to believe?” Alice wondered
“Yes!” Everyone exclaimed
“Wow. Nice to know that you guys think of me as a slut.” Alice muttered
“Al, for a while there I thought that you had taken my spot as group player.” Shane said. “It’s hard to believe you’re holding out when you’re in a relationship with this guy!”
“I care about him! I don’t want to rush things.” Alice defended
“Tina and I slept together after a week.” Bette confessed
“Yeah, Carmen and I fucked before we were even in a relationship.” Shane said, shooting Carmen a lazy smile
“Lara and I fucked on the first date the first time we were together.” Dana pointed out
“Stop!” Alice chuckled. “I feel like a high schooler again with all my friends pressuring me to have sex!”
“We’re not pressuring you Al. We’re just curious why you haven’t jumped his bones yet.” Carmen said, popping a grape in her mouth
“Those one night stands were different. There were no feelings involved, no strings attached. With Luke, it’s different. I’m not sure I’m ready to connect so intimately with him yet.” Alice confessed. “Everything changes after sex; everything gets so much more intense.”
“Are you scared, or is there another reason you’re waiting?” Tina asked
Alice stole a look at Dana and averted her eyes quickly as Dana’s bored into hers. “I don’t want to get heartbroken if I sleep with him and then he leaves me.” Alice whispered
Alice and Dana had talked since the incident a few nights before, but neither had made it uncomfortable. If anything, their friendship was doing good for the first time in the past nine months. They had both let their past hurts go and moved on in their friendship.
“Luke wont leave you Alice. He’s not that type of guy to sleep with someone and then leave. “ Helena said. “I’ve been talking to him a lot lately, and believe me, he’s not planning on leaving you anytime soon.” She smiled
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I like, I like! I’m enjoying how you are portraying Lara too, that she is not clueless, but rather very alert to feelings and what’s going on–she deserves so much better. Not that Dana is bad, but Dana can’t give 100% and that spells doom. Alice deserves the only the best, too. And Luke sounds like a real peach; you have really created empathy for the ‘other man/woman’ of the Danish girls by giving us a self-aware and compasionate Luke and Lara. Nicely done. Dana should take some time to mull over what she really wants in life and to address Alice and Lara accordingly–talk about good drama! Your pacing is spot on. Can’t wait for more updates, please post soon!;)
I missed this story so much! you’re doing a fantastic job – I would never dream of yelling at you! So sorry to hear that you aren’t feeling well, I really hope you feel better soon, take care of yourself – *hugs*
I hope you feel better soon. As to Dana moving away i’m not sure what to think. I’m glad atleast that Dana is considering Alice’s feelings before making a move to get her back.Alice needs to be happy for a little while with someone else and build up confidence and Dana needs to realize why relationships scare her before they can be together.=)
OH NO DANA YOU CAN’T RUN AWAY! RUNNING AWAY DOESN’T SOLVE PROBLEMS! damn. hey poopster! sooo the story isn’t going how i predicted lol. You def kill my ideas with this chapter. Now i have no idea where the hell you are taking us, but either way, I’M READY FOR THE RIDE. geez just when everything was getting good again, the drama comes back. I wish dana wasn’t such a confused little chickie. I really do feel bad for Lara also, because she just wants dana to love her the way she loves dana. Ugh, the turmoils of love. Well hopefully lara falls head over heels for Liz..they live happy ever after, dana does move, but alice follows, hehe. i dunno.. my crazy predictions. but…long live danish please, get those two together and happy for christmas sakes. oh and dana still didn’t truly tell alice why she broke up with her, i don’t think. or is it just me?..hm. but alice still loves dana, deep down, she craves that danish like all of us. alrighty i’m out..poopster loving the story as always.. post soon! and please feel better mwah.
POOPY! first of all, sorry you have to feel sick, that sucks. Second, brilliant update! I think I trust you enough to still keep Dana in the group even if she does move away. *sniffles* but she’ll be so far from Alice! It’s ok, though, I know it’ll be a great story either way. Update soon and feel better, dammit! lol
I love your stories!!!! They are just tooooooooo great to miss one of them. Please post soon:-) I can’t wait your next storyline. Lots of greets, Poopy-**** :-))))
oh dana…dont run away…ill miss your crazy ass! so will everyone else. she better bring her silly bootay back to LA fast, or i will personaly kick her cyber ass! *sigh* okay i feel better now that i got that out. *puts on a nice smile* post more soon please!
Sorry to hear that you’re feeling sick, that’s never fun. I hope that you feel better though, because I cannot wait to find out what’s going to happen to Dana, or anyone in the group for that matter. I love the twists and turns of this story!Again, hope you get better:)
Oh my God!! I hope this is just a ruse and you are kidding us on about Dana moving away – you can’t possible take her away from Alice. Hope you are feeling a lot better and will be able to put me out of my misery soon. Get well quickly.
wow – that was fast. so dana’s is running away from everything. interesting… my guess is that she will be back soon enough. someone will talk some sense in to her. hope you feel better – thanks for updating so quickly.
K…So first off, not as bad as I thought…it fact…it was awesome, and I trust you with our girls. But just for good measure…(_*_) Take that Poopy! LMFAO!!! I am bummed you’re not feeling well. I will check up on you later…doctor suzie to the rescue! ;)Talk to you later pretty girl.
Yoda! like oh my gosh! Dana’s moving.. Sad all very sad but I like the idea of her going away its kinda exciting.. haha I dont know why but it is! I want to hate this luke fella but I cant he seems really sweet. I went out last night I added 4 more people to my very long list, I know you will be proud. thats lame that your sick. I hate being sick lucky enough I never get sick. I just said sick alot.. sick. Thanks for the update it was fabulous as usual
my wish was granted! thanks for the speedy post. loved it, even if it was a little sad. but you have to take the good with the bad. looking forward to the next one.
Another amazing part but noo! Dana can’t leave! I know its unfair on Al and all but they’re meant to be! :)
First and foremost, I hope you’re feeling better. I can’t believe you both wrote and posted when you were under the weather. You’re amazing. Why would anyone possibly beat you up. That only comes if you follow through with having Dana move away and then fail to reunite our Danish. So plenty of time before the gloves come out. Great update. Feel better soon and then post!
I was expecting the worst…but I agree with Suzie…it wasn’t as bad as I thought. I’m actually glad Bette called out on Dana. And Lara and Dana breaking up (although it’s not official yet), Lara has done the right thing. And I’m not only saying that as a Danish fan, (and seeing the advantages of that),Lara will always come in at second place and she knows that she will get hurt by it some time. Dana’s moving will stir up Alice’s feelings. It all depends on how Dana will leave andwho she is going to tell that she will be moving (except for Bette). Btw, as for the scary story…I mentioned The Ringg. But please don’t let Alice or Dana be the one that comes crawling out of the television… I won’t be able to get that image out of my head one I read something about it. I hope you will get better soon!
Wow, I totally didn’t see that one coming at all! Interesting twist…although I secretly hope it doesn’t come true — we all know Dana and Al were meant to be :) Great update as usual. Hope you are feeling better!
Great chapter, shame running away doesn’t make the problems go away, I hope confused dana becomes unconfused dana soon! Keep up the great writing!
I hope you’re not feeling too sick, I’d hate to see my fave writer getting ill on us all. It isn’t that bad is it? The chapter was, as always, fantastic. So much drama, and written so well. I love it, but you know that!