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Like a fairytale, chapter 21
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Once upon a time on: ‘Like a fairytale’
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The atletic brunette’s head turned quickly so she could see the blonde girl she loved so dearly, and she didnt hesitate for a second… Her feet moved, faster than the wind, as September was giving the girl all the strenght and velocity she had left inside her weary mind and body…
Bette opened her eyes fastly and in a split second realized what was going on, and grabbed Shanes hand, they both gasped for air as they saw Dana was about to jump…
Alice felt the wind play with her blonde locks as she sat there, waiting for her fingertips to meet the cool wet substance in front of her, as Dana did everything in her power to get to her girlfriend in time… She jumped for the water, not thinking about the consequesces it would have for her, only thinking about Alice… About how to make sure Alice would be safe… Dana’s heart was pounding uncontrollably as she seemed to fly through the air in slow-motion… And the atletic brunette closed her eyes, reaching out with one hand to the water, and with another to Alice, feeling her finger touch the blonde right before it touched…
She couldn’t call it water…
It didn’t feel at all like a fluid…
And her eyes shot open as she felt Alices muscles tighten…
They felt rigid…
Had she been on time?
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Chapter 21.
Tina woke up with a shock and felt her every part of her body tingle as she jumped out of bed and ran to the window, grasping the necklace that she never parted with.
Something was wrong.
The princess felt her heart pound and grew heavy with sadness, but she knew it wasn’t her own sadness she was feeling but Bette’s.
Gasping for air the royal girl stared at the horizon, whispering the words she only uttered when she was certain she was alone… As in a prayer she almost chanted them
I love you Bette… I love you…
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wow! you was shaking? then you can imagine how i am! my hearth is pumping so fast! this was so sad but it was write in a wonderful way! thanks for the post! take care
This is some amazing writing…very poetic and powerful indeed…can’t wait for the next update…glad we met! Thanks.
Damn you make me cry and hope you save Alice. This is amazing and very powerful. Ok post soon please, thanks!
Bummer, Alice is gone and it looks like Dana is next. Maybe it is a dream and Dana and Alice are on the other side of the river having crossed on a rainbow.
This really reads as a fairytale…sweet and awesome. Thanks.
Butbutbut… no! ;_;
O.o
I loved it Mom *BIG HUG* =)
Dammit LOL Okay you win this time. ;)
oh no, poor anhgie…if tina will tell her this chapter, angie will cry…wonderful update, is there a way to make it better? and now tina admitted her love for bette…bette should hurry
Hey teaser! I’m really the 1st. LOLI love your previous story and I will read this one later…I’m addicted to be the 1st one! LOLSorry Lamentamini!
kinda you only beat me because I suck at typing and had to try like 3 times so it wouldn’t look like random letters. LMAO Okay so uh, Mom, you should’ve put a warning label on this to not read at work or something. I nearly started bawling. ALIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIICE!!!!!!! T_T Ugh now I need to get back to work. =/ Post again soon! *huggles*
I’m the 1st!
On behalf of little Angel and her very anxious mom, I thank you! *bowing* Not suitable for a three-year old??? Are you kidding? It was amazing! So poetic. I could totally visualize all the colors, the butterflies, the heart shape, the golden bridge, the coloured water underneath… I’m pretty sure Tina is going to have a blast describing the scene to Angie, and maybe they could even draw a picture of it together afterwards! Oh you mean Alice? (Very sad by the way, I really got emotionnal, and the connection with Tina… Beautiful!) Well, I’m pretty sure mommy T could maybe make it a PG version with Alice falling into a very deep and peaceful slumber or something… *wink* Anyway, have a great vacation, Captain!
1st brb
One more thing… Alice’s body turning rigid and lifeless reminded me of a similar tragedy happening to Hans Solo in Star Wars’ “Empire strikes back”. But then it turns out that he comes back… *Cute little pout and much hope in her eyes*
This reminds me of sleeping beauty after eating the apple.Please tell me that Dana just has to kiss her awake.Post again soon.
Great! I think the butterflies are going to un freeze Alice or bring her back to life.
I don’t agree with people who say that stories write by themselves, I do think that writers picture so many scenarios for their stories and that’s when the stories lead them where they make more sense. It was sad to read that Alice died but as you narrated the previous chapters it made sense on this one. Great chappy pal! congrats!