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    Like a fairytale, chapter 21

    Story written on August 21, 2006 by justloveB+T.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=62153
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    The most fragile thing is… Life… A Fairytale Bette and Tina Beginning

     

     

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    Bette and Shane watched the scene in horror, neither of them able to move… But as they saw Alice collaps they synchronicly seemed to snap out of the charm that had been holding them and they started running towards the water, that had turned pitch-black in less then a second.

     

     

    Dana felt tears well up in her eyes as she opened them. Her heart pounded with an anxiety she had never felt before when she focussed on the girl she loved more then anything…

     

     

    Alice?

     

     

    The hoarse whisper she uttered was full of hurt and hope, and Dana felt her heart swell up with all the love she felt for the funny blonde who now laid there so rigidly.

     

     

    Had she touched the river before Dana could? Was that why the content of it had not felt like a fluid to her?

     

     

    Panting the two other girls reached the shore, crouching down next to their friend, who had not responded at all… The blonde just laid there, her legs partly underneath her body, her head turned to the side. Shane felt her heart jump with fear seeing her oldest friend like that, and she had a gut-feeling things would not turn out ok…

     

     

    Dana now began to cry and laid down next to her girlfriend, cupping the blondes face in her hands, feeling the rigidness of it, and for the first time seeing the brown eyes that once had been so filled with life…

     

     

    Empty…

     

     

    Lifeless…

     

     

    The sobs came from somewhere deep inside her, and soon became uncontrolable as Dana cried out in pain, the only word that was in her heart and mind.

     

     

    No!

     

     

    Bette covered her mouth with her hand, looking down at the blondes body that was just as exanimate as the hyena’s had been. She rose and backed away, feeling an immense amount of guilt fall down on her young shoulders. This was all because of her… Her friends had offered to help her on her journey, but she had never realised one of them would get hurt in the process… Let alone give their live…

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    1. wow! you was shaking? then you can imagine how i am! my hearth is pumping so fast! this was so sad but it was write in a wonderful way! thanks for the post! take care

    4. Bummer, Alice is gone and it looks like Dana is next. Maybe it is a dream and Dana and Alice are on the other side of the river having crossed on a rainbow.

    10. oh no, poor anhgie…if tina will tell her this chapter, angie will cry…wonderful update, is there a way to make it better? and now tina admitted her love for bette…bette should hurry

    11. Hey teaser! I’m really the 1st. LOLI love your previous story and I will read this one later…I’m addicted to be the 1st one! LOLSorry Lamentamini!

    12. kinda you only beat me because I suck at typing and had to try like 3 times so it wouldn’t look like random letters. LMAO Okay so uh, Mom, you should’ve put a warning label on this to not read at work or something. I nearly started bawling. ALIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIICE!!!!!!! T_T Ugh now I need to get back to work. =/ Post again soon! *huggles*

    14. On behalf of little Angel and her very anxious mom, I thank you! *bowing* Not suitable for a three-year old??? Are you kidding? It was amazing! So poetic. I could totally visualize all the colors, the butterflies, the heart shape, the golden bridge, the coloured water underneath… I’m pretty sure Tina is going to have a blast describing the scene to Angie, and maybe they could even draw a picture of it together afterwards! Oh you mean Alice? (Very sad by the way, I really got emotionnal, and the connection with Tina… Beautiful!) Well, I’m pretty sure mommy T could maybe make it a PG version with Alice falling into a very deep and peaceful slumber or something… *wink* Anyway, have a great vacation, Captain!

    16. One more thing… Alice’s body turning rigid and lifeless reminded me of a similar tragedy happening to Hans Solo in Star Wars’ “Empire strikes back”. But then it turns out that he comes back… *Cute little pout and much hope in her eyes*

    19. I don’t agree with people who say that stories write by themselves, I do think that writers picture so many scenarios for their stories and that’s when the stories lead them where they make more sense. It was sad to read that Alice died but as you narrated the previous chapters it made sense on this one. Great chappy pal! congrats!

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