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A Thin Line – Chpt 35
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Previously
I was beaming. “Of course,” I answered her. Then to Helena I said, “Will you go with me to the Planet, to visit Angelica and Alice?”
“Of course,” Helena smiled.
“We’ll be there shortly, Alice. Okay?” I said.
“Yeah, okay. Shortly,” Alice answered. “See ya in a bit.”
“Oh! Alice?” I caught her before she hung up. “Do you have any idea why Tina called me this morning?”
“Uh, er, yeah, uh, I think I do,” Alice stammered.
“Alice! Why?” I asked impatiently.
“I gotta go. Angelica’s squirming. I’ll tell ya when ya get here,” she said, hanging up.
I stared at Helena as the phone fell silent in my ear.
Chapter 35
As Bette drove down the freeway, she glanced over at me. We smiled to each other, and Bette reached to take my hand. I interlaced our fingers together and rested our embraced hands on my thigh.
After a few moments of consideration, I took a deep breath and spoke.
“So, Darling, I understand your reservations about moving in with me so quickly. I really do. But Mummy’s suggestion made sense, don’t you think?” I asked, treading carefully, not wanting to push, but desiring to continue the brief conversation we’d begun before Mummy’s departure last evening.
Bette nodded and quickly looked in my direction.
“Yes, it made sense,” Bette agreed with a smile, before returning her gaze to the road ahead.
“And you said yourself, that it was difficult this past week, never knowing where we were going to end up overnight. Waking up and having to rush home to dress for work in some crazed, hurried state. Not having the personal items with you that you needed,” I said, smiling and pulling our clasped hands to rest between my legs.
"Mmm-hmm," Bette murmured.
“And you told me, just this morning, that you like waking up next to me,” I reminded Bette, hoping the allusion to our lovemaking interlude that morning would help to sway her to the benefits of our living together. “Remember?” I smiled coyly.
Bette turned her head to me while disentwining our fingers. She ran her hand up and down my thigh and laughed.
“Ah, I see what you’re doing. Sweetheart, you are so bad!” Bette said.
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Great story. I am a tibette fan but you have me rooting for Belena in this story.
What has Tina got on her mind. We know that Bette and Tina will always love each other,they just can live together as a family.because they are not IN love anymore. because of Angie they will always have a bond thanks
WOW! Tina actually put Angelica and Bette before herself….dang, I might faint. zheese, I’m looking forward to more from you. This was a fantastic chapter.
my guess is that Bette reacted the same way I did..wide eyed and opened mouth! Loved it Can’t wait for more. I’ll just request like Angelica! Kiss you! hahahahahahahah love it!
Wow…so Tina gave up huh? Or did she? I am a Tibetter so if you ask me…Bette and Helena are moving too fast…Helena’s already talking step-mother…love your writing….I was expecting Tina to show up at the Planet while Helena & Angelica were having a moment and get pissed off…I was on the edge of the seat. Please post soon.
now that was maturity from tina…there’s hope for her yet!!! go b&h…not sure if i’m digging the moving in thing…would be totally fast, but when it’s love, right!!! great post!!!
I love your creative writing and I love your sexy story. Tina’s words at the end showed her true love for Bette even if they are unable to be together as a couple. Well done, as always. Thanks!
zheese- i can’t believe you thought people weren’t reading; i love your story. I too was a TiBette fan but the pairing of Bette and Helena is really hot in your story. So now i consider myself a HelBette fan currently and a TiBette fan in recovery. Please post soon- your fans are waiting!!!
I think you’re good. You write for your passion and your love for the couple. That’s why it’s so emotional and sexy. I think you should continue. Please don’t pressurise yourself with aspects like the storyline or whether your readers like your story. Just go with the flow, and we do. We love your story! :) Writing is supposed to be a hobby!
I knew Tina would unearth the tenderness that we all know she is capable of. Even if Bette has moved on, her gesture of joint custody will set not one, but two prisoners of heartache free. Oh, and I liked the almost moving violation on the PCH. Nice touch. ;)
YES!!! Bette gets half custody of Angie. Does that mean that BeLena will move in together?
Great. I thought Tina owuld come to her senses. Yeah. Helena and Bette a happy family. Thanks for a very loving story.
Great chapter… Bette and Helena are so in love, I am happy for them… I’m also happy for Tina I never thought she would do something like that, I hope she can find her happiness.. I loved the line “Be happy, I love you” that was very beautiful… Thanks…
zheese, I just wanted to let you know that I am out here. I am typically a silent reader, but I figured I’d break my trend this time. Let me say that I love your story. I have read each chapter and last week I re-read all of the chapters in one sitting. There are very few BeLena stories that I think are well written, but I think your are producing one of them. I think this one and jks’s Wanted are two of the best out there. I hope you continue to its conclusion. I am looking forward to reading more from you.
Angelica is way too young to be giving Helena lap dances in the Planet, I don’t care how much they like each other. However, I’m puzzled as to what could possibly be wrong with having orgasms on the PCH. Well, maybe a distraction for drivers, but passengers? I say go for it. And it seems Tina has completed the “Oz” trifecta, having found the brains, heart, and courage to do the right thing. If she keeps that up, she may find her way to her own home. Who needs a wizard?
This chapter is so adorable! I love the interaction between Bette and Helena and Angelica. I’m happy that finally Tina’s seeing sense where Bette and Angelica are concerned.
whoa! tina is really stepping up here im happy for them
Wow, that was an unexpected change of attitude for Tina!
Ah lovely! Thanks zheese. Nice of Tina to think of giving joint custody to Bette. Even though I’m a tibette fan, ur writing has kept me coming back to read more! ^_^
“Be happy. I love you.” When you truly love someone you want for them all the happiness in the world. By giving Bette joint custody of Angelica and saying ‘be happy’…she is wanting for this woman all the happiness she can find…even if is not with her. That is true love. I cried when I read that. Thank you.
Tina said she ‘Loves Bette’ and to ‘be happy’…..aargh..I love B & T together. They just can’t make it work, so I guess Helena will have to show Tina what it takes to keep Bette Porter. Too bad for B & T fans. But on a different note, this is a great story.
i have just caught up with the past few chapters and wow!! Excellent as always, i am completely in love with the way you write!! Amazing stuff, thank you for continuing!
that was so sweet of tina…the ‘be happy. i love u’…does that mean T’s moving on and it does mean u really love someone when u can let them go with love…