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A Thin Line – Chpt 35
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“You mean, because your plan backfired when you tried to teach me a lesson?” Alice laughed.
“Well, if that’s the way you want to look at it, Sweetie,” Helena responded, grinning first at Alice, then at me.
“Yes, Alice, for once your nosy nature created something wonderful.” I agreed, laughing. “And I haven’t forgotten that it was you who so fortuitously sent me to apologize and talk to Helena in the first place. I’ll forever be grateful to you for that.”
Helena corrected me. “We’ll, Darling, we’ll forever be grateful.”
I reached across the table and caressed Helena’s hand. “Right, Sweetheart.”
“Aww, thanks, guys. You two are so cute together,” Alice gushed.
“Koot. I koot,” Angelica piped up.
We all laughed.
“Yes, baby, you are so cute,” I beamed, nuzzling my face into Angelica’s.
For the next hour, the three of us talked, and laughed, and ate, and played with Angelica. And in my happiness, I’d completely forgotten to ask Alice why Tina had called me that morning.
Angelica was sitting on Helena’s lap, playing pat-a-cake. And as they giggled with one another, it was obvious to me that they were both thoroughly enjoying themselves.
My heart was full as I sat back and watched them. Helena would be a marvelous mother to Angelica, I mused.
“I’m gonna teach you how to cook, baby,” Helena cooed, holding Angelica’s little hands.
“Pat-a-cake, Pat-a-cake, Baker’s man, Roll ‘em up, And roll ‘em up, And throw ‘em in a pan! Whoo!”
Angelica’s little butt bounced on Helena’s lap as she shrieked with delight. She reached up to playfully smack Helena’s face.
“Kiss you!” Angelica said. She wriggled up and pressed her tiny, cherry-colored lips to Helena’s mouth.
“Oh, Sweetie,” Helena smiled. And her eyes sparkled. She was visibly touched by Angelica’s impromptu display of affection. Helena snuggled her closely.
“I think you made a new friend, Helena,” Alice observed.
I rested my chin in my hand, my elbow propped up on the table. Helena’s eyes met my warm and admiring gaze. I smiled my approval and adoration, hoping she could sense the glow emanating from my chest. Caressing the back of Angelica’s head, as it lay on her shoulder, Helena smiled back at me. I know I felt the love issuing from her heart.
Just then Alice’s phone rang.
“Hey, Tina,” Alice answered the call. “You’re ready to pick her up? Okay. Well, give us a few to get home. We’re with Bette and Helena at the Planet.”
Alice extended the phone in my direction.
“Bette, Tina wants to talk to you,” Alice said, shaking the phone in her palm.
“Me?”
I took the phone and looked at Helena.
“Hi, Tina. What’s up?” I asked.
“Bette? Did you get my message from this morning?” Tina asked.
“Yes. What would you like to talk to me about?” I replied.
“I’ve been thinking. I’m sorry about the other night. And I’ve apologized to Helena.”
I heard Tina sigh.
“I know. She told me,” I said.
“I’m tired of playing games. I want to give you half custody of Angelica. She loves you. She misses you. She looks at your picture every night. It breaks my heart,” Tina explained. “I’m going to file papers tomorrow to afford you rights to her.”
I wanted to cry. Out of happiness.
“Oh, Tina! Thank you. Thank you, so much,” I gushed, holding back my tears. “Anything else you want to tell me right now?”
“Be happy. I love you.”
With that, Tina hung up.
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Great story. I am a tibette fan but you have me rooting for Belena in this story.
What has Tina got on her mind. We know that Bette and Tina will always love each other,they just can live together as a family.because they are not IN love anymore. because of Angie they will always have a bond thanks
WOW! Tina actually put Angelica and Bette before herself….dang, I might faint. zheese, I’m looking forward to more from you. This was a fantastic chapter.
my guess is that Bette reacted the same way I did..wide eyed and opened mouth! Loved it Can’t wait for more. I’ll just request like Angelica! Kiss you! hahahahahahahah love it!
Wow…so Tina gave up huh? Or did she? I am a Tibetter so if you ask me…Bette and Helena are moving too fast…Helena’s already talking step-mother…love your writing….I was expecting Tina to show up at the Planet while Helena & Angelica were having a moment and get pissed off…I was on the edge of the seat. Please post soon.
now that was maturity from tina…there’s hope for her yet!!! go b&h…not sure if i’m digging the moving in thing…would be totally fast, but when it’s love, right!!! great post!!!
I love your creative writing and I love your sexy story. Tina’s words at the end showed her true love for Bette even if they are unable to be together as a couple. Well done, as always. Thanks!
zheese- i can’t believe you thought people weren’t reading; i love your story. I too was a TiBette fan but the pairing of Bette and Helena is really hot in your story. So now i consider myself a HelBette fan currently and a TiBette fan in recovery. Please post soon- your fans are waiting!!!
I think you’re good. You write for your passion and your love for the couple. That’s why it’s so emotional and sexy. I think you should continue. Please don’t pressurise yourself with aspects like the storyline or whether your readers like your story. Just go with the flow, and we do. We love your story! :) Writing is supposed to be a hobby!
I knew Tina would unearth the tenderness that we all know she is capable of. Even if Bette has moved on, her gesture of joint custody will set not one, but two prisoners of heartache free. Oh, and I liked the almost moving violation on the PCH. Nice touch. ;)
YES!!! Bette gets half custody of Angie. Does that mean that BeLena will move in together?
Great. I thought Tina owuld come to her senses. Yeah. Helena and Bette a happy family. Thanks for a very loving story.
Great chapter… Bette and Helena are so in love, I am happy for them… I’m also happy for Tina I never thought she would do something like that, I hope she can find her happiness.. I loved the line “Be happy, I love you” that was very beautiful… Thanks…
zheese, I just wanted to let you know that I am out here. I am typically a silent reader, but I figured I’d break my trend this time. Let me say that I love your story. I have read each chapter and last week I re-read all of the chapters in one sitting. There are very few BeLena stories that I think are well written, but I think your are producing one of them. I think this one and jks’s Wanted are two of the best out there. I hope you continue to its conclusion. I am looking forward to reading more from you.
Angelica is way too young to be giving Helena lap dances in the Planet, I don’t care how much they like each other. However, I’m puzzled as to what could possibly be wrong with having orgasms on the PCH. Well, maybe a distraction for drivers, but passengers? I say go for it. And it seems Tina has completed the “Oz” trifecta, having found the brains, heart, and courage to do the right thing. If she keeps that up, she may find her way to her own home. Who needs a wizard?
This chapter is so adorable! I love the interaction between Bette and Helena and Angelica. I’m happy that finally Tina’s seeing sense where Bette and Angelica are concerned.
whoa! tina is really stepping up here im happy for them
Wow, that was an unexpected change of attitude for Tina!
Ah lovely! Thanks zheese. Nice of Tina to think of giving joint custody to Bette. Even though I’m a tibette fan, ur writing has kept me coming back to read more! ^_^
“Be happy. I love you.” When you truly love someone you want for them all the happiness in the world. By giving Bette joint custody of Angelica and saying ‘be happy’…she is wanting for this woman all the happiness she can find…even if is not with her. That is true love. I cried when I read that. Thank you.
Tina said she ‘Loves Bette’ and to ‘be happy’…..aargh..I love B & T together. They just can’t make it work, so I guess Helena will have to show Tina what it takes to keep Bette Porter. Too bad for B & T fans. But on a different note, this is a great story.
i have just caught up with the past few chapters and wow!! Excellent as always, i am completely in love with the way you write!! Amazing stuff, thank you for continuing!
that was so sweet of tina…the ‘be happy. i love u’…does that mean T’s moving on and it does mean u really love someone when u can let them go with love…