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In the car towards the clinic:
“So, you started talking yet?” Tina asks.
“Not really. I told her to stay put, that we’ll talk when I get back.” Bette says.
“Do you want to try and solve it?” Tina asks.
“I gave her my everything for two years. I just feel that I can’t just give it up, just like that.” Bette says.
“Has she explained herself, why she did it?” Tina asks.
“Yeah.” Bette replies, hoping Tina won’t question why. Knowing that she probably would.
“So, why did she do it?” Tina asks. “You don’t have to tell me.” She adds.
“Tina… I…” Bette starts.
“Bette, you don’t have to tell me.” Tina says again.
“It’s not that I don’t want to, but… Caitlin brought light to a subject that I thought I had put behind me.” Bette says and looks at Tina, to see her reaction.
“Oh. Can I ask which subject?” Tina asks softly.
“You.” Bette says and holds her breath. She closes her eyes.
“Oh…. What are you saying Bette?” Tina asks.
“Nothing… nothing, never mind it. Forget it.” Bette says.
They stop outside the clinic.
“Look, I can get Kit to get me, or even Caitlin. You don’t have to wait.” Bette says as she turns towards Tina before she exits the car.
“No, I’ll wait. Go on. I’ll be here when you get back out.” Tina says and gives Bette a smile.
“Okay. Thank you.” Bette says and leaves. She walks into the clinic.
Tina takes out her cell and dials home.
“Hello?” Martin replies.
“Hey, babe, it’s me.” Tina says.
“Honey, are you on your way home?” He asks.
“Not exactly. Look I was wondering if you could come down to the medical clinic and pick up Angelica. We’re here with Bette. She hurt herself.” Tina says.
“Sure, I’ll be there in 10 minutes.” Martin says and they hang up.
Inside Bette is called in.
“Bette Porter.” The nurse calls out. Bette stands up and walks to her.
“I’m Bette Porter.” Bette says.
“Okay, follow me.” The nurse says and they walks into a examine room. The doctor comes in.
“Hello, I’m Dr. O’Reilly. What happened here?” He asks.
“I broke a glass and tried to clean it up.” Bette says.
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Damn this is so good and I agree with Dainty and let see what’s next, thanks!
What a tangled ball of emotional string. Just when you think you have unraveled the pain, another kink in the twine stares at you with an even greater challenge. Wonderful use of emotions and subsequent confusion.
Tinayou know you want to, dump Martin for The love of your life
you go girl..im glad Bette woke up for her true feelings and i hope Tina do the same..that Martin is a bore and that woman is a bore plus 2..i hope Bette dont move..and be woman enough to do as her heart is telling and so does Tina..great chapter..thanks Jane ;-)
Great Chapter, i agree with sky and lamen, i couldn’t say it better then them.
Time is running out for Tina to decide if she want’s to take a chance on losing Bette. If she moves away, Tina will be stuck marrying Martin. Bette needs to make Tina understand what she is feeling. Lauren 25 you can put B & T back together again. It would be awesome!
Susannah…Smokey is good for all kids…he offers wonderful advice to help prevent forest fires…heck all fires in general…he’s just an all around good bear. He even wears clothes so the little kids won’t see bear genitalia….lol (remember only YOU can prevent forest fires.)
Caitlin needs to be kicked to the curb and Tina needs an epiphany of her own… soon!
sky that was too funny..thanks for the laugh!!!
Thanks for the great chapter…looking forward to the next update.
If I remeber right, Tina is still having feelings for Bette. She was holding back from Martin to maybe see what was happening between her and Bette. Maybe now Tina will leave Martin and return to her true love.
Skycaptain – Smokey the Bear eats out of garbage bins in Yellowstone Park. I saw his big ol’ blue-jeaned butt hanging out of the top of a dumpster. Tina can do BETTEr than that! …At least Bette would have the grace to do it in leather pants and designer pumps! Somebody, get Angelica a teddybear and move Martin along, he’s had his ‘Tea’.
I’m a total Tibetter so like Bette I try not to love or dwell on Tina but like Bette I’m hooked so I hate Martin, get rid of Caitlin cuz I feel sorry for her and I hate that Tina calls Martin ‘babe’ that’s reserved for one babe, the Bette, PPS
i hope that tina has her realization soon! bette shouldn’t be giving catlin the time of day! it’s a good springboard for getting bettina reunited! (hint, hint!!)
Ahhh soo cute – I soo want Bette and Tina to find each ohter again – they sooo belong together. Sad to see Bette leave for SF but if that is the way for her to leave the pain, I do hope Tina talks her from it. Love it and do post soon
I was gonna add, sometimes (I had this experience) a couple can be too passionate so find it easier to live apart with new partners but use something like a child or a job to give them a reaason to see each other frequently if not everyday and this is unfair to the other partners…as I realised eventually…and is this what your Bette and Tina have been doing? and so I do feel for Caitlin having put someone I wasn’t in love with but did care for thru this shit till I woke up like Bette duh!!!!!sorry to get personal but it just occurred to me as I read my previous comments PPS
Real life is a mess, just like this. Feelings can arise, unexpected, and unlike what Barbra Streisand sings, they’re often uninvited and not very warm. I feel for your Bette. She seems genuinely surprised by the turn her life has taken. Martin and Tina’s relationship has depth. A great change, as most fanfic renders romantic rivals as idiots, straw men (women) or worse. I’m intrigued how this will turn out for Bette. Caitlin doesn’t seem the answer. Thanks!
Glad Bette got that off of her chest. If Caitlin felt that Bette was still in love with Tina…why did she stay? I wouldn’t want to live with someone that was pining after someone else…that’s not loving me. So in saying, that her whole reason for cheating on Bette was stupid…I think Tina and Martin do have a good relationship but if someone was to ask Tina if she was in love with Martin …really IN LOVE with Martin I bet she wouldn’t be able to give them a definate answer. Sure he makes her feel safe and is great with Angelica…but so is Smokey the Bear…these women need to be honest with each other, and Tina needs to fight for Bette. I love this story. Please post soon.
Hey…………great story………love the interaction btwn b and t…..
I’m with skycaptain. I personally wouldn’t stay with someone who wasn’t in love with me. Some people though can do that and think that they have enough love for both people in the relationship. And techgal is right too. In a way it’s nice that Bette and Tina’s partners aren’t deadbeats. Even Caitlin the cheater is still nice, and Martin, unless he has some dark secrets, sounds dreamy in that heterosexual sort of way (even if I still think he’s a wuss). Giving them asshole partners would make the story a no-brainer and ultimately too easy to resolve.
WOW!!!! Great Chapter. I agree wuth sky. I so love this story . PPS
Martin and Caitlin seem like nice people but they are not the ones for our B&T. These girls belong together and they need to be honest with each other or at least Tina needs to tell Bette that yes she does love her just as she did before and wants and needs to be with her. She just can not marry that guy.Caitlin needs to go so they will have the space they need to be with each other. I think Angel will be instrumental in getting her mother’s back together and maybe Kit as well.
sky..how do you know Smokey is great with Angelica?? :)
Everyone has said it better than I could..Just wish that Bette can be happy.with or without Tina. Catlin is not the answer for her. Yes I know the answer TINA Is Tina happy with Martin. Is he a meams to and end/ PPS thanks