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    Time will tell if we have made a good desicion (chapter 7)

    Carmen is speechless.  Sasha cannot stop laughing, looking at her surprised face.

    Carmen stammers and says: "What…what are you doing here, sweetie? Where were you hiding? Am I dreaming?"

    Sasha takes her hand as she says: “Sweetie, why we don’t teach these people a thing or two about dancing?. Then I’ll tell you.” She looks at Pacho and tells him to sing. She puts her left hand on Carmen’s waist and they’re in position, ready to dance.  Tears of joy overflow from Carmen’s eyes, and she tries to kiss Sasha, who spins her around without letting go, ending up behind Carmen.  She says in her ear, "Happy birthday, sweetie.” She spins her around again, so that they are again face to face. "But first dance…and then I will smother you with kisses."

    They start to dance, moving from side to side, twirling and spinning again and again. Sasha sings to her as she dances:

      

    I love you like this, delicious, undreamed of

    Because I believe in your word

    Because I feel I still need you

    Because you change my desires.

     

    I love you like this, roaring and delicate

    Between joy and nostalgia

    Because I like to have you, my love,

    And I don’t want you to leave

    Because love, when it’s true, comes from the soul

    It stuns the senses

    And suddenly we discover that our skin

    Catches fire.

     

    Well, your love does me good

    Your love disarms me

    Oh, your love controls me

    Sweetens me, enchants me

    But well, your love does me good

    Your love disarms me

    Oh, your love controls me

    Overcomes me, binds me

    Look, it does me good, it does me good

      

    People gather around them, and they can’t stop applauding. The dance classes that Carmen took yield their fruit, and now she can follow Sasha very well. They look like two ballroom dancers. Carmen tries to steal a kiss from Sasha each time she turns, but as if it were a game, Sasha tries to escape.

    The girls can’t stop asking themselves who is dancing with Carmen.

    Alice: "I don’t know who the hell that girl could be, but she’s really red hot, and look at the way she moves. Grrrrrrlllll!!!  I want to dance with her, too."

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    1. this was amazing, Baby-girl!!!! I sure hope your ass is gonna’ update soon!!! I have to say, I love Carmen and all and I’m happy she is tryin’ to move on (not gonna’ work ;-p) . . . but she was really pissin’ me the hell off . . . she was rubbin’ it in just a lil’ toooooo much . . . I feel for my girl, Shane . . . man, she must feel like shit and then some . . . I’m glad the group still got ha back though, cause in the end, that’s pretty much all my girl needs . . . ha family . . . Soooo, yeah, before I start to ramble, just wanna say that you’re doin’ an amazin’ job, Babe!!! Keep it up and post soon, which means NOW!!!! LMFAO!!! Anyways, like always from me, LYLAS ;-p

    2. wow! i must say… its an amazing story.. one of my most favorite!! i actually went back n read the whole story after reading this chapter. im impatiently waiting for the next chapter. please please post soon.. lol.. Great work!!

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