Fan Fiction
This story has been set to a rating of PG. Age verification is required to proceed.
Blind (Chap5)
Login to add story to favorites
(109 votes, average: 3.38 out of 5)You need to be a registered member to rate this post.
Loading ...
Previously:
My tongues tied. I was sexually frustrated after all of that. Most of all, her gentleness turned me on even more…
Chapter 5
Tina
“How do you look like… err… I’ve wanted to know how you really look like…” asked Bette hesitantly.
‘Is that the timid side of Bette that I’m looking at?’
“Well, you’re gonna see me soon…”
‘I really can’t wait for her reaction to see me, and how her soulful eyes would look into mine… although she was blind then… she seemed like she could look into my soul and it always ignited the passion and sped up my heart rate’
“Oh…” came from Bette disappointedly.
“Well… or… I can give you a little bit of hint…”
She smiled widely… “Really?”
‘Oh gosh, she looks so cute when she got what she wants… my heart just swell.’
“Let’s see… I’ve blonde hair…” Bette smiled her ever so wide and attractive smile.
“I stand 5’7”… well… not athletic… not really chubby… erm… not skinny either…”
“Cuddly…” Smiled Bette wider as if she has those happy bubbles bursting inside her stomach…
I couldn’t help but chuckled at this Bette, well can you imagine a well grown successful and powerful woman would look like a child that could hardly contain her happiness?
“Yea… cuddly… and… erm… I have 2 eyes, a pair of ears, a nose, a mouth…” I tried to keep my voice straight.
Bette chuckled louder and even laughed a bit… well laughter is the best medicine right? We had a good soft laugh and then she turned serious and silently, “Can I feel your face?”
I could actually feel my heart skipped a beat and was going to leap out anytime soon… I sat on the side on the bed and gradually took both of her hands, gently guiding her finger tips onto my shutting eyelids. When her hand touched my skin, it felt like the time had stopped. I concentrated fully on the skin that she touched.
Started off by touching and feeling my eyes… slowly went to the bridge of my nose, sliding down towards my nose tip… when she was gliding down my cheeks… I couldn’t help it anymore, I took her wrists and pressed her whole palms onto my cheeks. By the time her warm and soft palm touched me, I automatically let out a sigh of content, I felt so… relaxed, secured and…. Loved… I wanted to lie down next to her, with her, cuddling up to her… but the only thing I could do was… *sigh*…
I turned and pressed harder into her left palm on my right cheek and then snuggled to her right palm on my left cheek. Shifting my head inching my lips closer to her palm… I wanted to kiss her… I pressed my lips onto her right palm and inhaled… then I let go of her hands. I let out a deep breathe, trying hard to calm my thundering heart.
I guess she was taken back a bit but a little while later, she continued to explore my lips… using both of her thumbs on my lips and other fingers clung onto the side of my jaws, she brushed my lips gently. It felt tickle at first, by the time she licked her lips, the touches turned out to be the ignition of the fume of passion that has been lighted inside since I saw her… the passion I had for her is wild… uncontrollable… but… most of the time when reality hit, she was a patient and I was the nurse in charge of taking care of her plus she is a woman. On the other hand, there were moment when reality did not hit, my head would be spinning, I couldn’t think logically anymore… placing and pressing my hands besides her body on the bed, I leaned further down towards her…
It took me forever to reach her lips, suddenly she retreated her hands from my face…
“Ehem… you’re really beautiful…” she spoke in a hoarse voice.
“Thanks.” I sat back straight and couldn’t help but to feel disappointed.
Comments
Leave a Reply
You must be logged in to post a comment.
i love it :)
just got caught up great !!!!!!!!!!!!! longer
wow…just touching can make tina’s (and mine) heart beat faster…i also want to see bette’s reaction when she will finally see tina with her eyes
zabo..that was beautiful. I sure hope you post again very soon.
Glad that you are back and posting this story. Tina is falling for Bette and falling hard. Did Tina see a picture of Bette before her accident or she is going by what she thinks Bette looks like before getting injured? Tina is a very beautiful woman and she is bringing strengh to Bette and giving her something to look forward to.
aawww short but lovely none the less
This is such a beautiful story Can Bette feel the lovable sweet and beautiful lady that she is I hope so thanks
what a wonderful chapter, The magic of the hands was present in this chapter cause both of them with only a touch for each other can feel a lot of things, i hope Tina will be the drug thaht Bette need to keep going. congrats!
Okay today’s lesson was face feeling…tomorrow will they go lower? Just a thought. I love how Tina is treating Bette like she is the only one in the world…sometimes a patient needs that extra special TLC. Please post soon.
This is sweet and beautiful. The touching is beautiful and can’t wait to see more. Please post soon, thanks! JLBT is funny!
JLBT, your just too funny. Zabo, great update. Can’t wait till Bette really sees Tina, although using her hands works for me.
hahahaha… yes you’re JBT ;)
Bette can see with her hands… indeed Tina is very beautifull, but her beauty also has very much to do ith her… How do i put this right (as if I ever could) her radiance… Her personality, her sweetness, her compassion (as you see, I can’t give up on T ;) Its great to see the tension building up and the sweetness of the characters ;) I was hoping for an update! Thanks! Oh and BTW, Ps1: I ‘ll never grow sick of this story or yoúr writing and thats a fact! Ps2 *jumping up an down* I WAS FIRST!!! YEAH!
Can I be first?
is it time for another bath yet? ;) Oh and I hear you about peeing in a cup for a urine sample. Once I was told to just forget about it because after about 20 minutes I still couldn’t pee and I was the only one in the john! I feel sorry for people at MEPS because they have to pee in front of someone. O.O
JLBT, aren’t you supposed to ‘study’?You’ve first on many lately… ;) Good for you Captain! Okay, off to read this!….
That was such a sweet chapter, Zabo. I think those ‘moments’ between B&T are my favorite in fanfic… You know the moments they slowly start to explore each other. It can be with words, with their eyes, and you made it with a simple touch… Very well done! Thanks a lot and PPS!
Above all : thank you so much for this update ! I just discovered this lovely and touching story of yours few days ago and couldn’t wait for a next chapter. I truly love it. And I fully share my dear fellow JLB+T’s thoughts here : Bette can see with her hands indeed and so can use her powerful art passionate’s sensitivity to fully understand the essence of her lovely nurse’s character through this feeling. This way, her momentary blindness appears to be the ideal key to truly feel the other, far beyond the appearances, directly to the very core and soul. One usually says that ‘love is blind’ : here, thanks to your sensitive talent, we can see – yes, see indeed, in the deepest sense of the word – an other and much more positive face of this superficial good old cliché : blindness can be the best way to find love through its particular and true light. — You reach my heart with this beautiful story and I’m delighted to become a faithful reader of yours from now – and, believe me, faithfulness is my second name ! ^_^
YES I’m disappointed too!!!!
Loving this story.
10 Stars.