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QUE SERA SERA- Chapter 16
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Helena nodded, “Sure, but aren’t you doing something with Tina? I thought I just heard you…”
“I am, but she just wants to sort out Angelica’s birthday party. That won’t take long and I can meet you later on.”
… … …
Helena nodded and walked her to the door quietly.
“See you tonight…I promise…” Bette smiled, opening the front door and turning round to kiss Helena.
“What the bloody hell are you doing?!” Helena shouted in alarm to someone behind her before she could kiss her.
Bette jerked around swiftly and saw why Helena was shouting.
“Hey fucker, get the fuck away from my car!” she shouted running towards her car.
Her eyes suddenly caught what looked like a Manila envelope sticking out from her passenger window…
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CHAPTER 16
“Go back inside Helena!” she shouted.
Still running, she grabbed the envelope but then slowed to a stop when she couldn’t see anyone anywhere…
Vanished!
Puzzled, she stood and carefully scanned the street before turning and walking back towards Helena who was now examining the car.
“Good news! It doesn’t look like there’s been any damage…” Helena exclaimed smiling with relief as Bette approached.
“I thought I told you to go back inside woman!” Bette chastised.
“You did…that’s why I didn’t…” she responded grinning happily.
“God, you’re impossible!” Bette shook her head.
“Hey, you can be just as impossible as me if you must know!” Helena pouted playfully.
“Did you see anything?” she asked Bette.
“All I saw was a really short guy or kid wearing like this green sweatshirt or something and it looked like he was wearing brown corduroys? I think. What did you see?” Bette responded.
“All I saw was a short green blur for all of two seconds, I don’t think I’m going to be of any help to the FBI today I’m afraid.” Helena added.
“Ha ha…” Bette said rolling her eyes.
Bette turned around and glanced at the empty street again, then quickly at her car, before holding out the envelope to Helena.
Recognizing the Manila, Helena grew serious and took it, pausing to look up at the worry surfacing in Bette’s eyes.
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I absolutely adore this story!
Now that you have gotten my hopes up Nesha I am so happy…please don’tplay with my emotions like other people who start seemingly hopeful Tibette stories only to have them suddenly turn into Belena stories…(you all know who you are). I wouldn’t be surprised if Helena was sending herself them envelopes just to get Bette’s attention. Don’t let Bette be blinded by lust. Thanks for posting.
Hey Nesha, I was about to put out another APB for you. Then, I thought I or someone would need to wrestle you into submission….like I did with Pandsy …..unfortunately she is a tough one and will not submit…..anyway, here you are!! Please don’t go away so long. With some of our old favs leaving, we need you to stay in the pocket…please. Does begging help? Ok, work excuses and doctor’s notes will be accepted !!Bette, chasing someone…interesting. Helena is a bit more athletically endowed (I am trying to get her arms). But, maybe it is Michellia’s story and Helena’s last little comment to Bette that have me thinking that Helena can catch bullets with her teeth
I’m here my dear. Agood writer never loses a good reader. One of each. Lust is a terrible thing,you lose all the good things and then the lust is gone. I love Tina and Bette together. But you all put more sex with Helena and Bette and it it HOT sex. Thanks for posting
Bfft, what kind of threator forgets to put the threat letter in the envelope? and on the wrong car! unless it’s meant for Bette, which throws me into more confusion…yeah, seriously, forget the sex…the letters! The letters!!! Well, you can add a bit of sex, too, if you want…and I pray sky’s prediction doesn’t come true :-X What else is waiting for Bette at Helena’s? besides Helena (heehee)
Oh, nooooooo ! That was far too short a chapter, Nesha ! You can’t do this to us ! Well, actually, you can…LOL ! So, that “really short guy or kid” could definitely be a woman… In fact, that’s my guess since I have no idea what guy could be stalking those girls. My bet is… It’s a jealous ex. Well, of course you don’t have to answer Nesha, I’m just trying to guess… Anyway, I really like the fact that you’re turning this story into a thriller…This is so inventive and so unexpected. I really want to know where you’re gonna take us… Oh, and Helena “holding three fingers in the air in a mock Scout’s honour” : how funny is that ? I loved it !Once again, it’s a very nice job ! Thanx Nesha.
Loved it girl, loved every word of it. Who is this guy, where are you taking us from here? I’m desperately awaiting the next chapter hun.
Hey Nesha-I just love the playful banter b/w Bette and Helena. And as long as you write chapters lie this expect that head of yours to get bigger and bigger b/c I’ll continue to be generous w/ the comments. So don’t keep me in suspense too long? Who was the guy dropping off the envelope at the car and why an empty envelope? What hints am i not getting? Don’t keep me waiting…..please!
Whew…. I’m glad I finally caught up with your story. I thought this was a loving, sexy story, now it’s a creepy weirdo filled, sexy, loving story. Awesome job! I’m sitting here reading this in my house–in the dark, and it’s giving me the creeps.
mmm I don’t think it’s Helena, this is more something crazy Tina would do. This chick is so disturbed lately she would do anything to scare everyone away that comes to close to Bette.Great chapter Nesh, keep them coming babes. And tag i’m it I know and i’m working on them, yes them both mine and Myrtibel’s story so you’re gouing to be tagged very soon LOL
Thanks for the great chapter Nesha, I wonder if Helena’s psycho could be friends with my psycho gunman..LOL
why is it that i always miss a chapter before i notice you updated. I think im out of the loop now hehehehe. I loved your story though girl. and i love where your taking it, but really though how can anyone be that close on bette and not get all hot and bothered. Bette should know that by now LOL
*deep breath* okay, I’m finally ready to accept Helena as the evil-doer if that is what you have planned…whatever your juices are telling you to write ;p
oh wow…IS it Helena, like everybody is saying? I didn’t notice it! *shrugs* :) this was another brilliant chapter Nesha, i can’t wait to see where you go with this. you ARE a great writer (and thanks for saying I am too, its very nice of you)and thus i WILL be coming back for more! loved the tenderness and the lil kisses even when they were stressed! thanks and hope you post soon
Way too short of a post but turning into a great mystery ala Michellia. Post soon and more and more sex
Who can it be and why…..?? Well Im just gona have to keep reading to find out aren’t I!!!!!! Loving your work babe xx
Now who could these letters come from? Is it Dylan? Or is it Danny? I guess I just how to wait and see….I love this story please continue as soon as possible…..
Great chapter Nesha, i don’t think it’s Helena either, it’s probably crazy Tina, or maybe Dylan or Danny yeah, not Helena though. Yres you’re right BeLena loving is just the best, and you write it so damn well, can’t wait for the next one! Cheers chick!
i read this one but i forgot to leave you a comment girl. now you know what i think of your writin youre just da bomb. loved this chapeter as much as i lovd all ur others.