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QUE SERA SERA- Chapter 16
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“Where…?” Helena started to ask.
“He stuck it in the window.” Bette explained.
“How do you know it’s a he?” she asked before sighing deeply and tearing it open.
“Here we go again…” she said peering into the envelope.
“It’s empty!” she looked up in surprise at a perplexed Bette who took the envelope from her to check it again.
“It’s empty!” Bette repeated as if Helena didn’t already know. “What a weirdo? What does an empty envelope mean?”
“Bette look…there’s no name on it! Do you think one this could have been left for you and not me?”
“Hey, I think you might be right!” Bette replied handing her back the envelope and turning to walk round to the window where she had found it in the first place.
“But why?” she wondered aloud as she approached her car, “I mean, why leave one for me just like that, just out of the blue?”
“I don’t know…” Helena replied thoughtfully, folding the empty envelope in two and putting it in her pocket.
“Hey, come look at this!” Bette exclaimed, leaning closer towards the window before looking up at Helena.
“See? Look here…” she pointed to the top of the window and Helena nodded, waiting for her to continue.
“This is where I found it…” she said conclusively looking at Helena.
“Yea…?” Helena said leaning in towards Bette for a closer look…
“Yea…” Bette replied.
“God, do you always smell so good this close up?” Helena smiled into Bette’s eyes.
“Helena! Jesus…do you even care that you might have some psycho on your hands?” Bette rebuked.
“Ok, ok! I’ll be serious now…I promise!” Helena said, sobering up and holding three fingers in the air in a mock Scout’s honour.
Bette raised a disbelieving eyebrow but continued, “My guess is he was trying to slide that envelope into the car through the top of the window here…see?” she explained, looking to see if Helena was following.
Helena nodded seriously this time.
“But I think it got stuck half ways in and we caught him before he could get it in properly.” Bette finished.
“Well…if you ask me, I think the bastard definitely wanted us to know he was the same person who left the others…what I don’t bloody know is why he left one for you now?” Helena summarised.
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I absolutely adore this story!
Now that you have gotten my hopes up Nesha I am so happy…please don’tplay with my emotions like other people who start seemingly hopeful Tibette stories only to have them suddenly turn into Belena stories…(you all know who you are). I wouldn’t be surprised if Helena was sending herself them envelopes just to get Bette’s attention. Don’t let Bette be blinded by lust. Thanks for posting.
Hey Nesha, I was about to put out another APB for you. Then, I thought I or someone would need to wrestle you into submission….like I did with Pandsy …..unfortunately she is a tough one and will not submit…..anyway, here you are!! Please don’t go away so long. With some of our old favs leaving, we need you to stay in the pocket…please. Does begging help? Ok, work excuses and doctor’s notes will be accepted !!Bette, chasing someone…interesting. Helena is a bit more athletically endowed (I am trying to get her arms). But, maybe it is Michellia’s story and Helena’s last little comment to Bette that have me thinking that Helena can catch bullets with her teeth
I’m here my dear. Agood writer never loses a good reader. One of each. Lust is a terrible thing,you lose all the good things and then the lust is gone. I love Tina and Bette together. But you all put more sex with Helena and Bette and it it HOT sex. Thanks for posting
Bfft, what kind of threator forgets to put the threat letter in the envelope? and on the wrong car! unless it’s meant for Bette, which throws me into more confusion…yeah, seriously, forget the sex…the letters! The letters!!! Well, you can add a bit of sex, too, if you want…and I pray sky’s prediction doesn’t come true :-X What else is waiting for Bette at Helena’s? besides Helena (heehee)
Oh, nooooooo ! That was far too short a chapter, Nesha ! You can’t do this to us ! Well, actually, you can…LOL ! So, that “really short guy or kid” could definitely be a woman… In fact, that’s my guess since I have no idea what guy could be stalking those girls. My bet is… It’s a jealous ex. Well, of course you don’t have to answer Nesha, I’m just trying to guess… Anyway, I really like the fact that you’re turning this story into a thriller…This is so inventive and so unexpected. I really want to know where you’re gonna take us… Oh, and Helena “holding three fingers in the air in a mock Scout’s honour” : how funny is that ? I loved it !Once again, it’s a very nice job ! Thanx Nesha.
Loved it girl, loved every word of it. Who is this guy, where are you taking us from here? I’m desperately awaiting the next chapter hun.
Hey Nesha-I just love the playful banter b/w Bette and Helena. And as long as you write chapters lie this expect that head of yours to get bigger and bigger b/c I’ll continue to be generous w/ the comments. So don’t keep me in suspense too long? Who was the guy dropping off the envelope at the car and why an empty envelope? What hints am i not getting? Don’t keep me waiting…..please!
Whew…. I’m glad I finally caught up with your story. I thought this was a loving, sexy story, now it’s a creepy weirdo filled, sexy, loving story. Awesome job! I’m sitting here reading this in my house–in the dark, and it’s giving me the creeps.
mmm I don’t think it’s Helena, this is more something crazy Tina would do. This chick is so disturbed lately she would do anything to scare everyone away that comes to close to Bette.Great chapter Nesh, keep them coming babes. And tag i’m it I know and i’m working on them, yes them both mine and Myrtibel’s story so you’re gouing to be tagged very soon LOL
Thanks for the great chapter Nesha, I wonder if Helena’s psycho could be friends with my psycho gunman..LOL
why is it that i always miss a chapter before i notice you updated. I think im out of the loop now hehehehe. I loved your story though girl. and i love where your taking it, but really though how can anyone be that close on bette and not get all hot and bothered. Bette should know that by now LOL
*deep breath* okay, I’m finally ready to accept Helena as the evil-doer if that is what you have planned…whatever your juices are telling you to write ;p
oh wow…IS it Helena, like everybody is saying? I didn’t notice it! *shrugs* :) this was another brilliant chapter Nesha, i can’t wait to see where you go with this. you ARE a great writer (and thanks for saying I am too, its very nice of you)and thus i WILL be coming back for more! loved the tenderness and the lil kisses even when they were stressed! thanks and hope you post soon
Way too short of a post but turning into a great mystery ala Michellia. Post soon and more and more sex
Who can it be and why…..?? Well Im just gona have to keep reading to find out aren’t I!!!!!! Loving your work babe xx
Now who could these letters come from? Is it Dylan? Or is it Danny? I guess I just how to wait and see….I love this story please continue as soon as possible…..
Great chapter Nesha, i don’t think it’s Helena either, it’s probably crazy Tina, or maybe Dylan or Danny yeah, not Helena though. Yres you’re right BeLena loving is just the best, and you write it so damn well, can’t wait for the next one! Cheers chick!
i read this one but i forgot to leave you a comment girl. now you know what i think of your writin youre just da bomb. loved this chapeter as much as i lovd all ur others.