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Soft Spoken (episode 6)
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Episode 6
Darkness filled the small cabin room. No illumination came from outside the foggy window glass. The only light was from a tiny reading lamp, positioned carefully on a compact wooden night stand beside the bed. The low tiled ceiling made the room look even smaller, despite the brightly colored walls and furniture. It was a calm, breezy night in Topanga Park. Because of the late hour, not even the animals were about, save for the nocturnal foxes and raccoons.
“BAM!”
“Dana, I swear to God, if you don’t shut that fucking game off…” And, of course, Alice and Dana.
“Ooh! Look, Al! I just got an extra 200 points!” Dana said excitedly.
“That’s wonderful, now turn it off.” Came the grumbled reply.
“But I’ve never gotten this far before.” Dana whined. “I’m almost to level 6!”
“Yeah, I’m sure that’s what you said the first time a girl put her hand down your pants, now shut it off, Fairbanks!”
“No!” Alice sat up in the bed, wincing from the pain in her side. Dana paused the hand held game and clasped it out of Alice’s reach, protectively.
“Give it.” Alice said, holding out her hand.
Dana shook her head. “No!”
“Dana…”
“Alice…”
“Hey! Don’t mock me, I’m in pain from that hike, I’m grumpy, and you’re keeping me awake with your crazy sound effects!”
“Well it’s not like I’m fucking you, you could fall asleep if you really wanted to.”
“Why do you always bring up sex?” The blonde wondered aloud.
“Because I want you.” Dana replied sarcastically, un-pausing the game.
“Ah ha, I knew it. Now give the mother fucking game.”
“Oh-ho! Level 7, bitch!”
“I’m dealing with a 6 year old.” Muttered Alice, tossing the sheets off herself with aggravation. She crawled over to Dana’s side of the bed and straddled her. “Mkay, you wanna play a game? We’ll play a game.” She placed her hand inside Dana’s upper thigh with a smirk. “Are you nervous yet?”
“That’s not going to work, Al. Maybe 4 years ago when I thought you were cute, but now I know better.”
“Oh, you’re hilarious.” She rolled her eyes at the tennis player, who was still staring down at the game’s screen. “What are you playing, anyways? Battle Pong?” She shifted to sit next to Dana against the headboard.
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I agree with jb on this one—-it’s always hard to tell someone you like them, especially if they’re a close friend (hehe…kinda going thru that right now myself) but Alice should tell Dana and Shane needs to stop interrupting!! LOL! Ready and waiting for the next one!
pac-man??? that’s too funny. thank you for not picking some current video game. it’s just so perfect that it was something old school. loved the update and looking forward to the next.
Yes! Take action Alice! Great update. I really enjoyed it. I loved the interaction “in bed.” You wrote it very well. I can’t wait for more.
hahaha! u keep coming up with some of the best lines and material for alice and dana. the whole video game scene in the beginning was just classic! i like how u keep alternating POV’s. can’t wait for another chapter. awesome work!
Come on Alice!! she needs to get more confidence. I need to know what happens!! AHHHHHH Be brave Alice!!
I love this story. I hope that you will continue soon
SHane is absolutely right. That is why the call her Yoda, right ? It’s always awkward to be the first one to tell someone that you have more than just “frienship” feelings for them. You take the risk of losing that friend if they don’t feel the same way. I totally understand Alice’s fear. But they are so damn cute together! I mean, when they are playing Pac Man on the bed, how fucking adorable are they ? You got get these two hooked up soon.
Great update, I so love the interaction between Alice and Dana. And Shane is just to funny and very Yoda like…haha. Looking forward to the next chapter especially if you promise happy Danish. See ya Dork!
Every time I see you’ve updated I get this huge smile on my face, ’cause I know I’ll be laughing. :D I love their banter in this story. Best line this chapter: “Yeah, I’m sure that’s what you said the first time a girl put her hand down your pants, now shut it off, Fairbanks!” lmao Thanks for Yoda to put some presusure on to Alice…so next chapter they will know about their mutual feelings AND act on it. That’s what you promised. :P
go shane can’t wait to see what will happen next please post soon I love it great update
Sweet, two posts in the same week and the best way to end the night! Still funny as hell and it’s hard to believe that you didn’t put them together after how far they got in the last one, but I can’t wait to read what’s next since you hinted that Dana and Alice will be doing something in bed other than playing Pacman:D(I know that didn’t sound right.) Awsome post dork, please continue soon!
God I fucking love this story! This chapter was awesome, even though it was just filler. You still made me laugh my ass off! Now get our girls together, and I might update my story for ya! ;-)
Great Chapter! Loved the bit where shane came in the room and al and dane thought she was scary, made me laugh! Hopefully alice and dana will get it on very soon! Keep up the great work!