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The Anticipation of Touch…
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Bette planted her hands either side, giving stability to her glowing body, her eyes were black with desire and intensity as they travelled over the creamy expanse before her.
She licked her lips in anticipation as her vision was drawn further down, further down along the gracefulness, and further past, to the creamy curves she loved so much.
She placed her lips along the sexy column of flesh, the neck that was exposed to her lips as the blonde mane pressed deeply into the silkiness of the midnight blue pillow, the blonde hair splayed gracefully around the flushed cheeks, the tell tale flushed skin of arousal covering Tina’s neck and chest, her tongue travelling along the pulsating blueness of the gracefully elongated neck, exposed to devour, exposed to touch and taste.
Her parted lips taunted Bette, the ragged breathing escaping as her body responded, she took a moment to take in the complete and utter beauty and vulnerability of a woman in a complete state of sexual abandon, added to this fact that you were completely head over heels in love with that woman and it brought such a unique feeling to Bette’s head and heart that she would never quite get enough of that rush that she felt at the intensity of being so in love.
Her thoughts were interrupted by the slight moan coming from the parted lips, a wry smile gracing her face as her fingers hovered over the rosy pink nipple, never quite touching, but watching in amazement as the puckering skin reacted to the anticipation of touch.
The minds state of arousal overtaking the physical touch, the anticipation of a kiss, of a touch arousing the mind, the mind arousing the body, the peak of Tina’s nipple rising to meet the gentle fingertip hovering above, the merest touch of electricity travelling through her body, the touch on her nipple affecting her mind, affecting her breathing, affecting the moisture building within her, the touch causing the intense ache, the passionate pain of arousal.
Bette’s warm moist lips circled the aroused nipple, the tight skin softening in the warmth, the peak hardening between the pearly white enamel, gently grating over the skin, pulling, teasing, tasting.
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Well you`ve done it again….sent that cold shiver down through me with yet another Sensual, Erotic chapter,looking into the lives of Bette and Tina….and nobody does it quite like you can!….The flow of this is breathtaking, and awesome as always….
Damn girl…I am sitting here sweating…that was hot! How do you feel when you are writing it? I mean being the writer and all does it affect you the way it affects us? I am curious. I mean do you start writing then have to pause and like take a shower before you continue? Damn!
FLG…..thats all I can muster up to write….
you know, sometimes i try to replace B&T names with others on the show but the story, no matter how hot and sexy it is, never works with anyone else, especially when B&T involved with somebody else…i don’t know why, sex is sex but not for me, as you said, it’s about two people in love having sex, and for me i guess there’s only Bette and Tina, but my name says it all anyway LOL…thank you
I agree with you BetteandTinaForever..you can’t put this scenerio with anyone else…and that’s the effect Ilene knew she was doing in season 1…I think she knew we would see them as THE COUPLE…now why she shot it to hell is totally beyond me.
I’m not sure if I’ve said it before, but I’ve read lots (and I mean LOTS) of erotic stories over the past year or so. Some of them were quite hot, some quite sweet, and some quite heart-wrenching. But if you put B&T in them all they would be that much better. This is one of the most erotic things I’ve ever read and 1.) it wasn’t even that long and, 2.) nothing really graphic was mentioned. I think the Cold Shower Award should be renamed the Jobadge Award.
I’m with Bette& Tina forever. Another name does sound right with either one of them. Thanks for Post ing thanks
Just to say that i agree with lamentamini regarding the renaming of the Cold Shower Award… or the Dozen Red Roses Award for that matter!!! Thanks for this, Jo! Now, how about “The Anticipation of Jobadge’s new post”… cause that’s quite something too! ;)
Damn Jo! I go from pancha’s story to yours and now I may have to excuse myself for a short while. Yes, yes, give her an award, just don’t let her stop writing.
hotttttttttttttttttttttt longer
Not only was that hot and very erotic it was also peaceful and hauntingly (I don’t think that this is a word, but what the heck I like it) calming. Two special people in love with each other and the ability to honor and worship the other’s body like no other ever could.
As the song goes,”Nobody Does It Better” than you Jo. Your phrasing, imagery and feeling just make it unforgettable. NC-17s are tricky to write. They can be crude, trite and even boring. Hard to believe! But yours are the perfect combination of love and lust.
u too bad girl….lol….love and sx as B&TF says do it for me and no matter how good the writing if its not B with T it just doesn’t have the same emotional affect…sexy without love…is the end result…now ‘sexy in love’ is something else…
OMFG…..what are you trying to do girl, kill me???????
Damn that was so freaking hot and awesome, love it. Thanks for this wonderful story!!!!!!!!!!!!
you are right: to people in love having sex. you writted in a wonderful way, waoooo you doing great!
Oh my my! That was quite something Jo. The writing is just awesome! Only you can do it!
So, so hot! I love how you make these stories so vivid! I’m not at work, so I can do what I want after reading this! Give us another, soon, please!