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TO FORGET part6
Carmen:….. Shane…
Shane: all this time and you were fucking my brother….
Sean: no! Shane this..
Shane: save it (and started going away)
Carmen: wait Shane! ( got up, found a t-shirt to put on and went for Shane)
OUT SIDE
Carmen: Shane wait up ! (they were now on the middle of the streets)
Shane: for what huh?….. I cant believe you….my brother?
Carmen: Shane me and Sean were just….
Shane: having sex!, Fucking!…… So is this revenge huh? You’re getting back at me? It’s that it?
Carmen: what? No! I’m not like that and you know it!
Shane: I don’t! I don’t fucking know you. You did it once before but this time you went too far. You’re a fucking whore …(and with that Carmen slapped Shane)
Carmen: (started crying) don’t you fucking talk to me like that! Don’t….and don’t give me the victim crap. You know what?….. I shouldn’t have to explain myself to you …you broke it up a long time ago. You cheated on me and left me on the fucking altar and I’m still here… I still love you so fucking much.
Shane: you love me so much you had to fuck my brother?
Carmen: (it started to rain)I slept with your brother because we made each other feel good, we were in hell but we had each other…..i though he could make me forget about you, forget how much you hurt me , how much I love you…but you know what ? It didn’t. At some point I slept with him because you guys looked a lot like each other….. And fuck, I missed you.
Shane: I’m gonna go …. (got in the car and drove away leaving Carmen on the floor of the streets crying)
At Shane’s
(Shane was on the couch crying watching the tape Mark gave her about Carmen and her confessing their love. Then she heards a knock on the front door. She got up and opened the door to see who it was. It was Sean)
Shane: get the fuck out
Sean: no! You fuck off. We need to talk
Shane: I saw what I needed to see… we don’t need to talk
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Just have to tell you I can’t get this damn story out of my head. Thank you for updating. Apologies all around for Shane and Carmen. Hoping for a happy ending.
well thank you. Im hoping for a happy ending but…. i dont know
you got me hooked with all the drama and all but as much as i love happy endings…and i LOVE happy endings…to forgive that easily…feels cheap…But u got me hooked looking forward to the next installment
This crazy drama has my head in knots; the world is upsidedown. First, you have Sean and Carmen, who are obviously attracted to each other. That, itself, is something to boggle the mind, because Carmen is gay (she “LOVES twat”), yet she kisses, sleeps with, and openly checks out a dude. Added to that is the fact that Sean is Shane’s brother (maaaajor code break, right there). Then, there’s the biggie: Sean and Carmen had somewhat of a sexual relationship as well as an emotional one. The “friends with benefits” situation only works when there’s no actual friendship there (like there is with Carmen and Sean), only mutual physical attraction and convenience. If there’s anything more solid than that superficial convenience, then there’s danger that it could develop (if it hasn’t already) into something more for one or both of them. At least that’s what I have learned from my and others’ experience; it doesn’t necessarily haaave to apply to this story. Anywho, this story has broken some big rules. But you know what? Rules were meant to be broken (hells yeah!), so you can keep doing what you’re doing–it’s your vision–and I’ll keep reading (I just have to adjust my mind a little before each update. LOL!). …Still there? I hear crickets.
a think when you’re atracted to someone you cant really control yourself so yea….but i love drama lol