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TO FORGET part6
Shane: Are you attracted to her?
Sean: fuck Shane you’re not going to let it go… she is hot you know that but, that’s it she’s my friend
Shane: a friend who you fuck
Sean: yes I did fuck her …..You of all people should know how it’s like to fuck someone and have no feelings towards her…just to feel something. And do I need to remind you, you fucked two of my girlfriends in the past?
Shane: you didn’t love them
Sean: well yea… but still I forgave you…. Can we just get back to the way we use to?
Shane: it’s never going to be the same. You fucked the woman I love
Sean: ( he was silent for a wile)..I’m sorry
Shane: I have to do something
Sean: what?
Shane: stand up
Sean: um… ok ( he stood and Shane punched him on the face) FUCK!!!!!
Shane: I needed to do that
Sean: ..That hurt ….
Shane: Good ( she sat again) I forgive you…it’s going to take time to get use to the fact that you fucked Carmen, but… you’re my family and well I was in that same position with Jenny but… she forgave me
Sean: thanks’(sat with her sister)…Um… what are you going to do about Carmen?
Shane: nothing
Sean: oh no ! You’re going to do something alright. You have to talk to her. Start again .. But really slow this time.
Shane: I don’t know if she would like to be with me again
Sean: for Christ sake Shane!! SHE LOVES YOUUUUUUU
Shane: ok ok …I guess I will then
Sean: will what?
Shane: talk to her
Sean: ok….( they staid like that for a second until Sean grab Shane and pulled her for a hug) I love you
Shane: I love you to, just… promise me you will not fuck Carmen again
Sean: I promise….( they stayed like that until they fell asleep)
MORNING
(Sean woke up and Shane wasn’t there , but he saw a note on the table that said “at Carmen’s”. He smiled and went to look for Jenny)
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Just have to tell you I can’t get this damn story out of my head. Thank you for updating. Apologies all around for Shane and Carmen. Hoping for a happy ending.
well thank you. Im hoping for a happy ending but…. i dont know
you got me hooked with all the drama and all but as much as i love happy endings…and i LOVE happy endings…to forgive that easily…feels cheap…But u got me hooked looking forward to the next installment
This crazy drama has my head in knots; the world is upsidedown. First, you have Sean and Carmen, who are obviously attracted to each other. That, itself, is something to boggle the mind, because Carmen is gay (she “LOVES twat”), yet she kisses, sleeps with, and openly checks out a dude. Added to that is the fact that Sean is Shane’s brother (maaaajor code break, right there). Then, there’s the biggie: Sean and Carmen had somewhat of a sexual relationship as well as an emotional one. The “friends with benefits” situation only works when there’s no actual friendship there (like there is with Carmen and Sean), only mutual physical attraction and convenience. If there’s anything more solid than that superficial convenience, then there’s danger that it could develop (if it hasn’t already) into something more for one or both of them. At least that’s what I have learned from my and others’ experience; it doesn’t necessarily haaave to apply to this story. Anywho, this story has broken some big rules. But you know what? Rules were meant to be broken (hells yeah!), so you can keep doing what you’re doing–it’s your vision–and I’ll keep reading (I just have to adjust my mind a little before each update. LOL!). …Still there? I hear crickets.
a think when you’re atracted to someone you cant really control yourself so yea….but i love drama lol