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You (Part the Sixth)
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“Come on, Dana. There’s no way in hell I’m letting you drive yourself. I won’t even go in, okay? I’ll just drop you off and wait out front or something,” Alice called to Dana’s back, which was making its way to Dana’s car despite all the protests currently being directed at it. “Damn it, Fairbanks, get your ass in this car right now or I’m calling Lara and telling her to cut you off permanently!”
At this, Dana finally turned around to look at Alice, whose bedhead was completely out of control given that it was only a little after 8am. “That wouldn’t matter. We barely have sex anyway…and now that I think about it, how the hell did you know when I was going to be leaving today anyway?” She raised an eyebrow suspiciously when Alice ducked her head, looking embarrassed. “What, are you calling my doctors behind my back now?” She knew it sounded ludicrous, but in the back of her mind she had to admit that she didn’t really put anything past Alice anymore. Which really sucked when she thought about it.
“Jesus, Dana. No, I didn’t call your doctor…and even if I had, if he’d told me that’d be the basis for the lawsuit of the century. Get in the fucking car, will you? Your neighbors can’t be enjoying this kind of wakeup call.” Smiling at the sight of Dana reluctantly turning and heading for the Mini, Alice leaned over and threw the passenger door open, nearly knocking Dana down in the process. She got a look for it, but instead of the lecture she’d been expecting, Dana just gave her a little smile, the first one in quite awhile.
“Lara called me,” Alice told her by way of explanation as they got on the road. “She said that you wouldn’t let her take you, and she was worried about you driving over there and back. So I told her that I could sacrifice an hour or so of sleep to make sure you didn’t kill yourself.”
“Lara did that? I thought she was mad at me,” Dana murmured, surprised. She and Lara had really gotten into it the night before. Almost broken up, in fact, and Lara’d ended up sleeping on the couch. And apparently calling Alice.
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Yay for your update, you are such a talented writer! I remain amazed at how well this synthesizes with what we saw on screen and enjoy reading your takes on everything via the behind-the-scenes type thoughts and happenings between Dana, Alice, and Lara. Can we get all this as the deleted scenes on the S3 deluxe DVD set? LOL. Would be nice, huh? The phone calls and interactions between Alice and Lara? Awesome. Because they underscore the depth of the situation. And Dana needing to let it all out with Alice? Just goes to show that the ‘Danish’ bond is a force to be reckoned with. I like that you are portraying all three girls as honest, caring, also confused, and…in the end, respectful of each other’s feelings. If I can’t get ‘Lard’, I’ll take respect;) And the goodbye sex idea was spot-on. I kinda thought that (sadly) on the show too, but how you worded it here was really nicely done. It’s all very very sad, but that makes for a great read. Thank you for making Lara an astute and loving girlfriend, not just some docile plot device, even if it spells the end. Anxiously awaiting your next updates…..
wow that was a good chapter!!!! i loved it!!!! I cant believe you didnt think you were a great writer your awesome
A raspberry Danish sounds really good. Although…any kind of Danish is good :)I’m really going to have to investigate this Easter Peep thing a little further. I’ll have to look at some clips or screencaps or something. So glad that you’re going to change the ending! This was a great update. It was very emotional. I think that this was much more realistic than the actual season 3…Dana needing comfort from Alice. Very true to the characters. Very nice. “Nothing can defeat the Danish!” Okay…I’ll stop now. Great job. I really loved it, and can’t wait for more. You’re a wonderful writer.
I so love your take on S3!! :hugs: I totally agree with Mineralka. This story of yours explains a lot, the little looks Lara and Alice were exchanging Dana told the gang she was going to have a ‘little’ operation, Dana crying during that horrible sex-scene with Lara. It has been discussed many times on the mediablvd-board. And although I do get the purpose of that scene…it’s not one of my favorite scenes of S3. I like you’re little twist on explaining Dana’s crying. And Dana showing up at Alice’s door…it all could have been. :S I’m wondering where you are going to take this story. There are a few more eppis left to which you could synchronize your own storyline and then you’re on your own…well, sort of speak ofcourse. :D
amazing. that was truly great. i’ve been following tis story and i love it. i jst hope it turns ot better than IC did lol…keepit up :) pms
Babe,im fucking amazed how well you are writing this,i mean omg you are totally awsome!!!!! Im glad lara and al are talking through this,and its sad lara knows where this is headed.Cant wait untill we are gone from this stinking town, together we will rock LA! Love ya too babe!!! p.s Did i say your doing a excellent job at writing this? HA PPS
Thank you Dr. Tempest. I feel much better now.
Very nice…this is great…keep it up!