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Collision Course 4.20
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Collision Course 4.20
“What are we doing here?” asked Sam, looking around the very quant restaurant, feeling very out of place. When was the last time she’d been on an actual date? Before Jesse’d been born, she was sure. As the thought struck her, her face turned sad, and Carmen saw it.
“Thinking of him? Or of her?” asked Carmen, smiling at the waitress, and old friend of Carmen’s. “That’s Izzy.” Izzy was a tall dark haired woman, with clear blue eyes, and a set of legs that Sam was sure went on for days.
“About Jess,” admitted Sam with some reluctance. “Izzy, an old flame?” asked Sam, rubbing her hands on her pants. Nervous, she was so nervous that she was sure her feet were sweating. Her hands kept shaking almost uncontrollably.
“No, a friend,” stated Carmen, her full lips in a wide brilliant smile. “Izzy, have that table yet?”
“Coming right up, on the patio, per the ladies request. You must be one special chica…,” added Izzy, winking at Sam.
“Am I a special chica?” laughed Sam oddly, feeling the blush rising on her cheeks. “Special basket case is more like it….”
“Quit that!” said Carmen, playfully slapping Sam’s hand. “You know, you put yourself down a lot?” Carmen stepped closer to Sam, and Sam felt a sharp breath being taken in by Carmen.
“Is that what this is? You wanna fix me, chica?” asked Sam, her eyebrows shooting up in question. Her body pressing closer to Carmen, who seemed to blush brightly. “Maybe I don’t wanna be fixed, Carm. Maybe I like being sad and sullen.”
“I think,” began Carmen, facing Sam, looking down at the tussled haired woman, “…that you are as close to perfect as you can manage, scars, broken hearts and losses all put together, that you’re sweeter than half the women I’ve ever dated.”
“Including Shane?”
Carmen pressed her lips together in anger, sighing very deeply, “I thought we weren’t going to mention her?” said Carmen with reproach, keeping her voice very even.
“You said…” began Sam, but Izzy was back, leading them quickly to their table. Sam licked her lips, trying, with desperation, to stop trying to put a stick of TNT into this date.
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Wow…Bette said a mouthful…so I guess this isn’t a Tibette story huh? It was still written wonderfully. Now Tina can carry on with Henry or whoever. Has Bette fallen for Jo? Will this be BettyJo? jobette? Please post soon.
Well at least Tina now knows where she stands…Bette made it indeed very clear, and that’s good for her! Don’t think a relationship will grow out of Sam and Carmen…thank god!;) Can’t picture those to as an item, but in Janet-Marieland, anything can happen, so I’m just going with the flow. Alice is going to have an interesting night with miss-top-of-the-chart. Wonder how that’s gonna play out. Great update, most more soon.
Love the way you do math, Can you count me assay 5 people? I like it enough for that many. Bette got a lot off her mind in a few words. Tina was to late. Now she can go do what when and with whom she wants. She let go the best. Get so rest girl. Thanks bvh
Some rest.
Ok…I liked the Bette/Jo installment…I like how much more lighthearted Bette seemed. As for Sam and Carmen…I just don’t see it. I still like Shane with Sam :). As for Rosita and Alice–so cute.
you did the math and guess what? I didn’t do so good at the math section just the written…I should have commented on the last chapter..but I …was lazy..THERE I SAID IT! BUT that doesn’t take away from how great that chappy was..and how great this chappy is…ok? I think the great big Diff with Bette and Tina..is that Bette is pretty damn clear of her wants..thank you for that! ok Post again please!
Thaaaaaaaaank you for not putting Bette and Tina in a mosh pit of relationships past. Phew. Great post. This is one hell of a hanger, Rogue. And while you leave us hangin’ ’til Sunday, may I ask about your plans for Shane? Right now, she’s all alone and has no food. LMAO. Maybe she needs to go back on the prowl, monogamy ain’t for everyone. By the way, I’m enjoying the JoBette plot line so far. Bette can finally stop being an apologetic punching bag for Tina. Speaking of Tina, she totally deserved Bette’s words.Okay now, for Carmen and Sam. Ay dios! Well, I like that Sam is playing ‘ship bomber but it’s like a ‘Shane 2.0’ but with good upgrades (i.e Money, Job, Food, LMAO). Carmen has to see the similarities. Or Carmen needs to sort herself out with Shane.Alice and Rosita are well, cute. Rosita has lost the ‘heat’ that being unattainable gave her. Now she’s just warm. Why does Alice always end up with the warm ….hssh I don’t wanna say chicken but yeah, chicken.LOL, btw chicken is not a comment on Rosita, ’cause I feel she made the right choice to back down on Sex Prowlin’ Maniac route a la Shane. It would’ve been childish if she kept on. Besides, Rosita had a motive for being a nympho. I don’t think Shane does, except maybe fear, and that’s why it suits her. I mean hello…her life is empty, just like her fridge, but unlike her heart. And she can’t deal, so she screws around and that leads to more emptiness. Viscious cycle? Hell yeah!My, my, Rogue, you are evil. But I love you anyway. *Wicked grin*Waiting patiently…
HA! HA! Tina, take that! Bette told her. Wonder whats in store for Al & Ro. Luvin’ the chap.
Virgin commentor here but had to do so to improve the stats! Great story, colourful characters (your own) and timely updates..cant get better than that
Sam looks like she’s in for quite a ride… Oh, Tina. Tina, Tina, Tina. You snooze, you lose. Bette’s out of your reach. Forever.(?) Move on, T. You’re good at it. Now, with *that* said… It is HIGH time Alice got some. Keep em comin, J!
I can’t decide if it is a good thing to read one of your chapters before going off to work…or if I should have waited til later! LOL Thanks J!