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“I thought we’d dance, then f… eat.. yeah, eat…,” corrected Alice, her hands waving, flustered and just insane at the thought that she finally had Rosita Navarro all to herself.
“You were gonna say fuck,” said Rosita over the loud music.
“I wasn’t!”
“You were!”
“Ok, I was! It’s just that you’ve, well, been around!”
“I have a lotta catching up to do, do you really wanna dance?” asked Rosita, grabbing Alice into a half hug. “Or do you wanna do something else? You are having doubts, bella.”
“I don’t know, I just thought this was in your element,” said Alice defensively.
Rosita looked around again, lips curling into a half smile, “Yeah, maybe it was….” Taking Alice’s hand, Rosita led her back to the door, a nod to the man guarding the door, and Rosita led Alice back to her car. “Follow me,” said Rosita, a simple nudge of her head and Alice smiled at the mischievous look on Rosita’s very beautiful face.
Alice got into her Mini and watched Rosita sliding into the tricked out Honda, wondering where she was bringing her. Twenty five minutes later, Alice knew. They arrived a hulking apartment building, with what looked like a two door garage gracing the bottom floor. Stepping out of the car, Rosita’s hair was loose, her thumb hooked and pointing to the apartment building. “Home.”
“This is where you live?” asked Alice, closing the door of her car, and putting on the security system. Looking around as if she had just landed on another planet, and not having driven into Rosita’s beloved Barrio.
“Si, and Carmen is out all night, so… come on. I ordered some food while we drove here, it should be here in a little bit.”
“You ordered food? How presumptuous of you,” said Alice sarcastically, but feeling light headed at this woman who was taking charge, yet didn’t seem to let you think she was taking charge.
“I have that habit, come on bella, welcome to my humble abode,” smiled Rosita, her hand reaching out to Alice, hand curled, relaxed, waiting for Alice to take her hand. Alice looked at it, inviting, open, easy….
Alice grinned, feeling alive again after a long absences from the feeling, since the day Dana’s died, reaching out, taking the hand that was offered. Silken fingers wrapped around Alice’s fingers and tugged gently. Alice beamed and disappeared into the building with a very willing and sexy Rosita Navarro.
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Wow…Bette said a mouthful…so I guess this isn’t a Tibette story huh? It was still written wonderfully. Now Tina can carry on with Henry or whoever. Has Bette fallen for Jo? Will this be BettyJo? jobette? Please post soon.
Well at least Tina now knows where she stands…Bette made it indeed very clear, and that’s good for her! Don’t think a relationship will grow out of Sam and Carmen…thank god!;) Can’t picture those to as an item, but in Janet-Marieland, anything can happen, so I’m just going with the flow. Alice is going to have an interesting night with miss-top-of-the-chart. Wonder how that’s gonna play out. Great update, most more soon.
Love the way you do math, Can you count me assay 5 people? I like it enough for that many. Bette got a lot off her mind in a few words. Tina was to late. Now she can go do what when and with whom she wants. She let go the best. Get so rest girl. Thanks bvh
Some rest.
Ok…I liked the Bette/Jo installment…I like how much more lighthearted Bette seemed. As for Sam and Carmen…I just don’t see it. I still like Shane with Sam :). As for Rosita and Alice–so cute.
you did the math and guess what? I didn’t do so good at the math section just the written…I should have commented on the last chapter..but I …was lazy..THERE I SAID IT! BUT that doesn’t take away from how great that chappy was..and how great this chappy is…ok? I think the great big Diff with Bette and Tina..is that Bette is pretty damn clear of her wants..thank you for that! ok Post again please!
Thaaaaaaaaank you for not putting Bette and Tina in a mosh pit of relationships past. Phew. Great post. This is one hell of a hanger, Rogue. And while you leave us hangin’ ’til Sunday, may I ask about your plans for Shane? Right now, she’s all alone and has no food. LMAO. Maybe she needs to go back on the prowl, monogamy ain’t for everyone. By the way, I’m enjoying the JoBette plot line so far. Bette can finally stop being an apologetic punching bag for Tina. Speaking of Tina, she totally deserved Bette’s words.Okay now, for Carmen and Sam. Ay dios! Well, I like that Sam is playing ‘ship bomber but it’s like a ‘Shane 2.0’ but with good upgrades (i.e Money, Job, Food, LMAO). Carmen has to see the similarities. Or Carmen needs to sort herself out with Shane.Alice and Rosita are well, cute. Rosita has lost the ‘heat’ that being unattainable gave her. Now she’s just warm. Why does Alice always end up with the warm ….hssh I don’t wanna say chicken but yeah, chicken.LOL, btw chicken is not a comment on Rosita, ’cause I feel she made the right choice to back down on Sex Prowlin’ Maniac route a la Shane. It would’ve been childish if she kept on. Besides, Rosita had a motive for being a nympho. I don’t think Shane does, except maybe fear, and that’s why it suits her. I mean hello…her life is empty, just like her fridge, but unlike her heart. And she can’t deal, so she screws around and that leads to more emptiness. Viscious cycle? Hell yeah!My, my, Rogue, you are evil. But I love you anyway. *Wicked grin*Waiting patiently…
HA! HA! Tina, take that! Bette told her. Wonder whats in store for Al & Ro. Luvin’ the chap.
Virgin commentor here but had to do so to improve the stats! Great story, colourful characters (your own) and timely updates..cant get better than that
Sam looks like she’s in for quite a ride… Oh, Tina. Tina, Tina, Tina. You snooze, you lose. Bette’s out of your reach. Forever.(?) Move on, T. You’re good at it. Now, with *that* said… It is HIGH time Alice got some. Keep em comin, J!
I can’t decide if it is a good thing to read one of your chapters before going off to work…or if I should have waited til later! LOL Thanks J!