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    Hidden Secrets pt.8 A

    Story written on November 10, 2006 by lrowen69.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=63169
    Author Notes:

    almost 2 days later… enjoy

    Previously

    When Shane came back into the room.. everyone notice her shaking and how her skin turned from its normal peach color to being white as a ghost..

    "Shane are you feeling OK" Carmen asked touching Shane’s cheek only to pull it away after feeling how hot she was "god Shane your burning up.."

    "I’m fine" Shane said… it was a reflex and she knew no one believed her…

    "Shane.. i think we should be getting you back to the center.." Katie said.. they had already stayed long then she had intended..

    "but…"

    "no ‘buts’ Shane… you need sleep and if I’m lucky I’ll still have a job tomorrow…" Katie ordered as she walked over and began to pull Shane out of the room..

    "fine.. by…" but before Shane could finish, her world flipped upside down and the last thing she heard was Carmen’s voice calling out her name before the lights went out….

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    Shane could hear the faint callings of her name but couldn’t place the voice… her head was throbbing… it felt like someone dropped a ton of bricks on her… her heart began to race and she couldn’t breathe…. then she felt it a hand on her chest.. shaking her..

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    Gasping for air, Shane woke up in a cold sweat.. she started freaking out… she didn’t know where she was or how she got there … the last thing she remembered was Carmen and the hospital… her vision was still blurry.. but she could see a figure sitting beside her… and then she heard it… that heavenly voice..

    "Shane, baby calm down.. are you okay" Carmen asked her voice thick with emotion… after Shane fainted at the hospital, Katie ran some test and realized her almost fatal mistake… Carmen, thanks to Dr. Peterson, was allowed to stay at the clinic with Shane until she woke up.. Shane had been asleep and running a fever for almost 2 days straight, but Carmen never left her side…

    "Car.." Shane’s voice cracked, her throat was dry and sore…

    "here.. drink this"Carmen said handing Shane an open bottle of water ..

    "what.. happened" she asked… as her vision cleared and realized she was back in her room at the clinic… she slowly propped her weak body up against the headboard..

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    1. Damn, girl . . . this was SHORT ~smirks~, but amazingly beautiful!!! I feel like a wuss usin’ those words, but fuck it, this was fan-fuckin’-tastic!! I love every word. So, please continue like NOW, cause I really, REALLY need my fix!! ROLMFAO!!! Ya’ got me hooked and I just want more!!! Anywhoo, I’m lovin’ this and like always from me, Baby-girl, LYLAS ;-p . . . HoLlA aT mE!!

    3. why do all writers think their stories are bad when they never are tho. but then i think the same of my poetry except don’t share that with others. i love your story think its great so don’t ever think its bad. someone told me once doesn’t really matter what other’s think anyways we do them for our selves. so anyways great story and thanks for sharing with us.

    5. LOVVVVVVVVVVE it but i do agree way too short. this fic is amazing and i cant wait for another post. you have shane and carmen down pat and i love reading this fic and the two of them are soooo in love its great. please post again soon this chapter was amazing short but amazing.

    6. Since it’s only part A of chapter 8, I won’t give you a hard time about the length of this update like komakino and dre2006 have (LOL! Kidding, you two! I know exactly where you’re coming from). Well, I’m glad Shane’s conscious again and can now continue working on getting clean. Go Shane! Yay Sharmen!

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