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Hidden Secrets pt.8 A
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She heard Carmen exhale a long relieved sigh.. "I’m so glad your awake…. you fainted at the hospital, almost 2 days ago…"
"2 days?" Shane asked rubbing her tired eyes…
"yes baby.. you’ve been unconscious for almost 2 days…. it turns out you’re severely allergic to those muscle relaxers you were taking to help with the tremors and shaking from withdraw… you went into shock and they had to pump your stomach at the hospital…" Carmen sniffed… she was trying not to cry but after 2 days of staying strong.. she couldn’t hold it in any longer and the tears began streaming down her face… "i thought I’d lost you" she whispered the last part… before breaking down completely…
Shane saw the first tear drop and quickly wiped it away with her thumb.. and pulled Carmen closer to her on the bed… "shh.. Carm… its OK… I’m not going anywhere.. i promise" she whispered softly into the Latinas ear… she slowly eased Carmen under the covers and held the young women as she sobbed all her frustration and worry away….
As sound of Carmen’s crying died down and her breathing became somber, Shane could tell her lover had fallen asleep… she still didn’t quite understand what had happened to her and had a lot of questions to ask… but at this point in time, she didn’t care… all that mattered to her was the beautiful women lying next to her…
After a few minutes of watching Carmen sleep, Shane slowly lowered herself from her position against the headboard and laid down next to Carmen… as she moved Carmen stirred a little in her sleep and cuddled further into Shane’s side… Shane smiled and softly curled the hair in Carmen’s face behind her ear… she watched Carmen sleep for a moment longer… memorizing every curve on her angelic face.. how her skin flushed to a reddish tint and her lips slightly trembled after crying and couldn’t help but notice how beautiful she looked…
Shane sighed contently.. knowing she would never let this women go and leaned over placing a soft kiss on her lovers lips before whispering "i love you" and snuggling closer to her… she closed her eyes and fell asleep almost instantly…
TBC
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Damn, girl . . . this was SHORT ~smirks~, but amazingly beautiful!!! I feel like a wuss usin’ those words, but fuck it, this was fan-fuckin’-tastic!! I love every word. So, please continue like NOW, cause I really, REALLY need my fix!! ROLMFAO!!! Ya’ got me hooked and I just want more!!! Anywhoo, I’m lovin’ this and like always from me, Baby-girl, LYLAS ;-p . . . HoLlA aT mE!!
good update! MORE PLEASE!!! I’m loving this story. :)
why do all writers think their stories are bad when they never are tho. but then i think the same of my poetry except don’t share that with others. i love your story think its great so don’t ever think its bad. someone told me once doesn’t really matter what other’s think anyways we do them for our selves. so anyways great story and thanks for sharing with us.
I like this story, but this is waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay too short !! Better bust yo’ ass over the week-end ! ;o)
LOVVVVVVVVVVE it but i do agree way too short. this fic is amazing and i cant wait for another post. you have shane and carmen down pat and i love reading this fic and the two of them are soooo in love its great. please post again soon this chapter was amazing short but amazing.
Since it’s only part A of chapter 8, I won’t give you a hard time about the length of this update like komakino and dre2006 have (LOL! Kidding, you two! I know exactly where you’re coming from). Well, I’m glad Shane’s conscious again and can now continue working on getting clean. Go Shane! Yay Sharmen!
awesome..please post soon