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    Scorpio Rising 4

    Story written on November 10, 2006 by New Dawn Fades.
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    This is what she does to me.

    Scorpio Rising 4

     

     

     

    Ch 5

     

     

     

     

     

    I’ve watched this scene a thousand times
    And in my head
    This is how it all begins
    Yes, I am becoming
    And this is how it all begins
    What did you expect?
    This is not an exit
    This has begun

     

     

     

     

     

     

    The water runs all over us. Over our bodies making the grasp slick, making our kisses wetter, making our moans primal. Two beings simply being. It’s a lot of ooh’s a whole lot of ahh’s and fucks, and gods, harder and right there, and yesyesyesyesyes, and more kisses, and scratches, faint drops of blood. A rebirth, most violent and true. And savage cause she is my beast. Wanton, feral, mine.

     

     

    Deep thoughts in my head words that are not mine not on the surface anyway. These are the things that she brings me out of me. Thoughts and possibilities, senses that run numb, she slays me with her laugh and her cry. I love her. I would die to save her. Bullets, fire, bludgeoning trauma: if it meant her over me I would gladly take my punishment so she can run.

     

     

    This is what she does to me.

     

     

     Thoughts better unsaid. Actions reactions that run true. Oh man do I love her. It’s the touch of her tongue, the feel of her breath. It’s this insane want to feel it through her. This idea that if we time it just right we can always come together. And the flip side of it. Getting there just before and watching, still, silent as it happens. Then the trigger in me, the flicker…… The transformation…weary exhausted knowing the awkwardness of the moment naked and the knock at the door. “Love birds let’s go already!”…Their words………..

     

     

    Her eyebrows, I love the soft hair of her eyebrows. The bridge of her nose. I love her tanned skin, I love most and maybe no one will ever believe giving her attributes, but I love her smile. When Carmen smiles I feel like I have my own personal solar system. I feel warm and in turn I smile. When she smiles the static in my head that constant dissonant buzz, that low grade hum….it’s gone. It was the kind of smile that made you feel like you wanted to pick flowers and have picnics in the park.

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    5. this is cute, sweet, cool, sexy, evrything!!!!!!!!!! and you words are so deep lol i love this fic I’ve told you that a 100 times this is my fave fic and still is love ittttttADICT

    6. What’s with Carmen and blue bikinis? ;) Anywho, I loved seeing Shane and Marco bond. . . hearing her teach him about the sun, sunrise, and nightmares (a demon she, herself, had to overcome). . . seeing her teach him self-reliance (by giving him a chance to open the fridge, letting him grab his own juice box, providing, not just comfort from his nightmares, but also a tool to use against them). In SR2 Shane spoke of teaching him “how to keep his head up. How you look people in the eye. How to be kind. I teach him respect; I talk to him about honor about love,” and with those very lines, my respect for Shane grew a ten-fold. She’s teaching him, building his character, and those are some of the greatest things a parent can ever do for a child. The tremendous love she has for this child is truly awesome–and I don’t mean it as in “cool” I mean it as in “overwhelming, virtuous, and mighty”. The rest of the update, like, the Carmen stuff, wasn’t too bad, I guess. Who am I kidding? It was a-fricken-mazing and pretty damn hot.

    8. They had alot more to process than I realized. You did a great job their talk and honesty. I feel like they can start over, however the past will always be there.

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