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    MYSTERY NEVER SOLVED part2

    Story written on November 10, 2006 by adicttosharmen.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=63176
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    “Fuck me Shane”…she wants me…that’s what I want…I love her

     

     

     

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    So I’m sitting here in my hotel room with a black eye looking at the fucking bag she left me that night. She wants me to find her, that much is for sure. But why?… why the fuck does a criminal wants the police to find him?… or maybe she just want me to find her… No!, Shane, get your self under control. I got use to say her name… her real name Carmen. I forgot about Eliza…. I think…… She deserves to go to jail. She lied to you, she fucking used you, and not to mention she Kills people for a living!!. She……. forget it….(Shane stood up and went to get a drink)

    I can’t believe she hit me…. And she hits hard by the way, ask my two partners, Jimmy and Pablo. They are a little embarrassed by that. She is good, I admit that, but at the same time I hate that. I hate that because, it means everything was a lie, that I never did Know her…. All that time we were toget-… STOP it , get back to the case. (She went back to her bed and sat down looking at the bag in front of her)

    I didn’t tell the guys about the bag. I will, it’s just that…I just have to find out what’s in it. So here I am again, looking at the fucking bag that I can’t open. Why I can’t I opened it? Shit I don’t know, just …. Well, I’m afraid of what’s in it…that bag can contain a lot of things…. But at the same time it can have nothing………. I’m so fucking lame, just open it you moron!!! (She grabbed the bag and opened it. She found some make up, a post card, a rose and a letter) a note huh? (se opened the letter and read)

     

    Dear Shane:

    I didn’t want this to happen. This is what I am, this is what I do and I can’t change that. I like to live on the edge. I wanted to tell you that, I never lied to you. I mean I did, BUt never aBoUt hoW I felt about you. The only thinkg I lied to you aBoUt was… well my joB and my name.. I hope you forgive me some day.

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    1. WOW I love your enthusiasm. Makes the story that much more yummy to read. The story is really good, I like the twisted heat you’re incorporating into it. The passion these two have for each other comes through very clearly. But the only thing I don’t like is how short this post was. Grr!…Okay kidding, but please post more. :)

    2. Damn, woman . . . this is da’ shit right hur!!! I really want more . . . it would be nice you could, ya’ know, give us a lil’ back story on the whole Carmen-Shane relationship. Like how they first met and stuff like that . . . well, anyways, this wuz fuckin’ awesome and I like soooooo want more!!! Like always from me, Baby-girl, LYLAS ;-p . . . HoLlA aT mE!!!!

    3. I don’t want to give it away just like that… I want mystery in this story … what you know you really don’t know for sure, and what’s for sure you really don’t know… So yea I’m going to give you details later but it takes time… I’m doing this, of kipping details from you guy’s on purpose so hold on that’s part of the mystery of the story…lol

    4. Wow, those last few moments were intense! Their hearts must be in a million pieces right now. Great update, loved seeing a glimpse of their past lives together and learning a tidbit about Carmen’s past.

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