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MYSTERY NEVER SOLVED part2
Oh and The rose is for you.
C
Don’t think about it that much, she is a living lie. Ok so maybe she does not want me to find her…. The rose…she ones told me that a red rose meant love and passion… sometimes forgiveness. Yes, I got a preview of her love right on my left black eye. So what else… the blank Scarface post card… Think!!! Scarface ok…Scarface…
<(flashback)>
(Carmen/Shane/Naked/holding each other/Bed/TV/Scarface)
“The first time I saw this movie I was so excited”
“Why?”
“I had a thing… well for action movies. Anything that had to do with blood.
“OK… that’s kind of psycho”
“yea well anyways, I was home alone and my parents got this new TV, so I put it really loud and .. it was just amazing.”
“ok Scarface fan, where did you lived?”
“LA, country club 43 street … a white and blue house… of course it’s a shit now, but it was home. Sometime I go there to relax… to look for answers, to see where I came from.”
<(end fachback)>
Country club 43 street… What do I got to lose right?… well maybe my life … what if she just wants to kill me… I’m bringing my gun just in case (she grabbed her keys and her jacket. When she opened the door , she found Pablo and Jimmy standing right in front of her)
“Um guys?”
“Look we were just wondering, if we could go to a bar or something tonight…?”
“um, yea. you guys go”
“Your not coming?”
“No, I’m going to take a drive around town”
“oh, ok . Well see you in the morning then”
“yea see ya’”
(The guys went away and Shane got in her car and droved to the house…….Later She arrived, the house looked abandon and it didn’t had any lights on) Just go in and … well check it out. (She got in the house and closed the door. She had her gun ready just in case. After a few minutes Carmen got out of her hiding place.)
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(30 votes, average: 3.33 out of 5)
WOW I love your enthusiasm. Makes the story that much more yummy to read. The story is really good, I like the twisted heat you’re incorporating into it. The passion these two have for each other comes through very clearly. But the only thing I don’t like is how short this post was. Grr!…Okay kidding, but please post more. :)
Damn, woman . . . this is da’ shit right hur!!! I really want more . . . it would be nice you could, ya’ know, give us a lil’ back story on the whole Carmen-Shane relationship. Like how they first met and stuff like that . . . well, anyways, this wuz fuckin’ awesome and I like soooooo want more!!! Like always from me, Baby-girl, LYLAS ;-p . . . HoLlA aT mE!!!!
I don’t want to give it away just like that… I want mystery in this story … what you know you really don’t know for sure, and what’s for sure you really don’t know… So yea I’m going to give you details later but it takes time… I’m doing this, of kipping details from you guy’s on purpose so hold on that’s part of the mystery of the story…lol
Wow, those last few moments were intense! Their hearts must be in a million pieces right now. Great update, loved seeing a glimpse of their past lives together and learning a tidbit about Carmen’s past.
im still hooked and i need more like RIGHT NOW!!!.. great update..
update now longer
yeah, great update. Love this fic and more on how they met. Please update very soon.