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Shane Awakes Chapter 10
Chapter 10
Alice slapped her magazine down on the table in frustration.
"Hello! McCutcheon, am I talking to myself here? Do you think you could hang with your best friend for like five minutes without getting distracted by some hot chick?" Alice whipped around to see who had stolen Shane’s attention so completely. "Oh my god! Carmen? Seriously Shane, you’re becoming such a lez.’ Alice stifled a laugh as Shane frowned and flipped her off.
Carmen sauntered over, Latte in hand, ‘Hey there ladies mind if I join you?"
Alice put down her coffee, "Uh, yes, actually I do."
Shane looked appalled, "Alice!"
Alice sat up straighter and pointed at Shane, "Don’t you Alice me, I haven’t seen you in forever. I demand a lunch with my best friend." She leveled her finger accusingly at Carmen, "And you, how the hell are we supposed to talk about you if you’re here? She can’t even form a coherent thought when you’re across the damn room."
Shane hid her face in her hands and shook her head.
Carmen laughed, "Fair enough, I’ll take my coffee to go. See you later baby." Carmen gave Shane a quick passionate kiss then snuck a peck on Alice’s cheek, "I’ll see you later too Alice."
Alice blushed visibly as Carmen walked away, eliciting a chuckle from Shane. Alice narrowed her eyes in Shane’s direction, "OK, I get why your brain stops functioning around her. But, come on, you’ve had ridiculously hot women before. What makes her different? Is she like the best you’ve ever had? Because, that would probably mean she’s the best period. Or at least on the West Coast. Tell me, what does she do that keeps the insatiable Shane McCutcheon coming back for more?"
Shane looked heavenward, and sighed. She leveled a steady gaze at Alice, "Al, have I ever, in the history of our friendship shared the intimate details of my sex life with you?"
Alice frowned, "No, and do have any idea how annoying that is? I mean I tell you all kinds of stuff."
Shane rolled her eyes, "Despite the fact that I never ask."
Alice continued to pout, "It’s not fair, you have this, like fountain of juicy sexy information in your brain, and it’s just sitting there. Wasting away." Alice’s face lit up, "You should tell me everything, every little detail about your entire sexual history and I’ll write a book! We’d make a fortune. Oh, I’ll call it the Lesbian Lothario finds Love. No, too cheesy. How about the Casanova of Cunnilingus? Too vulgar? Ohh I know, the Taming of Sappho : how one woman’s search for love took her to every bed in West Hollywood.
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ok wow great update and alice ya hilarious she kills me that girl. as for my carmen i think maybe overreacting a bit…. she just herard the story from the girls not her shane and besides it was just friendly behaviour with amy and is she wanted to sleep with her she would have left before going back to her friends with her……. plese please happy sharmena nd maybe a little make up sex wink wink…
Damn straight . . . well, you know what I mean ~smirks~. Carmen has a right to be mad . . . HOPEFULLY this is not what it seems, and Shane wasn’t making a fuck reservation with dis’ Amy chick . . . Anyways, Baby, this is awesome, but waaaaaaaaaaaaaay to short ;-p . . . I want more like NOW!! ROLMFAO!!! Like always from me, Baby-girl, LYLAS ;-p . . . HoLlA aT mE!!!! Stank . . . da one and only, chicka =D
“She couldn’t be Shane’s fool any longer.” Okay, those sound like daaangerous words. I understand that Carmen reacted in that way, it’s a very natural reaction and she certainly kept her cool for awhile, but it sounds like Carmen’s jumping to conclusions without talking with Shane first. The gang could be wrong. They might just have the wrong impression of Shane and Amy’s relationship. Maybe it’s just friendship. I love the drama, though. It’s spicy.
I’m very proud of Carmen, she didn’t blow up. She just walked away which was the safer choice. Great chap.
Hmmmm, I don’t know. I think sometimes my Alice sounds like Dana, like they’ve morphed into one person in my head. Anyone else agree? ~TeaP.S. Be honest, I can take it.
I love your story.
Hilarious Alice lines (‘specially the annoyed-at-Shane-not-telling-about-her-sex-life part), I don’t think your Alice & Dana have “merged” so much. Thanks for this chapter !
I love this story so much, really glad you have continued with it, such a long wait, pps.
I also don’t find that your Alice andDana overlap too much. Most friends who hang out regularly do sometimes say things that another friend would say. I think it happens to all of us. :o)I really like the story. I’m looking forward to the next installment.
GREAT!!! I rellay like the story, hope Shane hasnt been tired of Carmen already… Keep them together, a little dose of jealousy doesnt hurt thoug!!! PPS