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Shane Awakes Chapter 10
Shane was laughing uncontrollably at this point "You’re fucking crazy, you do know that right?"
Alice grinned, "Well, if you won’t tell me about the sex, at least tell me how it’s going."
Shane smiled, "Good, it’s going good."
Alice rolled her eyes, "Good? That’s it? That’s all you got? You’re dating someone for the first time in the seven years I’ve known you, and it’s just good?"
Shane shrugged, "OK, it’s really good. Is that better?" Shane smiled to herself, it was really good. She didn’t like to talk about it, or overthink it. But it was definitely good. Everything about it, about Carmen, about them together, was quite simply perfect. Carmen didn’t seem to have the insecurity that other girls had. She allowed Shane her space, and when they were together, there were no games. Carmen was real and warm and open, but she didn’t push. She was everything Shane wanted, without all the clingy, needy crap.
Alice shook her head, "You’re useless. That’s ok, it doesn’t matter. You don’t have to say a word. You’re head over heels in love. It’s written all over your face."
Shane choked a little on her coffee and eyed Alice with disapproval, "Alright Yoda, enough about me then, how’s it going with you and Dana?"
Alice smiled smugly, "It’s Good. Really good."
Shane smiled back, "Great."
They ate in silence for about a minute, until Alice could hold back no longer. Shane smiled knowingly as her friend let a month’s worth of anxiety and angst out in her direction.
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Later that night at the Planet, Carmen smiled as she sat at the booth where Alice, Dana, and Bette were seated, "It is alright if I join you isn’t it, Alice?"
Alice blushed, "Oh, of course. Sorry about earlier today. I was pretty rude, huh?"
Carmen grabbed Alice on the arm, "Oh no, I understand. I’m just teasing Alice, really. So, how was your lunch?"
Alice rolled her eyes, "Good I guess, though getting that girl to talk is like pulling teeth."
Carmen laughed, "Tell me something I don’t know."
Bette smiled, "well speak of the devil…"
Shane stood waiting for her beer as her eyes combed the crowd for her friends. She felt a tap on her shoulder and heard a voice whisper. "Hey there hot stuff." Shane turned around warily to find a heavily tattooed mohawked girl smiling at her. Shane grinned broadly. "Holy shit, what the hell are you doing here?" She grabbed the smaller girl into a bear hug and picked her up in the process.
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ok wow great update and alice ya hilarious she kills me that girl. as for my carmen i think maybe overreacting a bit…. she just herard the story from the girls not her shane and besides it was just friendly behaviour with amy and is she wanted to sleep with her she would have left before going back to her friends with her……. plese please happy sharmena nd maybe a little make up sex wink wink…
Damn straight . . . well, you know what I mean ~smirks~. Carmen has a right to be mad . . . HOPEFULLY this is not what it seems, and Shane wasn’t making a fuck reservation with dis’ Amy chick . . . Anyways, Baby, this is awesome, but waaaaaaaaaaaaaay to short ;-p . . . I want more like NOW!! ROLMFAO!!! Like always from me, Baby-girl, LYLAS ;-p . . . HoLlA aT mE!!!! Stank . . . da one and only, chicka =D
“She couldn’t be Shane’s fool any longer.” Okay, those sound like daaangerous words. I understand that Carmen reacted in that way, it’s a very natural reaction and she certainly kept her cool for awhile, but it sounds like Carmen’s jumping to conclusions without talking with Shane first. The gang could be wrong. They might just have the wrong impression of Shane and Amy’s relationship. Maybe it’s just friendship. I love the drama, though. It’s spicy.
I’m very proud of Carmen, she didn’t blow up. She just walked away which was the safer choice. Great chap.
Hmmmm, I don’t know. I think sometimes my Alice sounds like Dana, like they’ve morphed into one person in my head. Anyone else agree? ~TeaP.S. Be honest, I can take it.
I love your story.
Hilarious Alice lines (‘specially the annoyed-at-Shane-not-telling-about-her-sex-life part), I don’t think your Alice & Dana have “merged” so much. Thanks for this chapter !
I love this story so much, really glad you have continued with it, such a long wait, pps.
I also don’t find that your Alice andDana overlap too much. Most friends who hang out regularly do sometimes say things that another friend would say. I think it happens to all of us. :o)I really like the story. I’m looking forward to the next installment.
GREAT!!! I rellay like the story, hope Shane hasnt been tired of Carmen already… Keep them together, a little dose of jealousy doesnt hurt thoug!!! PPS